Training(p, me and oro)

Orokana sat down near a tree. She was slowly getting it but it didnt matter. If anything he would just fall asleep or read a book. It didnt matter to him . He watched the girl. She kept trying failure after failure . He thought about her. She didnt like to be told what to do and she was over confident. He should fix this now before something bad happens. But. Why should he. He didnt care about the girl too much. No that will be a lesson she will learn from he own experience

Chiyo made the handsigns again, the tempurature rising even more, and a few more trees bursting into flames. She noticed that oro was simply sitting near a tree and growled. "what the hell, oro!? Why are you just sitting there?!" She hated it when somebody underestimated her. It wasn't something most people were brave enough to do, though. She growled again, making the handsigns, the water nearby slowly begging to bubble under her increased efforts. Her delicate face was dripping with sweat, her once icy eyes now electric blue. Chiyo ripped off her clan jacket, the muscles in her arms flowing smoothly. Beneath was a slightly gothic, all black outfit. Her arms were wrapped with bandages. Chiyo was furiously making the handsigns over and over again now, her eyes narrowed. Her efforts were begging to grow, more and more trees bursting into flame, but the comet still did not come, nor did the water completely boil. She growled once more, this time in frustration. Nothing was going to stop her from mastering this genjutsu! Her wings had come out on their own under the strain. Black feathers fluttered to the ground around her as she doubled her efforts. Even if she dropped dead, she was going to prove oro wrong once and for all! Anger and frustration, determination, and need, all coursing through her veins. She needed to prove herself, needed to be stronger. She was a freaking clan leader! "Chiyo, you are one pathetic clan leader." She said to herself. That only angered her more as another tree sucumbed to flames.
wc:262
total wc: 393

he noted her dislike, and her facile expression. she looked more desperate by the minuet. he ignored her words and pulled out a book. starting to read. even if she did use the genjutsu he could simply expel it. he was leagues ahead of her. and he felt tired. he looked up at her. "if you dislike me so much then you can finish your lesson and then we don't need to meet anymore, like you said Austin is much 'better' then me in genjutsu" he knew she was wrong but having this constant class wouldn't be helpful for teaching. "if we are always at each others throats then your lessons wont be as great, due to you being difficult and me ignoring you." he said reading some more of his book. he was doing it again he noted, finding a way to push people away. well it didn't matter he was doing ok with how he works already.

“enough. i know people like you. im one of them. you push people away, afraid of getting hurt, do you not?” chiyo took a deep breath, telling herself she needed to focus. chiyo made the handsigns, calmer than before. the tempurature rose and the water began to boil, but the comet still would not appear. chiyo remained calm this time, undettered. she tried once more, to the same result. she sucked in a breath, but did not waver.

[wc: 77, total wc 470]

"no i push people away because i see people as a weakness, people are wild and unpredictable. theres no way to plan around them. they lie and cheat. i have been alone my whole life so i never knew the pain of it." he looked at her, then rolled his eyes. "plus vengeance will only lead you to death, or bitterness." he flip another page of his book.

"Some people may help though. You cannot be alone, nobody is truly alone. I have people I would die for, who would likely die for me too." Said Chiyo, her blue eyes narrowed. She hated people who thought like that, but what did it master if he was willing to train her in genjutsu? Chiyo made the handsigns once more, and this time a small comet appeared, though not much bigger than her own fist. Chiyo saw, and laughed. "Wow, is that really all I have? I better keep going..." Chiyo made the handsigns again, the water boiling fully now, though the comet stayed the size of a large fist. She took several calming breaths before trying again to the same result. Chiyo was panting and tired, though she was not going to give up.
wc: 135/1000
total wc: 605/1000

"i don't need a lecture on friendship, so far my life has been good." he looked at her. "have you tried having the mental image of the fireball in your head" he asked. "its better to think of what the jutsu will do then just trying to do it." he then looked back at his book and started reading it.

Chiyo ignored oro. She had been doing that already. Her delicate face was beaded with sweat at this point, but she didn't care. She tried again, closing her eyes and picturing it first. The comet appeared this time, much bigger than before. Chiyo opened her eyes and saw, but lost her concentration, and the genjutsu dissolved. "Did you see that?!" She asked oro, excited and newly invigorated. "I told you I could do it, you bastard!" She yelled at him excitedly. Her eyes were sparkling, and she was proud, but she didn't look smug, only happy. She tried again, this time trying desperately not to lose her concentration. And it worked.
wc:111
total wc: 716/1000

"hmm its getting there, if you do it and after you become genin I will teach you more, and take you out for noodles, which I don't think will happen" he went back to his book. his plan was working all right, give someone a reason to surpass you and they will, with orokanas put downs to chiyo she is trying he hardest to prove Orokana wrong.

"I'll have to pass on those noodles when I do become Genin. I have things to do. And I need to get a job so that I can stop sleeping in the forest.'' Chiyo looked at oro, and made the hand signs again. She didn't want his pity or anything, didn't need it. She concentrated and kept at it. Nothing was gonna stop her. Ever. No matter what she would get this.