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Amateru Ringo chidori training Empty Amateru Ringo chidori training

Wed May 15, 2013 4:18 am
Ringo woke up early in the morning, The sun wasn't out yet and he wanted to get an early start on his day. A week ago he completed his first mission for the Raikage and now he knew he would be taking on many more missions and with other ninja soon. He wanted to prepare so he was going to the mountains for training. Ringo's father had taught him to use chidori but only limitedly, he needed more chakra control and to learn to build more up before releasing the chidori. Ringo already packed a bag for his training trip and was ready to leave he went to his fathers old room and opened his closet inside was a room of scrolls, swords, armor and other ninja tools. He went to the first scroll that was rolled up on the table and grabbed it. This was the chidori scroll him and his father had studied for so many hours. He drifted off a moment in thought starring sadly at it reminiscing of the training with his father. A tear broke from his eye he did not acknowledge it and let it fall. Ringo carefully placed the scroll in his bag and left his house, he locked the door and began his long walk to the mountains training spot he once used with his family.

Once Ringo had left town he decided to begin his training as u leave the village the path winds then heads straight into the mountains. once out of sight of the village he put down his bag and began taking out leg weights. He had never used them really had to use them before but he knew that his brother could move insanely fast by wearing them all the time in training and missions sometimes. As Ringo took the weight from the bag he noticed it was much much heavier then it looked strapping it on fealt like attaching a cement block. He attached the other and it fealt just as heavy. Ringo closed his bag and then began to slowly stretch first touching his toes then squating low a few times to get his legs nice and ready. Ringo bent over foarwards slowly and touched the ground with his hand taking a runners stance infront of him was miles of road to the mountains. He began a small countdown almost feeling foolish for getting so prepared for a simple run but he wanted to run till his legs fell off. 3.2.1.. Ringo bolted off as fast as he could feeling the wind push his hair far behind him. He felt as if he was racing himself each time he began to slow he pushed himself harder and harder to go faster as if someone were right behind him. After 2 hours ringo was out of breath and soaked in sweat. He had reached the top of the mountains that he was once looking at far away in the village once he stopped to take in the view he froze, his legs were solid. Ringo had never ran so far and hard before in his life. He bent over and took off the weights on his legs. After putting them away he felt weightless and able to move much easier. "Ill have to make sure i wear these while training they will help greatly." Ringo put his backpack back in and walked down the very familiar trail he and his father had taken hundreds of time to practice his ninjutsu.

Ringo arrived to the campsite that he knew almost as well as his own home he threw his heavy bag down by a tree near a small pit which was for fires. There was a large clearing with a few large boulders around it, the reason this spot was so good is there wasn't very many clearings like this in the area due to the mountainous terrain. Ringo sat next to his pack and unpacked his scroll and a few sandwiches that he had packed from the night before. He was excited for he had packed a really nice ramen and steak dinner with rolls for the campfire at night. Ringo was no cook but when he came to this place he almost felt it would insult the traditions of his family to not bring their usual meal.

After his snack Ringo picked up his fathers scroll and walked to the middle of the clearing, on the far left side was a boulder. The only thing he wanted to do today was work on the chidori. When he saw his brother and father spar they could freely manipulate the chidori with their hands and even through their swords. Ringo's father told him he first had to master chidori to learn the manipulation and that all of the things he needed to know were in the scroll.

Ringo unbound the scroll it was incredibly long because it contained all the steps of mastering chidori. The first step was simple which was finding his chakra nature. When he was 6 his father gave him a peice of paper when he grabbed it it crinkled like electricity was flowing through it. this meant he was a lightning user. He spent many years training simple jutsu and chakra molding at the age of ten he could use the clone technique which is wear he would focus chakra then split it and shape it into a clone. He also learned the other E rank jutsu like Substitution and Surface walking which was when he learned to focus chakra to his feet then by creating a constant thin lair he could walk on water or up walls. The last jutsu his father had time to teach him was the first step of chidori which was the hand signs then after building chakra would build it would begin to screach. Ringo looked at the scroll and then at the boulder infront of him he was a good 20 feet away it gave him lots of room to run and aim the chidori. He would focus his chakra as much as he could for his first run. Ringo closed his eyes for a moment there was only the sound of the wind blowing by him in the clearing. He took a deep breath and began forming his hand signs to build chakra at the end he put his palm a foot off the ground and let the chakra gather in his right palm. He had a hard time gathering it at first and the lightning would gather and spark off in random directions if he was was still building chakra instead of keeping it molded to his hand. When he got to the point he could no longer gather chakra and keep the chidori in control he began running at the boulder. after his first step he immediately noticed his speed was tremendouse from the force of the chidori. The weight in his hand from the chakra built up was so heavy the force dragged through the ground as it glided almost a foot above leaving a scorched line on the ground behind him. Three seconds after his first step he had reached the boulder and now he flung his whole being into it. he fealt his arm launch foarward at a speed much fast then him he couldnt even see as his arm shot into the thick boulder's skin easily shattering through it like glass. When it hit the lightning blasted through the rock with a loud BOOM and a flash of light. when the dust settled Ringo stood infront of a half crumbling rock he had struck the lower left part and completely blew the corner of the rock completely to dust. When he began he was aiming for the center though, and he had clearly missed. "Ill have to use this close up like on the wolf if i expect to even hit anything right now." the speed and force of chidori made it almost impossible for him to aim from a distance once he gained speed but obviously the force would be devestating if it would land. Ringo knew he needed more control too because his father could make a precise whole the size of his hand if he wanted to and meanwhile his chidori looked like a messy explosion obviously he had used too much chakra and it led to it expanding instead of having just enough to blast through. The jutsu also had left him completely drained from giving it too much chakra. Now Ringo knew though that he didn't need that much chakra for chidori unless he was going to intentionally blow a whole threw something.

Ringo walked slowly back to the tree were his bag was after he gathered his father's scroll. He sat next to the tree for a moment and relaxed slowly watching the clouds go by. After a few minutes of rest he would begin to make the fire for his dinner he worked really hard today but he would retire early so he could be prepared for tommarow. After dinner he went to bed with a full stomach leaned up against the tree near the warm campfire he watched the golden sunset until he fell asleep.

Word count 1550
725 for speed
825 for chakra
15 jp

Day 2

When the sun rose Ringo's eyes opened he got up from the tree he had so comfortably slept on the night before. He immediately began his boiling water for the ramen over the campfire for breakfast. when he was done eating he began stretching and then he began grabbing his leg weights from his bag. One by one he fastened them on firmly the heavy block feeling on his legs was lighter today he could tell he was already improving. There were very few trees which dissapointed him he had to walk to the edge of the clearing. With the leg weights on he immediately prepared his fighting stance an arms length away from the tree. Ringo put his left foot foarward and right back only a little more then body length. He was going to roundhouse the tree with his right foot. Ringo slid his left foot foarward and then turned and kicked with his right aiming for the mid of the tree like it was an opponents chest. The result was a soar leg and not even a scratch on the tree. His brother and father were able to kick, punch, and cut through trees like they were nothing. Ringo set up his stance again but for the left side this time. He stepped with his right and swung with his left this time it hurt just the same and gave little result too. Ringo repeated this process over and over and over till his legs were numb and bruised. After a final hard and powerful right kick he fell to the ground the morning now was mid day. Ringo couldnt get up but he peered his head to the right a little to see if he had done anything to the tree. On both sides there were two small dents that looked like something had completely rubbed in a small mid section of the tree. He sat there for what seemed like hours unable to move from exhaustion when he gathered the strength he made his way back to the middle of the clearing. Legs buckling trying to stang he decided he couldnt muster the chakra for the chidori he went straight back to camp and fell asleep calling it an early day.

word count 376 for speed training

Day 3

Ringo awoke from his tree and began his breakfast. His legs were still soar from the day before making him very stiff and slow. After his meal he wondered if he should even train today, he had done so much training in two days that if felt much longer. When Ringo was done eating he was just about to get ready to leave when he heard the sound of twigs snapping in the distance. There were few that knew of this training area it was tucked in a small valley and the entrance wasnt maintained. Ringo prepared himself and grabbed for his gear and strapped on his sword then set his bag down and used the transformation jutsu to change into a bush. Ringo stood leaned against the tree he wanted to stay cool if there was some enemy around. Ringo kept his eyes on the trees he saw a figure land across the clearing from him in the forest. After a few long moments the figure stepped out. It was a man in a black wearing a etched out kumo headband. He stood six feet tall same as Ringo. He was muscular and toned obviously he worked out alot.

"I am keel. I am in midst of joining a rogue ninja group. unfortunately they dont take everyone. I have to pass a test and well lets just say only one of us is walking off this feild."

Ringo was surprised at the mans challenge, Ringo knew he wasnt in great shape to have a fight for his life but this is the way of the ninja. To be thrown into a fight for survival at all time and to give up your life without hesitation. Ringo did not let his dull expression change he simply moved his hand toward his shoulder an inch from his sword and began a slow walk to the middle leaving his tree.

At the middle the two ninja stood only ten feet apart. Ringo had stopped his stride and then he pulled his sword from his sheathe having it by his side now pointing to the ground. "When you are ready.."

Keel began making handsigns for fire release: fireball jutsu aiming for Ringo and if he was to run or dodge he would continue blowing towards his path to engulf him in fire. He was counting on the empty clearing to give him the edge since Ringo would have no cover.

Ringo saw his opponent make handsings and was interested that he would start with jutsu instead of testing his speed in taijutsu. Obviously for strong looking ninja he wasnt a fighter. Ringo knew that he had no time to play with his opponent if he was going straight for jutsu so he jumped back to dodge the flames as hard as he could. He fealt as the heat extended towards him only missing him by inches. As ringo landed he took the chance of loss of line of sight to creat a clone and then he began making his way quickly to his tree which was only feet away.

Keel saw as his flame engulfed the area and after a few moments he stopped blowing the fire. As it cleared he saw Ringo standing far back were he had started coming from by a tree. Keel began to pull various kunai from his pocket and he threw them as hard as he could aiming for Ringo. He watched as the kunai tore into Ringo. He began confidently walking to his victim and as he closed in the lifeless body transformed in a puff of smoke into a log.

Ringos clone took the full impact of the kunai peircing his fake to the tree. Ringo knew that this was his chance and heard his enemy make his way closer. He would use chidori and release the substitution when the ninja came closer. seeing his enemys shadow he figured from the ground below him to the enemy was fifteen feet. Just further then the wolf was when he used his chidori last time. Ringo began making handsigns and the he firmly gripped his right hand as it began gathering chakra, he was careful to only give it enough to go through a person and it had to be accurate. A moment after the screech of lightning began and he knew he had limited time to strike now that his opponent would know he was not defeated. Ringo dropped to the floor below the tree in a flash and with chidori in one hand he began his charge. Ringo sprinted to his enemy after landing his decent, once within range he would launch his arm at him and aim for the ninjas mid body making sure he wouldn't miss.

Keel watched as his victim dissapeared for a moment he looked around then he heard the weirdest noise almost like a bunch of birds or lightning. Ringo decended a moment after. Keel had no were to run or hide for cover and in his panick he gan forming handsigns for the fireball jutsu. As he weaved the first sign to gather chakra he fealt an explosion threw his stomach just below his hands. In the moment it took to make one sign Ringo had already made it to him and landed his blow. Keels hands did not make a second sign. They fell to his side. Ringo pulled his hand from Keels chest. Keel fell to his knees he did not feel pain he just laid there seeing his life flash before his eyes he died thinking what a waste all his training was to die for a bunch of bandits who he never even got to be really apart of.

Ringo watched as the enemy fell to the ground his eyes were cold and stared into nothingness and then Ringo saw Keels soul leave him and his body become empty. Ringo did not wear an expression he was regaining breath from the chidori and still amazed that it landed. Ringo looked at the mans face and his lifeless eyes and in the end Ringo felt no shame he knew that it was do or die and he did what he had to. Ringo gathered his firewood and his bag, he set the wood around the mans body he lit it and gave him a proper funeral instead of just leaving the body to rot. Ringo now began his long journey home. Down the long winding path he thought of the battle until he got to his front door as he arrived he set his bag and his thoughts down by the door, he laid in his very soft bed in his room and went to sleep as soon as his head hit the pillow he was incredibly tired from his battle and walk home and wanted to just sleep he would unpack and take care of everything the next day he was just happy to be home and in bed he couldnt care less about anything else.

word count 1154
Chakra training and health for sparring


Total
3080 total words = 30 jp
1101 words for speed = 5 speed
1979 words for chakra = 9 chakra
1154 words for health = 5 health

Buying chidori for 30 jp
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Last edited by mexmass on Fri May 31, 2013 2:22 am; edited 10 times in total
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Amateru Ringo chidori training Empty Re: Amateru Ringo chidori training

Wed May 15, 2013 4:21 am
Uh-huh. Hate to do this, but how do you have Chidori?
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Thu May 30, 2013 3:04 am
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Thu May 30, 2013 3:55 pm
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