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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Thu Jul 14, 2022 8:53 am
Name: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique
Element: Yin release
Rank: C
Specialty: Sensory
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory:
Typically, when the mind of a user of Yamanaka hiden techniques leaves their body to perform a technique, their body faints and they are only able to act on one target. This is not very effective in practice. This technique was developed by the Yamanaka clan to enable wielders of their hiden jutsu to be more useful in combat.

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Spoiler:
The user splits their own mind. This action alone is not detectable by Chakra Sensory techniques, as the cloned minds overlap in the user's body. When one or more branches of the user's consciousness leaves their body to advance towards a target, the clones are detectable in identical manner to the appearance of the particular technique that is used along with them.
Handseals: Monkey, Snake, Horse, Bird
Duration: Up to 4 posts
Cooldown: Posts used+1
Range: Self
Power: 20
Speed: 20
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:

This technique by itself is useless. The technique can only be used in tandem with other Hiden techniques of the Yamanaka clan that involves the transfer of the user's consciousness out of their body. Mind Clone Switch Technique may be used on the same turn as another technique, or in advance. In order to make the use of their hiden techniques more feasible, the Yamanaka clan developed the Mind Clone Switch Technique which enables its user to split their mind into two or more mind clones, thus allowing the user to cast their hiden techniques on multiple targets and retain a piece of their mind in their body to maintain their own consciousness within their original body while using them.

This technique can be used either with a single other Yamanaka hiden technique or with different techniques. If it is used with a single technique, the user may then pick an additional target for their technique per mind clone that the user has active. The user will not pay additional AP beyond the AP that was paid to make the clone and the AP for the technique in question, but should the technique have an upkeep cost, said cost will be doubled for the duration of the technique if the user attacks multiple targets simultaneously.

This technique can also be used to perform different hiden techniques with different minds. The user may use a different hiden technique per mind clone that is active, and pay the needed AP to perform the specific techniques as per normal and perform the necessary hand seals for the particular techniques in question one after the other, after paying the cost to create the clones.
A maximum of three 'minds' including the original may be sent into one target at a time. This will not add any additional power to the technique.

The number of mind clones that the user can create depends on the level of mastery that the user has over this technique. Without mastery, the user may create a single mind clone, allowing them to retain their consciousness when attacking a single target. At this stage, the user can also attack up to two targets at the same time in which case the user's body will lose consciousness. If this technique is mastered once, the user may create up to two clones. Finally, if this technique is mastered twice, the user may create up to five clones.



Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 1000
Action Cost: 20, +10 per additional clone beyond the first, +10 per additional turn (not per clone).
Mastery: Yes* (2nd Mastery requires Sixth Sense 1.1)
Bonus Requirements: Mind Body Switch Technique
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Hiden


Last edited by Saturn on Mon Jul 25, 2022 3:19 pm; edited 2 times in total
Kosuke Sashihara
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Health: 300 | AP: 1440
Vigor: 100 | Chakra: 150
Speed: 40 | Strength: 10

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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Re: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Wed Jul 20, 2022 10:45 pm
I'll be your trial approver for your swathe of techniques so let's get started!

"This technique can also be used to perform different hiden techniques simultaneously. The user may use a different hiden technique per mind clone that is active, and pay the needed AP to perform the specific techniques as per normal after paying the cost to create the clones. A maximum of three 'minds' including the original may be sent into one target at a time. This will not add any additional power to the technique."

This section reads to me as bypassing the handseals needed to perform jutsu so that you are able to cheat out 3 at one time. As such this part should be removed. 

Other than that, the section about mastery just reads to me like this jutsu should be multi-rank gaining increased clones with each rank but I don't necessarily see an issue with it. Post here when edits have been made or reach out to me on discord.
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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Re: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Thu Jul 21, 2022 6:38 am
As for your first concern,
The purpose of this technique is simply to (a) enable the use of mind transmission techniques on multiple targets at a time and (b) retain consciousness of the user's body while using Yamanaka hiden techniques. Due to the nature of mind transmission, the user's body faints by default if a mind is not left behind to control the body.

In the anime, Inoishi demonstrates the ability to stay conscious in his body while controlling targets with his use of mind body disturbance technique. That particular technique if taken literally could prove problematic in the site cannon.

Instead, Ive augmented Ino's Mind Clone Switch Technique to fulfill this functionality.

I've proposed that paying AP for this technique to synthesize x number of mind clones allows the user to target x targets with a single technique (for which ap will be paid as per the particular technique's requirements and handseals will be made once for the use of a single technique) without losing consciousness of their body. Targetting x+1 targets causes the user to lose consciousness of their original body.

As for casting different techniques, Ive proposed that if the user has x number of mind clones active for which AP will be paid, they can use a different technique with each active mind clone and the original by paying the AP required for each technique separately and performing the necessary hand seals one after the other as well.

The section about mastery is intended to keep this technique at a low rank slot on the user's stat page, so as to not take up too much room for such an elementary function. Mastery is used as the method by which to gain the ability to make more clones so as to keep it balanced.

Let me know wherever if you need me to clarify further or make edits :handshake:
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Vigor: 100 | Chakra: 150
Speed: 40 | Strength: 10

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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Re: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Thu Jul 21, 2022 12:42 pm
Trial approved.
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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Re: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Sun Jul 24, 2022 1:00 pm
Alright, let's get it.

"Duration: 1-5"
-Lower the duration to "Up to 4 Posts", a 5 Post duration is given very sparingly and towards things like Restricted VEs and Kinjutsu similar to that; it shouldn't be seen as "Oh I can give this tech a 5 post duration if I think it should last longer."

"Cooldown: Posts used"
- Change it to Posts Used +1

"Finally, if this technique is mastered twice, the user may create up to seven clones."
- For a C-rank technique, even if it's mastered twice that's a little too overkill. Reduce it to five and we're good.

The trial mod did a solid job in taking out the most eye-raising parts, so I don't have much to add besides that. Please make the requested edits!
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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Re: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Mon Jul 25, 2022 3:19 pm
Enishi wrote:Alright, let's get it.

"Duration: 1-5"
-Lower the duration to "Up to 4 Posts", a 5 Post duration is given very sparingly and towards things like Restricted VEs and Kinjutsu similar to that; it shouldn't be seen as "Oh I can give this tech a 5 post duration if I think it should last longer."

"Cooldown: Posts used"
- Change it to Posts Used +1

"Finally, if this technique is mastered twice, the user may create up to seven clones."
- For a C-rank technique,  even if it's mastered twice that's a little too overkill. Reduce it to five and we're good.

The trial mod did a solid job in taking out the most eye-raising parts, so I don't have much to add besides that. Please make the requested edits!
Done done and done
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Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique Empty Re: Hiden: Mind Clone Switch Technique

Mon Jul 25, 2022 9:38 pm
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