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Sat Feb 20, 2021 10:22 pm
Name: Rama
Element: N/A
Rank: B/A
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory:   Hyuuga's have been known to release chakra from their tenketsu, thanks to their gentle fist style. However, The  Divine Palm, who always seeks to explore every possible ability of his clan's style, would take the gentle fist style to a greater height. 

Appearance:  Chakra beam is released from their palms
Handseals:  
B-rank: Ox  - Fire - Dragon - Boa -  Dog
A-rank: Ox - Fire - Dragon -Boa - Dog - Snake - Ram 
Duration: up to 2 posts 
Cooldown: Post used + 2
Range: 15/25
Power: 49 / 60
Speed: 49/ 60
Health: --
Stat Boosts: --
What it does:  This technique uses the same principle of releasing chakra from the body. However, instead of releasing chakra from a wide area, the palms are released from a point. The user releases a blast of chakra beam from their palms. The beam is only half a meter wide and tall and travels at jutsu speed up to 15/25 meters. This jutsu has piercing power equals to the power of jutsu.  If the user misses their mark, they can choose to move their palms to strike down their target while releasing the blast, but this motion can only be made once perusing this technique. 

This tech scales on vigor.

Character Specific:  --
Wordcount to learn: 1950/2650
Action Cost:  35/40, 20/ 20 for upkeep
Mastery:  N/A
Bonus Requirement: Be a Hyuuga, know Heavenly palm rotation
Canon or Custom or Village Exclusive: Hoshi Exclusive


Last edited by Sakuragi Hyuuga on Tue Feb 23, 2021 4:59 am; edited 3 times in total
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Rama Empty Re: Rama

Sun Feb 21, 2021 5:54 am
"it is released from a point, the eyes." - Doesn't really make sense mate unless you want to blind yourself. I'm under the impression that concentrating chakra and releasing it through your eyes will blind you and completely destroy your eyes.

"Power: Chakra/2 , + 30/50
Speed: Chakra /2, +30/50" - This would clearly be a Ninjutsu so I don't understand why it's scaling based on half of chakra.

"Spec Type: Gentle fist style" - What exactly is the Gentle Fist style in the context of spec?
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Rama Empty Re: Rama

Sun Feb 21, 2021 12:47 pm
Edited as per Vlad’s request on Discord.
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Mon Feb 22, 2021 6:50 pm
"Spec Type: Gentle fist taijutsu" - It will need to be Ninjutsu.

"Action Cost: 30/40" - Increase B rank AP cost and Maintain as it's higher than base Power.

"only 1 meter wide and tal" - Thats too big.
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Rama Empty Re: Rama

Tue Feb 23, 2021 5:02 am
Spec changed to Ninjutsu as requested.

Increased the app cost and upkeep too.

Woow, 1 meter wide and tall is too big ? 
Reduced it to half a meter, if that's ok.
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Rama Empty Re: Rama

Fri Feb 26, 2021 7:40 am
Bump
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Sat Feb 27, 2021 7:00 am
Trial Approved
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Sat Feb 27, 2021 7:01 am
approved i guess
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