- YoukaCitizen
- Stat Page : The Plague
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 134237
Avoda
Wed May 25, 2022 12:55 am
Name: Avoda
Element: Yin/Yang
Rank:S
Specialty: Medical
Particular Jutsu Type:Debuff
Backstory: Being the natural antithesis to all things Youka began creating this technique to counter the one thing that could have stopped him. Himself. It was often innate ability that proved to be the factor of what or who was better. The question of what makes the human race so proud, so emboldened? They think that what they were born with makes them special…Take it away, show the world equality.
Appearance: Depending on the users own chakra it emits their own energy forcefully into the world in the form of shockwaves extending outwards . If the user is call the visible chakra will be sublime with gentle pulses outwards. If the user is more chaotic the charts chakra will rage out violently. Each person is different therefore the color depends on the user.
Handseals: Dog-Ram-Boar-Horse-Ram-Boar-Snake-Dog
Duration:4 posts
Cooldown:6 posts
Range:35 meters all directions centered from user
Power: Chakra
Speed: Chakra
Health: -
Stat Boosts:N/A
What it does: Once activated the user forcibly exerts their energy and will on to the affected individuals to disrupt the body lowering the natural out put of it by forcing the body into rapidly entering a less optimal state. It forces the body to work harder to produce what it naturally can do by taxing the nervous system. When a target is affected by this technique, the user applies a -70 debuff to two stats of the user's choice.
Additionally the user may choose one of the following to affect the target for the duration of the technique:
-Debuffs the target's DR pool by 70
-Remove the target's ability to use the chakra control discount
-Remove the target's reflex speed
-Drain 70 AP per post affected
The target may resist the effects of this jutsu by having a higher chakra than the power of this technique.
This jutsu also doesn’t interact with physical techniques/jutsu ( IE it won’t debuff a fireball)
Due to the nature of this jutsu each person in the vicinity will be affected if they can’t resist its effects. Only the user is unaffected because the waves move outwards from the body.
Character Specific:Youka, those who learn IC
Wordcount to learn:5000
Action Cost:100
Mastery:Yes
Bonus Requirements:N/A
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive:Custom
Element: Yin/Yang
Rank:S
Specialty: Medical
Particular Jutsu Type:Debuff
Backstory: Being the natural antithesis to all things Youka began creating this technique to counter the one thing that could have stopped him. Himself. It was often innate ability that proved to be the factor of what or who was better. The question of what makes the human race so proud, so emboldened? They think that what they were born with makes them special…Take it away, show the world equality.
- For visual:
Handseals: Dog-Ram-Boar-Horse-Ram-Boar-Snake-Dog
Duration:4 posts
Cooldown:6 posts
Range:35 meters all directions centered from user
Power: Chakra
Speed: Chakra
Health: -
Stat Boosts:N/A
What it does: Once activated the user forcibly exerts their energy and will on to the affected individuals to disrupt the body lowering the natural out put of it by forcing the body into rapidly entering a less optimal state. It forces the body to work harder to produce what it naturally can do by taxing the nervous system. When a target is affected by this technique, the user applies a -70 debuff to two stats of the user's choice.
Additionally the user may choose one of the following to affect the target for the duration of the technique:
-Debuffs the target's DR pool by 70
-Remove the target's ability to use the chakra control discount
-Remove the target's reflex speed
-Drain 70 AP per post affected
The target may resist the effects of this jutsu by having a higher chakra than the power of this technique.
This jutsu also doesn’t interact with physical techniques/jutsu ( IE it won’t debuff a fireball)
Due to the nature of this jutsu each person in the vicinity will be affected if they can’t resist its effects. Only the user is unaffected because the waves move outwards from the body.
Character Specific:Youka, those who learn IC
Wordcount to learn:5000
Action Cost:100
Mastery:Yes
Bonus Requirements:N/A
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive:Custom
- EnishiNova
- Stat Page : The Wraith
Legendary Equipment : Hiramekarei
Clan Specialty : Fuuinjutsu
Village : Hoshigakure
Ryo : 95850
Re: Avoda
Wed Jun 01, 2022 12:50 pm
So I looked at this again, unfortunately I will have to deny this app.
The ability to shut down innate buffs from bloodlines is something that will not be allowed in this landscape. You may request a second opinion if you wish.
The ability to shut down innate buffs from bloodlines is something that will not be allowed in this landscape. You may request a second opinion if you wish.
- YoukaCitizen
- Stat Page : The Plague
Clan Specialty : Ninjutsu
Village : Missing Ninja
Ryo : 134237
Re: Avoda
Wed Jun 01, 2022 2:35 pm
No disrespect to you and I appreciate you taking the time to grade it. Can you explain to me why it’s denied? If I’m correct you can get what, +50 from them correct? Besides some random ones I’ve seen. People can actively boost +90 to any stat they want. The -25 shouldn’t be a factor at least I thought. I don’t want a second opinion, I’ll work with you if there’sa way to not out right deny it. Thanks in advance.
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Re: Avoda
Fri Jun 03, 2022 3:59 pm
Per discord discussion with the poster and staff, the following compromise was reached:
>Change the specialty of this jutsu to Medical
>Remove the following:
-The health of the technique
-"Effectively disabling all innate buffs for 4 posts (IE clan bonuses, DR, any passive bonus that is granted stat wise). Active boosts, amplifiers, and the like are not affected by this jutsu."
-This jutsu can be resisted if the affected has a higher vigor stat than the user at the time of activation or can raise it higher after. Once resisted all innate stats come back.
>Replace with the following:
When a target is affected by this technique, the user applies a -70 debuff to two stats of the user's choice.
Additionally the user may choose one of the following to affect the target for the duration of the technique:
-Debuffs the target's DR pool by 70
-Remove the target's ability to use the chakra control discount
-Remove the target's reflex speed
-Drain 70 AP per post affected
The target may resist the effects of this jutsu by having a higher chakra than the power of this technique.
>Change the specialty of this jutsu to Medical
>Remove the following:
-The health of the technique
-"Effectively disabling all innate buffs for 4 posts (IE clan bonuses, DR, any passive bonus that is granted stat wise). Active boosts, amplifiers, and the like are not affected by this jutsu."
-This jutsu can be resisted if the affected has a higher vigor stat than the user at the time of activation or can raise it higher after. Once resisted all innate stats come back.
>Replace with the following:
When a target is affected by this technique, the user applies a -70 debuff to two stats of the user's choice.
Additionally the user may choose one of the following to affect the target for the duration of the technique:
-Debuffs the target's DR pool by 70
-Remove the target's ability to use the chakra control discount
-Remove the target's reflex speed
-Drain 70 AP per post affected
The target may resist the effects of this jutsu by having a higher chakra than the power of this technique.
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Re: Avoda
Thu Jun 09, 2022 9:10 pm
Approved
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Ryo : 21270
Re: Avoda
Mon Jun 13, 2022 1:59 pm
Changed errent power and speed to chakra from vigor after discussion.
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Re: Avoda
Tue Jun 14, 2022 5:49 pm
APPROVED AGAIN
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