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PostSubject: Re: Kouse & Stein meet   Mon Jul 27, 2015 6:21 pm

With his bright yellow eyes, Kisuke followed the path the young student took as he soared through the air as a result of his trainer. He did not understand why the instructor would interrupt his student and launch him into the air but that was non of Kisuke's business. Right now he was focused on trying to keep his cool and deal with the odd questions the instructor was asking him. Although on the surface Kisuke appeared cool and calm as he was an expert at hiding his emotions, he was actually extremely nervous. His hands that were tucked deep into his jacket pockets were warm and moist from the sweat caused by his nervousness. He want so desperately to pull out a cigarette and light it but was too nervous to do so. Therefore he fought back the urge for a smoke and continued to converse with the unknown missing nin before him.

It appeared that the white haired individual disliked Kisuke's response to his question with another question and the Uchiha noticed something change instantly. Kisuke got the vibe that Stein somehow lost control. Almost as if a switch suddenly went off in his head and just as sudden as that switch turned off was the sudden change in his demeanour. 

Staring into the eyes of Stein through his ocular glasses, a bolt of fear shot through Kisuke. It was as if the killer intent that was now apparent in Stein's eyes was actually inflicting pain on Kisuke. The Uchiha's entire body seized up, his eyes widened, the hair on the back of his neck rose and his concealed, sweaty hands now began to tremble. His heart began palpitating at such an intense rate Kisuke was almost certain it was going to explode right there in his chest. Simply put, Kisuke was scared shitless and it clearly showed. With his widened eyes and slightly opened mouth, Kisuke's face was plastered with a fearful expression, unmoving like the rest of his body.

The fear that Stein was instilling in Kisuke's heart was consuming, like a vast shadow being cast over him by clouds blocking out the sun. Although this was all in his head, looking into Stein's eyes Kisuke actually felt like there was a vast darkness slowly creeping towards him like something out of a horror movie. The darkness latched onto his legs and trickled upwards until it consumed his pelvis, leached onto his torso and made its way up to his face. This imaginary darkness was the fear taking over, prettifying Kisuke as if Stein's eyes were Medusa'.

Kisuke tried to move, to turn around and run and get the hell away from the imminent threat before him. But his legs were solid brick. His body was not responding. His flight senses were activating and all he could think of was running but his body did not respond. The imaginary darkness created by Kisuke's overwhelming fear had now completely consumed and taken over him. The only thing he could think of was death. His own death, at the hands of this now clearly sadistic individual who had killer intent written all over his face. "N... no...no." Kisuke mumbled to himself as the though of himself dying ran through his brain. 

With the combination of consuming fear and being unable to move as a result of this fear, Kisuke was now filled with hopelessness. With the fear of death taking over him and being the only thing on his mind at this point in time and knowing that there was nothing he could do about, Kisuke simply gave him. Tears started welling in his eyes. His entire body felt as dense and heavy as led, as if the weight of the world was on his shoulders, causing him to drop to his knees in despair. There was no escape. The fear consuming him led him to the point of wishing that death would take him. He could not bare the fear any more. All hope of survival ceased to exist as the overwhelmingly powerful individual stood above him. The hopelessness he was feeling was more powerful than anything he had ever felt before.

However, in the wake of all this fear and overwhelming sense of hopelessness, knowing that his life was going to end, something deep down inside the Uchiha awoke. A spark of light flashed through the darkness of his despair, and through all the fear, death and sorrow that was going through his mind, the single though of his younger brother Akira flashing through his head brought some life back into the Uchiha. Although the fear Stein created in Kisuke still consumed him and the hopelessness of not coming out of here alive still lingered, thinking of Akira kindled an ember in his heart. 

With tears running down his face, Kisuke clenched his fists, grabbing a hand full of his pants. "I ka.. kan... cant give.... give up." He trembled, the fear causing him to shudder, the hopelessness cause his tears. "Aki... Akira needs meh...me." Being the only person to take care of his younger brother, that drive and passion was pushing him to want to survive. In the wake of devastatingly powerful fear and crushing hopelessness, Kisuke looked up strait into the dread of Stein's frightening eyes once more and Stein would look down into the weeping eyes of an Uchiha's 2nd tomoe. "I cant die here." Kisuke growled.

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PostSubject: Re: Kouse & Stein meet   Tue Jul 28, 2015 11:46 am

Kouse was surprised as he was quickly changed from the attacker to the defender.. From the hunter to the prey.. And what irked him mostly was with the apparent ease with which it was done. 
Before he could even complete his handsigns to make the jutsu that would trap stein.. Said person had quickly made hand signs of his own.. Kouse could hardly see what hand signs was made,it was that fast. 
The next thing kouse knew he was knocked him off his feet and on his face.. Shock not pain was mostly what made kouse grunt out. But unfortunately the unexpected onslaught didn't stop there.. He saw stein quickly make additional hand signs, he touched the ground and it began to flip over.
Kouse knew he was about to receive more hits and gritted his teeth awaiting the impact and the pain and making sure he made no more involuntary sounds. And it did come.. He was tossed in the air and at that moment.. Memories of his childhood came flooding into his mind. 
It was on his 6th birthday and his parents had decided to get him a tarpaulin..it had been one of the most unexpected presents he had ever gotten..he and his friends had jumped on it for a long time that day whilst making loud shrieks of joy.  It quickly became a gathering zone for children, mostly his friends.. At one point kids he didn't know started showing up to join in the fun, they all just couldn't get tired of it. 
Then inevitably bets and dares started coming up.. There were dares to land with your backs on the tarpaulin,with your front and with your side. Bets on how high you could bounce off the tarpaulin and bets on how high you could jump from and safely get caught by the tarpaulin and unfortunately this was where kouse was dared. 
Kouse hated to be dared because he mostly always carried it through, he saw it like an insult to himself. So with that mentality kouse told them to set up the tarpaulin beside a their home and had gone up onto the roof with a ladder and had jumped off it.
Though he safely landed on the tarpaulin he wasn't old enough to control his body and had been thrown of it by the second bounce.. He had broken his left arm and had several bruises...but he had felt that feeling when you are airborne and can't control anything anymore then and he felt it now. 

The impact he made on the hard ground brought kouse quickly back from his memories. 
Kouse stood back up quickly dusting himself "that wasn't necessary you know, you could have just-"  but kouse cut himself short.. Stein had apparently gotten pissed off about something that uchiha had said and things unexplainable started happening to him. 
Kouse frowned,  what was happening?  He thought.. He could feel something strange which was slowly taken a hold of his body.. He didn't understand it but he knew it was coming from Stein and continuously became stronger. 
It kept getting more powerful and intoxicating, more than kouse had expected nor could handle, far more..Stein felt like a monster filled with unrivaled power. He felt his will to defend himself slowly fade away.. He felt his body slowly give in to this power which could surely take him to deaths door in an instant.
But yet the killing intent still kept on oozing from Stein and kouse was surprised he was finding it difficult to think, he wasn't the type to be paralysed by fear.. He was considered brave by his peers.. He had taken down a snake at just the age of 9, held his own against 3 boys his age in a fight but this.. This was on its class above what he could handle. 
The need for him to just lay down and give up all hope in life washed over him.. Yes it was intense hopelessness he felt.. If there were people like this out there.. There was no point in even becoming a ninja, no need to defend himself and no need to even try to survive..he slowly knelt down, head bowed..kouse had given up..it was over.
Thoughts of his family, his sisters, mother and father passed through his mind, thoughts of saori..thoughts of the notable moments of his life flashed through his mind.. So this is what they meant when people say that your life flashes before your eyes when your about to die. 
Kouse saw it now and accepted it all... Hopelessness made him so powerless he had accepted his fate.. Death...he looked up at Stein for the last time and he saw the ease at which he could break him and kouse gritted his teeth, his thoughts of his family and close ones came rushing back to him but in a different way.. He saw them smiling at him all saying 'when are you coming back home' a tear slipped through his eyes, then of saori who said 'I'll be expecting you to become a chunin soon'. Tears started falling freely from kouse's eyes. 
Kouse willed himself to change his resolve from Hopelessness to a resolve not to die here.. He could not leave his family and saori.. His life was not his to forfeit.. He had to fight for it with every ounce of Strength he could muster..he would rather die fighting than give up on them all who believed so much in him..

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PostSubject: Re: Kouse & Stein meet   Thu Jul 30, 2015 5:58 pm

Although Kisuke's Sharingan had evolved into the next stage of its evolution due to Stein's unexpected transformation in character, the young Uchiha boy was unaware of it. His tear filled red eyes stared angrily back at the sadistic eyes of Stein that were hidden behind the gleam of his ocular glasses. Even after the evolution of his eyes and the will to survive being sparked by the though of his younger brother, Kisuke was still unable to move an inch of his body. Still kneeling down on the ground, his body was as heavy as cement. He tried lifting his knees and getting back up onto his feet to stand and face the menacing shinobi that stood before him and Kouse. But his body would not respond, as if the signals being sent from his brain were not reaching his body.

Kisuke, grinding his teeth together and growled again as he tried forcing his body to move. Just when he though he felt his finger tips finally responding, an itch at the tip of his fingers telling him that his body was responding to his thoughts, the fear hit Kisuke again. An overwhelming blanket of darkness converging over him, consuming his hopes of surviving and sending the Uchiha plunging back into the realization that his situation was hopeless and unless he was able to overcome the fear that was taking over he would inevitably die right here. 

Kisuke ground his teeth together harder and harder, trying to force himself before the architect of his all consuming fear got to him and killed him. Tears still steadily flowing down his face, Kisuke kept eye contact with Stein until his gaze was drawn down to Stein's raised arm. With the palm of his hand facing the two stunned and helpless Uchiha's, Kisuke could do nothing but watch as a tendril of some sorts emerged from Stein's flesh. Both creepily and methodically, the tendril slithered its way towards Kisuke, The Uchiha could do nothing but watch as the tendril slowly made its way towards him, all the while thinking of the worse possible sequence of events that were about to take place. 

The consuming, paralysing fear was only half of it. Now on top of that, Stein was piercing Kisuke's flesh with some sort of tendril. The tendril was slow moving and therefore more painful. As the tendril was slowly forced into Kisuke, the Uchiha though to himself "This crazy bastard! I'm... ughhh!" Kisuke never finished his sentence as the pain of the slow slithering tendril became too unbearable. Unable to move and stop the sadistic torture taking place, all Kisuke could do was try to endure the pain. But as it tore through his flesh, moving ever to slow, the pain sky rocketed through his tolerance limit and the Uchiha began yelling out in agony. His torturous yells echoed through the forest. Kisuke struggled harder and harder as the tendril slithered further and further, struggling with every ounce of strength he had in him to fight through the fear and finally move to get away from the maniac torturing him. But as hard as the Uchiha tried, he could not fight through the fear and get himself to move. All he could do was yell in pain as he felt every inch of the tendril moving.

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PostSubject: Re: Kouse & Stein meet   Fri Jul 31, 2015 5:29 pm

Why was this happening?.what am I doing here.. What have i done to deserve this?.. A painful and terrible end?..so this is how it ends?.. Nothing I can do.
All this passed through kouse's mind as he knelt down, being pressed down by a power he just couldn't understand. 
The terror he felt was mind numbing, it made his body freeze up and ensure he couldn't even muster enough to stand up. He as vulnerable as a rat was trapped in a corner by a starving cat. But even at this, kouse had made up his mind not to give up hope, his family and loved ones were not ready to let him go.. And he wasn't ready to let them go..he gritted his teeth, even if he died.. He wouldn't die with a broken will.. He would remain himself to the bitter end. 
Kouse squinted.. It was like things looked a little more clearer, slower.. He took a look at his tormentor.. Stein.. He could make out things about his body he couldn't just moments before.
Kouse was unaware of his sharingan being activated and possessing two tomoe...fear had overshadowed those sensations. 
Kouse kept marvelling at the change in the way things looked until he spotted Steins expression, that of insanity.. fear that he previously thought was on verge of causing him a stroke and that he couldn't take anymore increased.
It made kouse want to shout out and plead for his life.. He gritted his teeth instead... He wouldn't lose his pride too. 
Kouse stared intently at Stein,  he wanted to use his new found better vision to spot a weak spot on Stein, he blinked again and again, but he couldn't find anything that could help him. 
He couldn’t move an inch.. This was the only way he could help himself.. Kouse willed himself with every ounce of energy he had to get up.. He couldn’t.. He just couldn't.
Tears blurred his eyesight.. He couldn’t do this..
He couldn't do anything.. He could see far better than before but although he had depended on his eyesight to give him an edge, it hadn't worked.
Only if he were stronger.. Only.. If only.
Stein sent a tendrils towards him from where he stood..  Kouse knew that unimaginable pain would soon follow. 
Only he was stronger, only if he had more power, only if he wasn't such a weakling. 
He felt, saw something like a thread or rope slowly enter his body.
His body started shivering, it was mind shattering that all he could do was sit there and accept death. 
The pain kept escalating, increasing, getting worse.. Until at its peak.. A single thought passed through kouse's mind.. Loud and clear.. 'if only you were stronger!' 
Kouse would feel a tingling in his eyes and would pass out. 

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