Tatsurama's Training part 1

Sat May 07, 2016 1:46 pm

It was a sunny day at the academy training grounds, the air was cool, as there was a slight breeze, and the leaves were gently brushing against it. Tatsurama had just finished class, and was ready to start learning the Transformation technique, as he would need to if he were to become Genin. Along with the clone jutsu as well, but he is certain he can do it. He had been trained to mold chakra and fine tune his chakra control from his father, and practiced it for years with his brother. He had never really cared too much about becoming genin, though he did wish to become a respectable jounin one day, so this would be his first step towards that goal.

He went to the edge of the training ground, to be away from the other students, so he could focus on his training. "Alright, i gotta get this jutsu down if i wanna pass the academy.." He then tried to recollect the information he learned about it from class, and figure out what he should do first. He pulled out his notes, and then began to mold his chakra. "Alright, so now what..." He then read his notes, and noticed he had to form some handsigns after molding his chakra to prepare the jutsu. "Dog → Boar → Ram" He then began to practice the handsigns, seeing how fast he could do them. "Alright i should test it out now.."

He began to focus, and mold his chakra so that he had enough for his jutsu, but not too much to conserve chakra as this might take him a while. As soon as he gathered enough, he began to form the handsigns, Dog, then Boar then Ram, and let his chakra flow into the jutsu, and to burst out with chakra, causing a poof of smoke around him. It seemed to have failed though, as he had tried to transform into his teacher, but it was too clunky, and deformed. He sat down for a minute to go over his notes before he tried it again. "Oh, so its supposed to be like that! Oh and that! OKAY!" Feeling like he figured it out, he began again by molding his chakra, then began to form the three handsigns for the jutsu, after hesitating a moment, he let it out, and another poof of smoke around him appeared. This time it was supposed to be his brother. Although it was better than the last time, he didn't quite have it down yet, as it seemed grayed out, instead of vibrant with color.

He sat down for yet another time, to look over his notes. Staring closely at the sketches and diagrams of what he wrote down in class. "It sounds so simple, yet it cant quite figure it out.." He complained to himself before thinking about what jutsu he would have learned by now if he hadn't slacked off and joined the academy at the standard age for it. He stood up to try the jutsu again, after sitting around for 5 minutes feeling bad for himself because he knew it was embarrassing for a 17 year old shinobi to have trouble on this simple jutsu.

"OK I WILL DO IT THIS TIME YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!" He got fired up, and ran in circles a few times to get his blood pumping and his focus on only the jutsu. Sweat rolled down his face, as he began to mold chakra by force, exerting a decent amount. He formed the handsigns as quick as he could, and yelled out the name of the jutsu, before finally letting the chakra out and a small poof of smoke spawned around him again.

He formed his teacher once more, and let out a sigh of relief as he found out it was correct. "Yes! I did it. That Genin rank is as good as mine! HAHAHAH!" He said obnoxiously in pride, as he began to head back to class as they were learning about the clone jutsu next.

Word Count : 676
Claims : 3 stats and Transformation Jutsu

Sat May 07, 2016 1:53 pm

Hi there, its great to see you getting started. A little tip though, every time you finish a topic/post, you should list your claims for a mod to approve. For example, in this topic your claims will be:

Total words:(number of words)
Claiming: X number of stats and transformation jutsu.

These claims make life a lot easier for staff when we review things and it helps you keep your own stuff organized. Hope that helps. <3

Sat May 07, 2016 1:58 pm

Okay, i edited. Thanks for the heads up, my next one will have it too.

Sat May 07, 2016 3:31 pm

Approved?

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