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Tsukamu(Ensnare) Empty Tsukamu(Ensnare)

Thu Sep 23, 2021 4:45 pm
Name: Tsukamu(Ensnare).
Element: --
Rank: B/A.
Specialty: Bukijutsu.
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory: Having studied the Chakra Threads incorporated in shinobi puppetry, the Iouchiryo designed a technique similar to such, but rather than relying on chakra on its own they’ve based the art primarily within skillful manipulation of wire.

Appearance: The user will clench their fingers as if into a claw and twist their hands at the wrist, causing the affected wire to suddenly spiral inwards, rapidly enclosing the target in a cage of threads, before cocooning them completely.

Handseals: --
Duration: Up to 4 posts.
Cooldown: Duration + 2 posts.
Range: Reach of weapon/implement.
Power: 30/50 (Scales off Speed).
Speed: 30/50 (Scales off Speed).
Health: --
Stat Boosts: --
What it does: Requiring the use of wire, rope, or something similar, the user can perform this technique in one of three ways—all of which also require that the user maintain a decent grip on some portion of the utilized wire. The first requires prior setup and simply allows them to collapse preexisting wire inwards around a target to wrap them in wire at jutsu speed. The second method requires the user to first release loops and lines of wire, after which they manipulate them to rapidly collapse upon their target and restrict their movement at jutsu speed. The user may initiate this technique either very far or very close to themselves so long as wires are present, should they do so within 5 feet of themselves, they can be caught in the technique--or they may create a gap for them to escape through. However, if the user possesses the Wire Handling skill it will allow them to slip through the wire snare, without making it easier for their target to escape.

This technique only functions on solid targets, but if successful the technique restricts all movement unless the target's Strength surpasses the power of this technique. Each post a character is ensnared, the wires constrict further, causing damage equivalent to base jutsu power (30/50).

Notably, Tsukamu can be utilized on individual parts of a target, such as limbs, and should such occur, said part cannot perform handseals or other movements without first destroying the offending wire via the same strength check mechanic or a technique dealing sufficient damage to destroy the wire. Should a limb be caught and the victim possess a Strength stat 20 points less than the power of this technique, then the user may tear off the limb. Notably, limb removal is only possible if the technique's speed/power are at least 50.

Character Specific: --
Wordcount to learn: 1500/2500.
Action Cost: 30/40 activation cost, 15/20 maintenance cost.
Mastery: Y.
Bonus Requirements:
Creation Type: Site canon.


Last edited by Koutaku on Mon Sep 27, 2021 4:42 pm; edited 7 times in total
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Tsukamu(Ensnare) Empty Re: Tsukamu(Ensnare)

Sun Sep 26, 2021 2:50 am
Hello Yoshua! I'll be trialing your technique today!

So couple of things. First for damage, instead of the formula you've provided, would you mind making it equal to the base power of the technique per post (30/50)? Both for simplicity's sake in using it and consistent damage

Secondly, would you mind adding an upkeep cost equal to half the base cost of the technique?

If you have any comments, questions, or concerns, feel free to message me on Discord!

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Tsukamu(Ensnare) Empty Re: Tsukamu(Ensnare)

Sun Sep 26, 2021 3:34 am
Those are easy fixes, done and done Smile
Wonderful working with you again Plant Razz
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Tsukamu(Ensnare) Empty Re: Tsukamu(Ensnare)

Mon Sep 27, 2021 3:04 pm
Trial Approved!

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