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 Hazy Doppleganger

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Chuunin of Konoha
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PostSubject: Hazy Doppleganger   Mon Aug 07, 2017 6:59 pm

Maraan was in a deep REM sleep and had begun to sleep, in his dream he woke up and felt a jelly like sensation around his body. As he observed his surroundings he could see that he was in an ocean that was sucking him in little by little. Naturally he began to struggle free, but to no avail. The ocean absorbed him and began to move him through the waters showing him various things. Lost civilizations under the water, and one of them was Amegakure, the village loved by the rain. As he got pulled from Amegakure he heard a voice say “I can help you, but you must let me manifest within you first.” The disembodied voice then began to fade away into what he presumed the rest of the ocean.

Maraan then awoke grabbing his chest and breathing rather heavily. Reflecting on the dream he could see it was trying to tell him something, something very obvious. He knew he loved the water and being a ninja each one had an element affinity. Meaning there was an element they excelled with. Maraan took this dream as saying his affinity was with water and decided to dedicate the day to water itself. The best way to do that would be to learn some water style jutsus because that would be the only way that the water could “manifest” in him as the voice said. Getting washed up he stared into his sink looking at the water flow admirably without a care in the world. Snapping himself out of the trance he finished getting washed up and dressed then he headed out of the house.

He went to the training grounds, but did not feel like having to deal with the instructors so he went to the ones where the genin mostly resided. He wasn’t scared of running into trouble as he could defend himself or find a way out of any situation. As his destination grew closer he could hear the sounds of intense battle among slightly matured children some not too far from his age. He always knew he was at an awkward age to be an academy student. Nineteen was seen as too old, but since he had not always lived in the village he wasn’t able to get into the records so easily. Anyway, he walked through the wooden gate that had a sign with the kanji “TRAINING GROUNDS - Genin and Up”. Maraan brushed it off acting as though he didn’t notice.

He got a few stares as he crossed the gate, most of them stopped looking the second he made eye contact with them. Finding his own spot and making sure not to bother anybody Maraan began to put his bag down that carried his art supplies and a couple of water bottles to make sure he didn’t get dehydrated over the course of his training. Now that he was here he began to wonder what jutsu he should even learn and at that very moment he remembered when he was in class he snuck out and observed the more advanced class taking place and they were speaking of clone variants for each element and the water one was called the Haze Clone or something along those lines. The haze clones were not real therefore they could not physically touch anyone or be touched nor did they have a shadow.

Even though there were a few downsides to learning this jutsu one being if he faced an experienced opponent they could tell which one was the real one by seeing which clone had a shadow or not. It didn’t really matter as this was solely to progress his ninjutsu and waterstyle. He faintly remembered the hand seals which were Dog into Tiger so that is what he weaved. Just like before when he was learning the transformation jutsu and the substitution jutsu he realized the swelling of chakra but this time it was trying to leave his body as if it were his soul. It was a weird feeling but he let the chakra pour out of him, next to him he could see that a deformed version of him began to form and it lacked barely any color.

It was as if he forgot to print the clone in color, the clone began to twitch as it was trying to move, but then it disappeared in a cloud of smoke. Maraan began to theorize whether he had used too much chakra or too little chakra. If the clone came out deformed and with little to no color it should mean some of the chakra wasn’t used into those two attributes of the clone. He then weaved the hand seals again and began to feel a weird wobble in the chakra as it expelled from his body, he made sure to use extra chakra, but not too much. As he looked to his right he could see the clone looking a little less deformed and fully in color. It was a strange sight to see. It seems the extra chakra had an effect on the color, but not on clone itself. Then he remembered that this jutsu was akin to the transformation jutsu. He had to be thinking of himself and using the mental image of himself to project it into the clone.

Once again he weaved the hand seals and began to feel the wobble of chakra, he tried to calm it down and let it flow out of him in a routine fashion as well as thinking of how he currently looked. He again, looked to the right of him to see a spitting image of him standing normally. It was probably one of the coolest things he has ever seen or done. He wondered how he would move the things though. He could still feel a slight leaking of chakra, but not as much as when he was making the clone so maybe he thought this chakra was the line connecting him and the clone together. A correct assumption, leading him to transfer the thought of running into chakra and then sending it into the clone. The clone began to run and right before it hit the gate he visualized stopping  and the clone stopped.

It was a bit weird, but with practice he knew he could make it look more natural. He was excited that he completed his first elemental jutsu, but he wanted to see how many he could create at one time so he retracted his clone back to him and began to weave the hand seals. He then began to visualize himself once more but then splitting up into three more versions of himself. As he did a lot of chakra began to leak out of his body and the wobbling of the chakra this time was a lot more violent than before. In order to calm it down he had to tone down his mental image and focused a bit more on the chakra output itself. As he looked around him he could see the clones next to him. They all looked at him and he looked at them as well.  

All except for the first one he created looked a bit off but he knew exactly why that was, he decided to call it quits for now as he had learned the jutsu successfully and it would only get better with practice. He dismissed his clones and as he bent down to grab his bag he seen a blue sandal on top of his bag. It was someone’s foot. “Oi, you think you’re hot stuff cuz you can make a few clones? Well how’s your taijutsu?” The kid asked with two of his friends. “Well let me show you.” Maraan said in a cocky way. He weaved the dog and tiger seals and made three haze clones of himself.

He then had them launch an attack at the three boys and as the clones were about to punch them they flinched giving Maraan enough time to grab his back and get out. The boys soon realized they could not be hurt by the clones as they were not real and the punch fazed right through them. Cackling Maraan ran back to his house with a huge head start from the commotion. As he finally made it back to his house he locked the door and laughed as he reflected on the day. He decided he would go back there tomorrow to train some more.
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PostSubject: Re: Hazy Doppleganger   Mon Aug 07, 2017 9:02 pm

Haze clone is a D rank you can't learn d Ranks until Genin, but I'll approve the stats for now you can come back and make a short post to claim haze clone afterwards


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PostSubject: Re: Hazy Doppleganger   Wed Aug 09, 2017 3:50 pm

Now approved for the D rank

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Stamina: 45 (+ 175 AP)

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