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Glare Empty Glare

Sun May 23, 2021 12:22 pm
Name: Glare
Element: -
Rank: B
Specialty: Genjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: -
Backstory:
Created long ago by Genjutsu masters with powerful doujutsu’s capable of using visual genjutsu as a way to force the opponent to look into their eyes. Allowing them to activate their genjutsu. 

Appearance: The user’s eyes glow forcing the victim to want to look into the user’s eyes. 
Handseals:  Bird, Tiger, Rat, Bird
Duration: 1
Cooldown: 3
Range: 15m
Power: 40
Speed: -
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
The user of this jutsu creates a whistling noise either via their mouth or an object created in the creation center. If the user creates the whistling from their mouth the range of this jutsu is reduced to 5 meters. Anyone that can hear the whistling and is in range of the jutsu has an overpowering urge to look into the eyes of the user. Anyone with less chakra than the power of this jutsu must look into the eyes of the user, however, anyone with chakra less than half the power of this jutsu must make direct eye contact with the user. The difference in being that someone can look into the user's eye using the corner of their vision bypassing a genjutsu trigger, and having to look directly into the users eye allowing for visual genjutsu to be used.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1,750
Action Cost: 40
Mastery: no
Bonus Requirements: Genjutsu main spec
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Last edited by Travin Rentei on Sun May 23, 2021 3:33 pm; edited 1 time in total
Kita Hajime
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Glare Empty Re: Glare

Sun May 23, 2021 3:24 pm
Hello Travin! I'll be trial modding your application today!

So some slight notes for you.

This Genjutsu WILL need hand seal requirements, just due to its rank and power

Secondly, the range on the jutsu will need to be cut down in the case of the creation center item clause to 15 meters, not only due to the fact that it's too high for its rank or level of implicit power, but also due to the fact that it's a bit difficult to look in someone's eyes from 30 meters away (that's nearly 100 feet!)

Finally, the last line of this jutsu is a bit... strange. I don't see the difference between looking into someone's eyes and making direct eye contact. That will need to be changed/clarified

If you have any comments, questions, or concerns, feel free to message me on Discord!
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Glare Empty Re: Glare

Sun May 23, 2021 3:36 pm
Looks good to me! Trial Approved
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Glare Empty Re: Glare

Tue May 25, 2021 7:38 pm
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