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V7 Hidden Mist Technique Empty V7 Hidden Mist Technique

Sat Jun 20, 2020 10:15 pm
Name: Hidden Mist Technique
Element: Water
Rank: B
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory: -

Appearance: A thick cloud of white mist appears around the user, obscuring vision.
Handseals: Ox, Snake, Ram, Tiger
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: Posts used +1
Range: Up to 30 meters in diameter
Power: 30
Speed: 30
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
Users fill the air with a thick mist and control its thickness with their chakra. Once the mists are thick enough that opponents cannot see, they cannot see further than three meters or manage abilities against the user that requires being within eyesight with their as requirement unless it is limited to themselves or at a maximum range of three meters. This effect also applies to the caster and must use some other detection methods to pinpoint their opponent. The mists can be created using water from the surroundings or, users can create the mists themselves, which they exhale from their mouths. The mists are made thick enough to cancel out the enhanced vision of the Sharingan and Rinnegan. When gaining mastery of the jutsu, the user can generate mist from moisture in the air. This jutsu doesn't clash with offensive and defensive techniques other than wind. Only wind-based techniques with more power than this technique can dissipate the mist, canceling its effects while blowing it away.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1,500
Action Cost: 30 AP, 15 AP upkeep
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: -
Canon or Custom: Canon
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Last edited by Kizmaru Senju on Sun Jun 21, 2020 10:07 am; edited 2 times in total
Guren Chinoike
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V7 Hidden Mist Technique Empty Re: V7 Hidden Mist Technique

Sat Jun 20, 2020 10:49 pm
Sup playa. Couple comments here:

Need at least 4 hand seals total
Add a unit to the range. If that is supposed to be 75m, maybe dial that back a bit. Like 60m. 
Word count needs to be 1500 based on the power.
There's probably some room for optimization of the duration/cooldown here. Maybe a max duration of 4 - 5 posts, then the cooldown could just be the number of posts used + 1. 
Lastly add specify how much someone that is trapped within the jutsu can effectively see. 1m in the direction they're looking in? 5m?
Kizmaru Senju
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V7 Hidden Mist Technique Empty Re: V7 Hidden Mist Technique

Sun Jun 21, 2020 10:04 am
Edited.
Guren Chinoike
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V7 Hidden Mist Technique Empty Re: V7 Hidden Mist Technique

Sun Jun 21, 2020 10:06 am
Thanks bro, looks good. Trial approved.
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