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PostSubject: Yin art:soul embodiment   Sat Apr 15, 2017 8:02 pm

Name:  body and soul art: yin released part 1
Element: yin
Rank: S
Spec Type: medical
Backstory:  delving further into his yin/yang studies. yen took to studying, and meditating on the technique he once created.

The body and soul was known to yen as incomplete. As it held its own weaknesses, and further branched into two forms of the yin/yang spectrum. Yen began his studying by looking into the two as not a whole, but separate things. Each One being taken apart and examined separately. While yang focused on a more physical aspect. The yin aspect took to the spiritual portion. Combined they created many miracles, but alone they were agents  of miracles, and destruction.  By utilizing his chakra and concentrating it to amplify his body. Yen found that like before his body reacted naturally to his focus. 

Taking away some of the more jarring drawbacks of body and soul. yen learned he could in fact utilize his  normal elemental techniques. The he also found he can increase two of his  parameters by focusing his yin chakra in full force. This is used to drastically increase their combative abilities. Also By Utilizing his yin chakra.  The he  is able stabilize his body while taking damage even above his  normal threshold.

Now in inclusion to this. yen began to focus also on the art  of  maintaining it. Although this proved difficult despite the power it granted. The techniques greatest weakness. Was The unstable portion of it required almost reserves that were beyond even measure to maintain productively.  Each effect being terribly difficult to maintain, and would leave a shinobi lesser drained and much weakened. 

But born within it lies the will to survive at all costs. And it may stay death's hand momentarially while being in the middle of combat.  But at the expense of all of the users reserves. 

Appearance:  none with normal vision, but with chakra vision, his chakra would be bright and seemingly powerful.
Handseals: dragon, ox, ram, tiger,  boar, rabbit, dog, fox, hare, (Clap)
Duration: untill cancled
Cooldown: posts used +2
Range: self
Power: 70
Speed: none
Health: none
Stat Boosts: +70 chakra, +70 health.
What it does:

This being the full internal force of yens Body and soul. This focuses on enhancing the users body, and chakra. 

Yin elemental synergy

This technique being yin nature focuses internally on the users body. By amplifying both the users chakra and the chakra power. Unlike its precesdor. This jutsu enables the user  to use their normal elements for typical jutsu use. However, there are restrictions. This adds also to the upkeep of this jutsu. Per elemental technique used.

First element, and none elemental techniques: can use up to S ranked techniques.  Adds +5 ap upkeep to this technique.

Second element: up to B ranked techniques.  Adds +10 ap upkeep.

Third element: up to C ranked techniques. Adds +15 to ap upkeep.





Yin bodily stabilizer

25 ap per post

This works Similarly to the Yin healing wound destruction. It is done by the user rushing healing chakra throughout their whole body while the jutsu is active. This remaining at a static power of 70.(unless boosted by other outside methods. Such as items and skills.)  Just like yhwd this would pre-entively heal, and reduce damage done to the user. despite it being on stand by this does not over heal the user, but remains in standby until damage is received. This also reduces and expells poisions and other chemicals and particals. All reduced by the power of the jutsu. If a poision falls under yens health stat it is considered inefective and will not work on him for the topic.


 



Ap upkeep increases  for this jutsu. Will reset at the end of the topic, Or upon recasting the jutsu.









Character Specific: yensung aburame
Wordcount to learn: 10k
Action Cost: 100 activation. 50 per post. 25 per post for yin body stabalizer.
Mastery: no
Bonus Requirements: must know Body and soul, must know chakra infusion, must know Yin wound destruction. Must have at least 100 in chakra and stanima.  must have medical as a specialty.
Canon or Custom: custom


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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Wed May 17, 2017 9:14 pm

We have some work to do here...

My greatest concern here is that this jutsu is a bit overloaded. We have stat boosts, jutsu boosts, and damage reduction. So, here is what I'm thinking: either get rid of the dr part or the jutsu boosting part. The choice is yours, but you can't have both. Furthermore, I'd like to see the jutsu buff, if you choose to keep it, narrowed down to a specific field as opposed to 'all jutsu'. As for the stat boosts, I'd like to see the stats be set in stone (ie no swapping stats).

That's all I have right now. Please bump this when you're ready for another look.


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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Wed May 17, 2017 10:09 pm

Simple fix bump


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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Wed May 17, 2017 10:49 pm

Duration/Cooldown: Let's put a duration on this (~6 posts). Naturally, you can attach a lesser cooldown as well.

Stat Boosts: Please set them in stone. It still appears as if they are swappable.

Yin Body Stabilizer: Let's bump the ap cost of this to 25.

Lastly, if you could fix up the spacing on your app it will make it easier to read. Otherwise, that's all I got for you. Please make these changes and you should be golden.


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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Thu May 18, 2017 12:19 am

So made few changes acceptable.

1. made duriation 8 (due to imo it could be way higher since this requires both chakra and reserves. Aka 80 base chakra and stanima a peice.) 

Cd is respectively  posts used +2. (Debating +3)

As opposed to an ap cost. Ap upkeep gainage in body stabilizer is +30 to the upkeep per post.  Since its a continuous thing. (Don't belive in cheap stuff as its a booster stuffed with drawbacks.) 

Aka post 2: upkeep 80 ap, post 3: 110, post 4: 140, (you know the drill)


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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Sun May 28, 2017 4:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Wed Jun 07, 2017 9:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Wed Jun 14, 2017 2:35 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yin art:soul embodiment   Thu Aug 10, 2017 2:50 am

Reworked

Added several effects

Made only a chakra and health booster


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