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PostSubject: Rotting Corpse   Rotting Corpse I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2017 7:31 am

Name: Rotting Corpse

Appearance: Well, it looks like a… rotting corpse. Size varies based on the person’s body used in the puppet creation process, but for the sake of simplicity we will say that the puppet is roughly 5’9” and of average build. One of the hands of the corpse might have fallen off, or maybe it was taken off deliberately… only Max knows for sure. The remaining bones in its arm have been filed into sharp edges, to form a makeshift weapon of sorts. It isn’t the most effective weapon, but it manages to work.

(Would look something like this.)
 
Rank: D-rank (Undead Puppet Classification)
 
Backstory: I wouldn’t call this an “advanced custom puppet” but Max used the corpses of some of the dead guards he acquired during a mission and fashioned their bodies to form these fairly generic Undead Puppets. He utilized the information and techniques that he had learned when making Stein and applied some of it here. Mostly, he found that when he infused his chakra into a rotting corpse puppet it managed to make a highly sickening substance lethal to most. That could prove most useful.
 
Health: 10 (Frame), 10 (Bone ‘Shiv’ weapon)
Sharpness: 10 (Bone ‘Shiv’ weapon)
Mechanisms:
1.       Rotten Explosion: Poison- D-rank
Upon suffering enough damage to ‘pop’ or upon Max infusing enough chakra into the puppet to cause it to burst. The puppets rotten shell bursts open, immediately filling a ten meter radius with a noxious, putrid gas. Anyone caught in the initial release gains 1 "stack" of "Stench of Death". This gas lasts for 2 posts and for each post started within the area all shinobi (excluding Max) gain 1 “stack” of “Stench of Death”. Other than granting the stacks upon ‘death’, this Mechanism does nothing. 

Any particular "Rotting Corpse" puppet can only grant a maximum of 2 "stacks" of "Stench of Death" on any individual shinobi.

Power: N/a (doesn’t directly cause harm, instead granting “Stench of Death” stacks.)
Duration: 2 post duration for the "cloud" of toxins. (Not visually a cloud. The "cloud" isn't visible)
Cooldown: N/a (since the puppet is destroyed in the process)
Cost: 10 Actions (to force it to burst prematurely), or nothing upon death.
 

Wordcount to Build: 1000 (baseline since none of the stats or mechanisms go over the base for a D rank)
Character Specific: Not exactly (see below) 
Bonus Requirements: Yamaguchi Clan (this is not a listed clan, so unless it becomes one you must have the surname Yamaguchi and OoC permission)
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PostSubject: Re: Rotting Corpse   Rotting Corpse I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2017 7:37 am


This looks good but what is the purpose of the stack of stench of death? At least it should impede RT or sensory in some way? <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

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PostSubject: Re: Rotting Corpse   Rotting Corpse I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2017 7:38 am

It grants stacks that have synergy with Stein.


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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Element(s) : Lightning, Water
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Ryo : 10
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PostSubject: Re: Rotting Corpse   Rotting Corpse I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2017 7:41 am

Link to Stein for you to look.


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
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PostSubject: Re: Rotting Corpse   Rotting Corpse I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2017 7:43 am


Alright approved <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

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