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PostSubject: Simple bone stuff   Thu Aug 10, 2017 6:31 am

Name: Bone Sword (Hone no ken)
Element: None
Rank: D
Spec Type: Taijutsu
Backstory: -


Appearance: Described in Effect
Hand seals: -
Duration: until broken
Cool down: When broken 3 Posts
Range: -
Power: -
Speed: -
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:

The user of this jutsu pulls out his left or right arm bone that while he is doing so grows back. It will take the form of a pointy blade of the arm length the user has. It can be used as a rapier and has the durability and sharpness equal to the user's health +40 (due to the Kaguya bloodline) and can be used until it is destroyed. It is essential to use the Tsubaki no Mai, but can be used regardless if the user can perform the dance.


Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1000
Action Cost: 10
Mastery: -
Bonus Requirements: Kaguya Clan
Canon or Custom: Related to Canon

(This could make this jutsu a requirement for the Tsubaiki n Mai in which it is said that the sword can be used after the dance has been finished. I have always belived that Kaguya should be able to 1. creat their weapons even when not knowing their dances what could make weapon creation Ninjtsu (which would be okay wih me) 2. Do their dances with substitute weapons like the camelia with a rapier or the one wth a spine wipe with a real one and a lance or something

They create weapons out of their body and then use special created taijutsu to boost their limits with these weapons. But this is only my opinion and here for you to judge.)



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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Thu Aug 10, 2017 8:02 am

Change cool down to 5 posts, if broken before 5 posts then it is amount of posts used.


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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Thu Aug 10, 2017 9:20 am

done but can you tell me what is the system behind it?



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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Thu Aug 10, 2017 12:31 pm

There is t really a system behind it unfortunately, it's a way of ensuring s tech isn't broken/op. Also I apologize I should have caught this in my first run through but I was tired. Mastery will have to be a no, because you don't have any hand signs (as that makes complete sense with this tech) and you'd be able to give yourself a +40 Health to it eventually. So yea I apologize on making this take longer but please change mastery to a No, and then all will be well


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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Thu Aug 10, 2017 1:49 pm

Okay I'll do that but while I do that bear with me for a moment here.

Originally I wanted it to be 1 Post after it is broken (to ensure that there is o one just throwng around swords like hell)

You are suggesting:
If it breaks in the 1st post, I have 1 Post cooldown.
If it breaks in the 2nd post, I have 2 Posts cooldown.
If it breaks in the 3rd post, I have 3 Posts cooldown.
If it breaks in the 4th post, I have 4 Posts cooldown.
If it breaks in the 5th post, I have 5 Posts cooldown and so on.

So the longer I use it at first, the longer I have to wait to do it again. This actually does not make any sense to me.
If it was a technique that I was continually putting chakra into this would totally make sens because I would be exhausted holding it up 5 Posts. So after that having to not use it for 5 Posts makes perfekt sense.

But while creating that sword I do use chakra only while creating it, so the time after creating it should be the time I need to wait longer after. So if you insist on a leveled cooldown I would decrease it from 5 Posts if it breaks in the frist post after creating it going down until reaching the minimum of 1 Post after I have used it for a while, because in that time the bones should have recovered their usual hardeness.



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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Fri Aug 11, 2017 11:36 pm

Your argument makes perfects sense so how about this:

Cool down will be amount of posts used, maxes at 3 posts. So the cool down will never exceed three posts, so if you use it and it breaks after 8 posts cool down is 3 posts. Does this sound like a fair compromise?


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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Sat Aug 12, 2017 12:41 am

but this is what I critizied i the first place.
Let's just make it 3 Posts when ever because let's just walk it again.
More cooldown the longer it is used does not make sense, because using it quickly again after just using it should be harder than using it after a while of waiting or using it.
I do not mind the cooldown, I just want it to have a logical reason.

If I pull it out the bones grow back. After the bones grow back you have to wait until the bones have been infused with chakra again to use them. This takes more time shortly after being used than when the bones have had time to grow. And all this technique does is creating a sword out of bones. Nothing more to it.



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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Sat Aug 12, 2017 1:02 am

Okay fine 3 post cool down make your edit and I'll approve


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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Sat Aug 12, 2017 6:25 am

Thank you and sorry for the inconvinience ♥



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PostSubject: Re: Simple bone stuff   Sat Aug 12, 2017 6:52 am

Approved


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