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Tue May 21, 2013 3:53 am
It was a rainy day at the Village hidden in the Cloud. As usual, the clouds were overshadowing the area, and it seemed very stormy at the moment, the rain and winds taking over the small town. It was chilly, the temperature reaching almost at freezing point, but everyone in the town was used to that. The benefit of living in the Village hidden in the Clouds was that they were almost fully resistant to cold. Sometimes, Dagonn wondered what it was like to have a clear shiny day, without clouds covering the sky. What its like to have a day that had hot temperatures. One day Dagonn was going to travel to the village hidden in the sand and experience what a hot day is like, what it is like to have the blistering sun over you all the time.
Dagonn had been tired out of his skins the past few days. All this endless training with past teachers, the nerve-racking Genin Exams and on top of that all, he had just begun to learn more about his Lightning Element, learning a few cool new Jutsus and starting to form himself into a top ninja, a formidable opponent. He was tired of course, but also very excited and anxious to begin learning his new jutsus. Being a Genin had opened up a whole new world to him. This was only the beginning for him to become a ninja.
On top of all the training and work he did, he also got to try out new things and make new friends. He tried out Ramen for the first time since he was a young child, and hated the smell but enjoyed the food so much that it became a new staple in his house. Due to his weird acting while get his Ramen for the first time, he managed to make a friend, which he didn’t have many of, in the man who owns the Ramen store. They became great friends after the ordeal that happened the first time he tried to order Ramen, and they have been great friends ever since. Not only did he make friends with the owner of the Ramen store, but he is good friends with his teacher and fellow lightning element user, who he now affectionately calls “Uncle”. They have a very strong bond and it is undeniable that they are really close.
Every now and then, Dagonn and ‘Uncle’ get together and Spar, practising their skills and developing their jusus together. When they do this they not only grow their abilities, but they also grow their bond and becoming close and closer by every time they spar. Dagonn was like the father that Dagonn never had. He is the most like a father figure in his life. Not long ago, ‘Uncle’ decided that Dagonn was ready to learn a new Jutsu, a more complex one than before. Dagonn was told that this was an A-Ranked Jutsu, and that it was extremely complex, and that even he hadn’t mastered it yet.
Excited and eager to learn, Dagonn immediately became Hyperactive, running around and screaming, repeating the words “I’m gonna learn a new Jutsu!” ‘Uncle ‘ just laughed as Dagonn marched around, screaming it out like he was the Town Crier. After a few minutes, Dagonn wasn’t burnt out and he was still marching around, and ‘Uncle’ had to put a stop to it. “Settle down Dagonn! If you are going to be like that and act immature then I guess now isn’t the time to teach you the new jutsu.” Dagonn’s expression changed very quickly into a sincere one, acting very sorry for what he did. “I’m sorry Uncle, I didn’t mean to! I just got a little excited that’s all! Please don’t cancel the Jutsu! Pretty Please! I promise that I will act more mature and more grown up! PLeaseee!” he spluttered out really fast, and Uncle just told him to shush by this point.
‘Uncle’ walked into the middle of the Training Grounds, and begun to do a Jutsu. He closed his eyes and concentrated as hard as he could, performing a link of hand signals. Before finishing the jutsu whispered a few words to himself. With a roar, lightning begun to take over his skin, and Dagonn watched intently. Something was wrong; Dagonn had seen this Jutsu before. Heck, Dagonn knew this jutsu. ‘Uncle’ was just trying to con him into learning a jutsu he had already learnt. “Hey! What are you doing? This isn’t a new Jutsu, I already knew this one! Quit fooling with me and teach me a real jutsu!” he screamed at ‘Uncle’, while he was in a massive fit of laughter, rolling around and banging his fists on the floor. “Now it’s time for you to stop being immature Uncle, teach me a new jutsu” said Dagonn with a displeased look on his face.
Dagonn wasn’t happy and ‘Uncle’ could spot that fairly easily. It was time that he stopped messing around and actually taught Dagonn a new jutsu. Having just one lightning jutsu wasn’t enough for him, and not expanding upon it would be a waste of potential. Dagonn really was a great prospect and an amazing ninja. “Okay, Okay” Uncle said after he stopped laughing, “Ill show you for real this time. Prepare yourself though, this Jutsu is definitely not easy to do.”
Once again, ‘Uncle’ walked into the middle of the training ground and prepared himself to start a new jutsu. The way he positioned himself made Dagonn know that this was a different Jutsu. He stood in a flat stance, preparing himself more for the hand signs than anything else. In an instant, he begun charging his Chakra and before Dagonn knew it, he was doing the hand signs for the Jutsu. The hand signs looked extremely complex, some hand signs that Dagonn thought he couldn’t do. This really was going to be a challenge for Dagonn, it was going to take him a lot of practise for him to master it.
After finishing all the hand signs for the Jutsu, his teacher said out loud “Lightning Release : Flight of Screeching Eagles!” After he said those words, three lightning bolts shaped like birds shot out and made harsh whistling noise as they flew themselves into the wall of the arena, making an incredible amount of damage for things that small. Dagonn looked in Awe as Uncle dusted off his hands and acted like doing the jutsu was an easy thing to do.
“ Wow, that was incredible!! That looked so awesome, and you made it look so super easy as well!” Dagonn beamed excitedly, anxiously waiting for the time that he was able to learn the Jutsu as well. “It is a pretty cool jutsu if I say so myself” said ‘Uncle’ back to him, smiling. “I’ll get into the advanced details of the Jutsu in a minute, just as soon as I take a quick break. Doing that Jutsu uses up an obscene amount of chakra” Uncle said as he was sitting down, obviously exhausted from just doing the Jutsu once.
“Okay Dagonn, sit down. Ill tell you a bit about the jutsu. First off, don’t going using this Jutsu recklessly. I’ve already given you a talk about going around and flashing this Jutsu off, and I want to make it clear that you don’t do that, okay? As you’ve seen, this Jutsu uses up a lot of chakra and if you aren’t careful, you will run out of chakra before you can say ‘Raikage’. So make sure that you are being mature with this jutsu, okay?” said Uncle. “Okay, I won’t forget it” said Dagonn in reply, nodding and taking mental notes.
“Okay then, lets get into it. This jutsu is called ‘Lightning Release – Flight of Screeching Eagles’ and is an A – Ranked jutsu. It is very advanced, especially for a genin and especially for your age. Obviously, it is a Lightning Element Ninjutsu, but you don’t have to worry about that since you do use the Lightning Element. This has a 20 metre range and the effect wears off after the birds hit the target. You can control all three of the birds and use them to attack one target all together, or attack multiple targets separately.”
“To master this jutsu, you are going to have to perfect the Ram, Dragon and Bird hand sign. If you can master them then this jutsu will be easier to master, but even with that , the hand signs are very hard to learn and perfect, you can make plenty of mistakes with it. Also, the amount of Chakra you have will be how fast the birds are, so if you have a lot of chakra then the birds will be stupendously fast. If the bird hits the electricity will shock their muscles and limit their movement. For a little while, they will have a speed reduction and won’t be able to move nearly as fast. Use this speed reduction to your advantage. Be careful once you use this jutsu though, because you can’t use it for a little while. Make sure you have other Jutsu’s in your arsenal.”
“Now that I have all of that out of the way, it is time for you to attempt to do the Jutsu yourself. Don’t fret if you can’t do it the first time, just concentrate as hard as you can and DON’T forget the name like you did last time, okay?” said as Uncle finished off his extremely long speech. Dagonn nodded enthusiastically, as he took center stage. He stood almost exactly the same way as ‘Uncle’ did and he started to do the Jutsu.
He confidently charged up his chakra, taking his time and being extremely careful. Slowly, he begun to mimick the hand signs that was showed to him by ‘Uncle’. First ram, then dragon, and lastly, the Bird. He managed to do all the hand signs, although he did them very sloppily. He was trying hard to get them as correct as he possibly could but it seemed like he couldn’t do that no matter how hard he tried. After finishing the hand signs, he belted out “Lightning Release – Flight of Screeching Eagles!”
Seemingly instantaneously, two lightning bolts shaped as birds popped out and went straight towards the wall of the Arena, making an explosion big enough to wreck something, but too small to do any fatal damage if it was cast upon an opponent. Dagonn also realised that there was only two birds that appeared instead of three that were meant to appear. That meant something went wrong with the hand signs, but he didn’t know what. He looked towards ‘Uncle’ for some advice and tips, anxiously waiting for his feedback.
“You did a good job, Dagonn, Impressive for someone who was performing this Jutsu for the first time. I know you are disappointed with the result but just remember that this is your first time.Here are some pointers for next time, and also don’t forget to practise the hand signs at home. You were surprisingly good at the first and third hand signs, but you really badly messed up on the second one. It was so bad, that the second bird didn’t even come out. I want you to buckle down and really practise that second hand sign, make sure you can do it almost perfectly. You also were a bit surprised at how weak the Jutsu was. The main reason as to why it was weak was mainly because you really messed up that second hand sign. That second bird can do a lot of damage if you use it properly. It also wasn’t strong because the other signs were a little sloppy, but don’t get me wrong, they were excellent for someone who is performing the hand signs for the first time.”
“I’m really busy at the moment and since I’ve been hanging around with you my duties have been stacked up ,so I’m not going to be able to train or play with you for a week at the most. I want you to use this time to really get those hand signs perfected. One week should be more than enough time for you to get it done. Use your time wisely. When I get back, you better have the hand signs downpat at least! If you are still struggling with performing the jutsu I can fix that for you easily. I better run now and start my duties so I can come back quicker. Go home Dagonn, and practise those H and Signs as much as you can. I’ll see you in about a weeks time!” said ‘Uncle’, preparing to walk off and go do some work.
Dagonn just smiled and waved, knowing that he could use this time to really get good at the jutsu. Although the first time he performed this Jutsu was fairly scrappy and not very formal, he did a much better job than he did the first and second time he learned his last jutsu. Dagonn was confident that he could perfect the jutsu, and he begun practising right then and there at the Training Arena.
He focused as much as he possibly could, making sure that he did every hand sign without screwing up. Obviously, he was screwing up a lot and had to start doing the hand signs all over again. He said to himself that he would make sure he can do the hand signs perfectly before trying to do them faster. Slowly, he made the hand signs with a few seconds gap in between to help him with getting them perfect. After hours upon hours of rigorous training, Dagonn had showed close to no signs of improvement. Before he went back home he tried the jutsu one last time and still didn’t manage to get the second handsign down, meaning only two of the birds still appeared. Frustrated and in a fit of rage, Dagonn walked home.
There was one thing he could do that might improve his concentration. It managed to calm him down and refill his Chakra storage last time that he did it, and it yielded great results. On the way back to his home, he stopped at his good friend, The owner of the Ramen stall’s stall, and bought himself a nice hot box of ramen. They had a long conversation about random things, gossip, politics, famous ninjas and such. The owner of the ramen stall was a great and valuable friend to Dagonn, plus, he made a mean Ramen!
After a while of conversing, Dagonn said his goodbyes and strolled off back home, waiting to open the box of ramen and dig in! He quickly tried to open his door, dropping the keys, and ran in and set everything on the table, grabbing utensils and putting items away at a record speed. He was ready to eat his special meal, and one of his favourites. Ramen.
Digging into his Ramen with no sympathy for those who aren’t fortunate enough to afford meals every day. He pigged out and ate the ramen in record time, making a mess of the table and also a mess on his face, noodles everywhere. “Mm, mm!” he said, as he slurped his last bit of noodle loudly. “That was wonderful , I’d have another bowl if I had the time to! Now that I have finished my Ramen, it is time to practise my Jutsu!” he beamed, throwing out the box and cleaning his face with a tea-towel. He left the Dining Table as messy as it was, claiming that he didn’t have the time to clean it. Now was practise time!
Like he did with his past Jutsu, he sat on his bed and begun practising the hand signs intently. Moreover, he focused mainly on the second hand sign, the one he was having trouble with initially. He decided that his new approach to mastering this Jutsu was to keep practising the one hand sign until it was at a level of satisfactory, and then moving on to the other hand signs. He would start with the 2nd hand sign, moving on to the other ones later. He spent the whole night practising only the second hand sign, and by the end of the night it still wasn’t perfected.
In a fit of frustration, he gave up and decided that a good nights rest could make a difference. He quickly convinced himself that it was the right way to go about mastering the Jutsu. He jumped under his covers and very quickly fell asleep, dreaming of the day that he mastered the jutsu. The way he acted towards practising the jutsu though, might mean that he would never get to finish mastering it. He had started slacking off and started to be lazy on it.
He fell asleep very fast and dozed off. He woke up very late the next morning, his alarm set for 11am beeping loudly. He jumped up in fear, quickly realising that it was late and that he had just wasted a few hours worth of training. Realising this quickly, he had a very quick breakfast and got changed as soon as he could, jumping back on top of his bed beginning to practise the second jutsu sign. He practised for the whole day, making sure that he got it right. It seemed that the long amount of sleep and all the food made a large difference on him, and he had almost perfectly replicated the hand sign by the end of the day. He was triumphant. After doing this, he felt like absolutely nothing could stop him. He stayed up extra late and spent a few extra hours on the first hand sign, the other hand sign that he had struggled with. He fell asleep before getting under his covers that night, but all of that training was extremely beneficial to him, and it made him both stronger as a person and smarter. It also improved his Chakra reserves and his stamina, making him stronger as a ninja.
That night, he slept very well. All that energy he put into mastering that second hand sign had made him very tired, and he fell asleep very quickly because of it. Dagonn was generally a very calm sleeper, but tonight something had really bothered him, so much to the point that it was a night terror. He dreamed of a group of people, a hierarchy, coming to assassinate him. He imagined himself in the middle of the village, just randomly training as buildings were torn down right beside him. A group of four or so people appeared in front of him, differing in the uniform, nothing like the criminal group “The Akutski” that he had heard of before.
They stood over him and mentioned a few words about him being a potentially dangerous ninja, one that could be extremely strong. They said that he had to be killed for the better of the universe, and they rushed towards him, preparing to kill him. Scared and stuck in fear, Dagonn couldn’t move, and couldn’t do anything about it. Split seconds away from his death, an unknown ninja swooped in and stopped the Jutsu. The men who were trying to assassinate him ran away in fear, and the powerful ninja muttered a few words to him before being on his way, jumping off into the night.
Dagonn woke up, sweating like a storm and puffing. It was 4.30 am, and he didn’t really want to go back to sleep in fear of the dream coming back again. He sat up, and practised his hand signs nervously, obviously scared of what he had experienced. He wondered if some people really were out to get him. He was told by some unknown ninja that people were out to get him, but he just thought he said that to scare him, he thought that it wasn’t true. But maybe it was, maybe people really were out to get him. Dagonn was scared, and decided it was wise for him to go sit outside and get some fresh air.
He walked around town, through the market stalls. Surprisingly, the man owning the Ramen stall was just sitting there, resting. Dagonn walked up to him and started talking to him, having a long conversation. It turns out the Ramen man actually lived here. The ramen stall was his life, and he didn’t have a place to live. Dagonn felt sorry for him, and gave him some money. In return, the Ramen man promised that the next time he came around that he would have a bowl ready for him to eat, on the house. Dagonn was a bit more relaxed after the conversation, and he said his goodbyes and headed back home.
By time that the conversation had ended, it was dawn and Dagonn knew it was time to make up for the lost time from sleeping in yesterday. He had breakfast, some Ramen in a Cup, and got changed into his training gear. With a prideful stroll, he walked towards the training ground and prepared himself. Today was the day he gets at least the first two hand signs done perfectly. He made his way to the middle of the training arena, which was empty and had no one around, just the way that he liked it.
He stood in the middle and begun to form the hand signs. First Ram, then Dragon and finally finished off with the bird hand sign, currently the weakest hand sign of them all. After finishing the hand signs, he awkwardly let out the words “Lightning Release – Flight of Screeching Eagles” and with a small zap, lightning filled his body and three decent sized lightning bolts were released. They were much bigger than they were the first time he performed the Jutsu, and it went perfectly according to plan. Instead of two bolts like last time, there were three bolts. Not only that, but the bolts begun to look more like birds than they did the first time. “Perfect!” he relayed to himself as the three birds both went to the same spot in the wall, make a decent sized dent.

The screeching of the birds was also much louder compared to last time, to the point that it was almost painful. The screech was fairly annoying, but I guess he would get used to it over time. After the jutsu, Dagonn celebrated a little and prepared to practise some more, but this time he had a good idea.This time, he would do the jutsu and try to direct the birds to three different places. This would be harder than it looked though, and it would require a lot more practise, probably a little bit less than the hand signs.
He begun to charge his chakra for the second time, and performed all the hand signs in order. Ram, Dragon and Bird. He performed the first two perfectly, and to his surprise, he performed the last hand sign well. The three bolts of electricity shaped as birds appeared, screeching louder than ever. Dagonn closed his eyes and focused, attempting to direct the birds to three different places. One directly in front of him, one directly behind him and one on the ground a good distance to the left of him. He released and let the birds take their course, and they more or less, went to the spot that he directed them to, give or take a few metres. He was happy with the way they performed the first time, and thought he would work on it later.
He had one more idea, and that was to practise the jutsu while also having his other jutsu that he was taught active at the same time. He knew that he would probably have to use both at once in battle for maximum effect, so he wanted to simulate this in training at least. ‘Uncle’ said that he probably wouldn’t be using this more than once a day, but he had already used it twice in quick succession and he was still feeling full of energy and Chakra.
So, for the third time in a row, he charged his chakra, carefully performing the hand signs near perfectly. The first jutsu he did was the one he learnt before, ‘Lightning Release – Full Body Current’. He had already learnt that and was getting better at it everytime he used it, it being in full effect. He then started doing the hand signs for the Lightning Release – Flight of Screeching Eagles, Ram, Dragon and Bird. He performed them near perfectly, being able to release all three birds while also maintaining the other jutsu, Full Body Current.
He also tried to control them and send them three birds to three different spots. He managed to do all this, and still managed to maintain his first jutsu. He was amazed at how resilient his chakra was. He manged to do that heavy jutsu three times in a row, while also managing to do the other jutsu the third time. It was an amazing feat, especially for him. He was overtly proud of himself and was eager to practise some more, but knew that he should probably rest and regenerate his Chakra before attempting it again. He already went against Uncles word and tried it three times in a row, so he probably shouldn’t go against it more and he should make sure he is fully healthy. He walked back home and went inside, taking off his training suit and changing into something much more comfortable. Tonight, he didn’t bother practising the hand signs since he had them almost perfected.
Dagonn spent the next few days endlessly practising his Jutsu, along with his other one. His first one, which was basically perfect from previous training got stronger and he learnt how to manipulate the electrical waves to concentrate the electricity to one point in his body. He also learnt how to make it spread further away from his body, meaning that people wouldn’t even get a chance to touch him before he was affected by the jutsu, a trait handy in stopping a lethal attack, a last minute defense. He had now truly mastered the jutsu, making it stronger in all areas.
Also with training up his other Jutsu, he also managed to get better at controlling his Chakra. He was obviously having an easy time getting extensive chakra training, not even needing anyone to help him do it. He liked to practise his chakra whenever he wasn’t practising his Jutsu’s. Chakra control was one of his super strong points. He thought that he might be one of the best, if not the very best Chakra Controlling Genin in all of Kumogakure. He truly believed that if he wasn’t the best at this moment, he would be the best in a little bit of time.
Dagonn really enjoyed practising his Jutsu. This Jutsu was an amazing one, one he could really use. It was the first offensive jutsu that he had ever learnt, and one that he knew would be formidable in battle, one many people wouldn’t joke about. If somebody that he knew from the academy or a few of his friends his age came around to see how he was going and he showed them this Jutsu, they would be more than just impressed. They would be blown away by the level of the Jutsu, and the complexity of it. They would think he is a master, a hero.
But as he was told, it would be dangerous for him to go around and just brag about this jutsu. It could waste and burn out his Chakra, and it could also get him into sticky situations, like a fight that he couldn’t finish. If he was showing off the Jutsu and people saw him, he could get himself into a fight with an extremely dangerous opponent, one that he would not be able to fight against. One false move, and he could get himself killed, beaten blue by a gang of hardcore criminals. Maybe that’s the reason why he had that dream, the one where he was attacked by that group of people that were out to kill him, but didn’t know why. Luckily he had that person save him, that unknown person helping him escape. He was his savior.
The jutsu was incredibly powerful, but came with a disasterous price. He would be able to harness this incredibly powerful jutsu, but his maturity and patience would be tested immensely, a test with large rewards and also large repercussions if he fails to realize it. This was a test that would find out if he was still a kid or not.
The jutsu was the ultimate waking call for Dagonn, with this being whether he knew if he was mature or not. At the time though, Dagonn had absolutely no idea that this was some kind of test. He thought that he was just learning and practising another Jutsu, just like any other time, but it was more than that.
After days and days of relentless practise of his Jutsu, he was so proficient at it that he could perform it multiple times a day, without having to rest at all. He could also do it while using his other Jutsu. He had incredible storages of Chakra, tapping in to areas that he had never explored before, finding more and more Chakra as he went along.
The more times he used the Jutsu, the better he got at using Chakra and also the Jutsu. He matured as well as he went along, He was mainly just waiting for the time that ‘Uncle’ would roll back into the village and ask to see how he was doing with the jutsu. But ‘Uncle’ didn’t show up for a long time. He waited the initial week, and thought ‘meh, he is probably just caught up in work’. But more weeks went by and there was still no sign of him showing up. Dagonn got so scared that he had to ask around to see if anyone knew if he was there. Dagonn begun to lose hope that he would come back, but his spirit for learning the Jutsu did not falter, trying hard and harder knowing that if ‘Uncle’ ever came back that he would be able to impress him and show off his skills.
One day, while practising his heart out with the Jutsu and making sure he had it correct, a familiar figure popped out of the Shadows with his hands in his pockets, casually awaiting for him to start doing the Jutsu. Dagonn immediately realised who the figure was, and was over excited. Before he started to do his Jutsu, he ran up to ‘Uncle’ and gave him a massive hug, almost in tears. He managed to mutter out the words “How come you were gone so long?” before ‘Uncle’ interrupted him and told him that he would explain everything to him after he had finished doing the Jutsu.
“Okay, well you better prepare yourself to explain it all, because I’m going to do this Jutsu and I am going to do it perfectly! You will see all these weeks worth of work, all the hard effort I have put in, you will see that it has not gone to waste! I will prove it to you and you will watch me do it! My jutsu will be better than yours is, I can guarantee it!” Dagonn said enthusiastically, sticking his Thumb out to give the ‘Thumbs Up’ signal.
On those words, he begun to charge his chakra intently, letting out short, deep screams as he was charging. The teachers face immediately turned from a confident expression to a surprised one. “It can’t be possible! The amount of chakra he is producing, it’s surreal! It’s out of this world! It isn’t possible, this can’t be happening. How did he improve so much over that much amount of time?” he question himself in his head, almost driving himself mad.
After finishing Charging up his Chakra, he started doing the hand signs for the first Jutsu he learnt. Uncle looked at him, even more surprised than he was before, looking at him like he was crazy. Uncle thought that using that Jutsu in sync with the other Jutsu would drain his chakra faster than a toilet draining water. Dagonn just smiled as the electricity spread throughout his body. His jutsu was extremely strong, and Uncle was immensely impressed by the sheer power of that Jutsu alone. Dagonn so far had exceeded all of his expectations.
“Throw a kunai or a rock or something at my body, Uncle. Just choose a spot and throw it, I don’t care where” Yelled out Dagonn over the buzzing of the electricity, waiting for Uncle to throw something at him. Uncle picked up the nearest rock he could find, and threw it at Dagonn as hard as he possibly could. It whizzed through the air, and it looked like it was going to hit Dagonn smack bang in the forehead. Dagonn quickly concentrated as much chakra as he could to his forehead, extending the range of the electricity. As the rock neared the forehead, the electricity thickened. Once the rock arrived, it crumbled up centimetres away from his face. Dagonn stood confidently, not even flinching from the rock. He wasn’t done yet though. He maintained the Jutsu and begun to charge his Chakra up again for the next jutsu.
After charging up his chakra, Dagonn begun to do the hand seals, replicating them just like ‘Uncle’ did, but even better. He perfectly replicated every single hand seal. Ram, Dragon and Bird were all perfected, and had been perfected for a long time, Dagonn just need a chance to show ‘Uncle’ what he could do. After finishing all the hand signs, he said out loud with confidence “Lightning Release – Flight of Screeching Eagles!” Dagonn closed his eyes, and in his head, determined the path that the three eagles would take. In an instant, Three Screeching Eagles appeared, making loud sounds. Uncle was once again in awe, watching as the three lightning bolts turned into perfectly shaped birds. The loud screeching commenced, and the three birds split off into three directions. The first bird was going straight ahead of him , the second one going right behind him, and the third aimed directly at Uncle’s feet.
The birds took their course and went to the exact spots that he directed it to. Uncle barely noticed that a bird was heading straight towards him, and he barely managed to get out of the way. He was ataken back by the sheer power of the Jutsu. If he was just a split second late on escaping it he could’ve died. He was pretty angry that Dagonn used it in this way. He was going to go on about him using it recklessly, but he couldn’t be bothered. He was extremely proud of the way that Dagonn used the Jutsu and the time that it took him to master. Dagonn was also proud of himself, and he stood on the spot giggling at the stupid look that Uncle had on his face.
“That is what you get for underestimating me Uncle, Hahahaha! “ he beamed out while laughing and dancing around. ‘Uncle’ saw the joke in it and begun to laugh manically as well, both of them ending up sprawled in a laughing fit on the floor. It was a fun day, and Dagonn was extremely happy that he had finally returned.

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+30 SP
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Tue May 21, 2013 4:16 am
I'll approve this since you put so much work into it, but there is a major problem with the post.
Your using an A-Rank jutsu that you clearly do not know, albeit stating "Near perfectly using it" cannot be counted. In a training session you gotta use what you have at that point in time, not jutsu your gonna know in the future that you are not capable of using at this point in time, considering you do not even have a specialty you cannot even attempt to use anything above C-Rank.

This serves as your first, and last warning. If something like this is done again, I will be forced to void the entire training, regardless of wordcount.
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Tue May 21, 2013 4:22 am
I was meant to be posting this after having the other ones accepted and learning the Jutsu because i couldn't be bothered waiting
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Tue May 21, 2013 4:32 am
Make sure they are approved first then, if not this training is still impossible to occur.
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Tue May 21, 2013 4:32 am
Okay, thanks for telling me at least.
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