A New 'Friend' [Private]

Walking back home from the bar downtown, Mack decided that he would test out a new technique that he had learned recently. Mack walked to the village gates, and after performing a few hand seals, a special shadow clone formed next to him. Mack stood at the village gates and sent the clone off about three quarters of a mile into the borders, Mack had his byakugan activated, so he could see everything that the clone did. Mack sent the clone into the borders because he did not want anybody witnessing what he planned to do. Scanning the area, Mack could see with his byakugan that there was nobody around. Mack would make his clone wait until somebody showed up, Mack wanted to test his clone on a target. Mack would continue to scan the area for chakra signatures, controlling the clone accordingly...

[TWC = 143]

I walking around the village with my nin-dog Noodles I was training with Noodles for fun I was going to go the village gate to continue I needed to train my bug abilities I got over there and Saw some idiot in my spot. Training with his clone. " Yo dude that's my spot. Get off of it. " I said in a rude manner I hated people anyway Always with talking annoying me.

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[*Sigh* you really should not have mouthed off to me...]

Mack was still at the Kumogakure village gates when he saw a boy approach his clone, the boy was relatively young, but Mack did not care. Mack really did not intend on killing the boy at first, he would have just let him pass, but a few things happened that changed Mack’s feelings about this. Mack’s clone could still see and hear like any normal human being, so he could hear as the boy came up to him, right next to him actually, not even a meter away, and spoke very rudely, insulting Mack’s clone and acting as if he was superior. The real Mack, back in Kumo, merely shrugged, well, this child had just bought himself a death sentence. Mack smiled, he would get to fulfill his bloodlust today, and test out his new technique, he was a lucky man indeed. Back at the Kumo gates, Mack rapidly forms some hand seals, the second the boy is done speaking. Back at the borders, Mack’s clone explodes with massive force, with a good sized blast radius, a radius that will swallow up Kisame if he does not get out of the way. It is highly unlikely that Kisame will be able to dodge the technique, as the second he is done speaking, the clone will detonate, completely unexpectedly, as Kisame cannot see the real Mack and he would have no reason to think, or anticipate the clone exploding. Kisame is also in dead range, making it extremely likely that he will be swallowed up by the explosion and killed. Kisame will most likely die before he even has the chance to form a single hand seal. The area is also devoid of any sort of object besides dirt, there is nothing that Kisame will be able to substitute with. If all happens according to perfection, Kisame will be swallowed up by the blast radius and vaporized in the explosion, not a trace of him left. His dog will be swallowed up and vaporized too, if the attack hits. Kisame is in dead range, it is highly unlikely that he will be able to escape or avoid the attack. What a shame...the child really should have kept his mouth shut...

[TWC = 515]

(I'm I already dead. If not. )

I got fifty of the bugs in skin out to try to protect myself. I while tried to get of their it would be hard I fucking hate people always with the stupid exploding retards trying to kill me idiots trying act tough I tried to protect myself with a great prison of water Today I'm going to die today I'm going to kill After this attack his chakra would be low then I would attack this idiot and protect myself from bomb guy. " Bugs Noodles attack ! "

[You don't know any of the jutsu you just said. You only have 10 chakra and lack the necessary JP to use those jutsu. That post is voided, you are dead. And the reason why I killed you is because of the insults that you keep using in your posts, I suggest toning those down...]

Mack admired his handiwork from afar, wow, this technique had proved to be quite powerful indeed. Mack was quite happy with his kill. Although, the stupid child had been very easy prey...Mack merely shrugged, he went to see how ell his technique had worked. Upon arriving to the scene, Mack was filled with childlike giddiness. Blood spattered the ground, any other cell from Kisame had been vaporized, due to his proximity to the explosion. The only thing that had not been destroyed however, was the boy’s ryo. The metal had somehow survived the explosion, perhaps because of how small the pieces were, Mack did not know, nor did he care. Mack collected all of the ryo he saw littering the ground, 500 in total. Mack was pleased with this find, not only had he gotten to kill somebody and test out his new technique, but he even got some money out of it! Grinning like a naughty child, Mack returned to his village, the blood of the young boy still freshly staining the ground. Mack entered the village gates, and then went home to have a shower.

[Exit]

[TWC = 703, Kisame is dead, +500 ryo, + 3 stats, +7 JP]

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