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Cosplay Queen Saya
Cosplay Queen Saya
Ryo : 109650

evening elephant[v7.2] Empty evening elephant[v7.2]

Sun Aug 29, 2021 9:47 pm
Name: Evening elephant
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Taijutsu
Particular Jutsu Type:
Backstory: -

Appearance: evening elephant[v7.2] WLDY3n

Duration: 1 post or until maximum distance is reached
Cooldown: 2/3 posts
Range: 20/40m
Power: 60/STR
Speed: 60/STR
Health: 60/STR
Stat Boosts:
What it does: The user unleashes a devastating punch, releasing a wave of pressurized air 10/20 meters in diameter that travels at the maximum range at technique power. If the opponent has less strength than the technique power, they will be blown back10/20m while being dealt blunt force damage equal to technique power in all areas having contact with the pressurized air. If a chakra-based jutsu with less power comes in contact with this technique, the part of the technique that comes into contact with will be dissipated, not the entire technique. If a physical construct with less health or power comes into contact with this technique, it will be blown back 10/20m. Ninja tools that come into contact with this technique will be blown back10/20m at the user with the same power and speed initially thrown if their throw speed is less than this technique's power. This technique affects armor, puppets, and physical constructs with health as if it is a blunt weapon at technique power.(this tech does not dissipate enhancers or amplifiers)

At S Rank, the technique has enough power to alter the terrain, making a crater with a diameter equal to the technique's current diameter, with a depth of half its current diameter when directed at the ground. Alternatively, it can carve out a path the length of the maneuver's range unless stopped by a technique or construct of equivalent or higher power. Using this technique requires activation of an A rank or higher enhancer active unless the user has 100 str or higher.

If this technique is activated while the user is under the effects of the 5th or higher gate, it may be used a total of 2 times before the cooldown is activated, adding +1 to the cd if used in this way. These posts must be consecutive, meaning the cd starts when you reach 2 uses or go a post without using the technique, whichever comes first. in order to activate the multi use clause explained above, the user must pay the ap cost for the jutsu each time they fire a new one.

Character Specific: no
Wordcount to learn: 2750/5k
Action Cost: 45/100
Bonus Requirements: 8 inner gates
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: cannon

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Last edited by Cosplay Queen Saya on Fri Sep 03, 2021 8:10 pm; edited 6 times in total
Ryo : 210250

evening elephant[v7.2] Empty Re: evening elephant[v7.2]

Wed Sep 01, 2021 11:08 pm
Alright lets go
-Duration - should be 1 post or until maximum distance is reach(to prevent timelining)
-Stats - the normal base ap cost for an A rank is 50, and the calculation you have in the what it does section also uses 50, do you want it to be 60? If you do, please change the WC, calculation, and ap cost(also Stat S ranks are 100 ap) to reflect the added stats
-the range increasing calculation for this technique is strange, in that the S ranked version will almost always be smaller than the A ranked version. This is fine, just wanted to point it out.
-should say that this technique won't dissipate enhancers or amplifiers
-I think that the bit affecting physical things is worded strangely. Shouldn't physical things with less health be smashed as if with a blunt weapon, and if they have lower power but higher strength it gets pushed back? This should be the case with basically everything physical.
- This should probably  require an A rank or above Strength Enhancer to be used
Cosplay Queen Saya
Cosplay Queen Saya
Ryo : 109650

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Thu Sep 02, 2021 12:03 am
edites made and also some changes!
Ryo : 210250

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Thu Sep 02, 2021 5:53 pm
Trial Approved
Ichigo Sato
Ichigo Sato
Ryo : 61150

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