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Yamaguchi Kouma
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Thu Jan 14, 2021 1:34 am
Name:  Puppetry Performance: Skillful Achievement with a Human Body
Element: N/A
Rank: A
Specialty: Puppetry
Special Jutsu Type:
Backstory:

Appearance: Chakra strings extend from the user's fingers and attach to their target across the body of their target.
Handseals: N/A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: posts used +2
Range: Copies range of chakra threads used
Power: 50
Speed: 50
Health: 50
Stat Boosts: N/A
It does: Through the use of this jutsu, the user can take control of a human body by attaching their chakra threads to said body and forcibly taking control of their body so long as they have five threads attached to said body. If the target of this jutsu is being held against their will by this jutsu, they can resist its effects if their strength is greater than the power of this jutsu. Once the technique has worked and attached to a target, if enough threads are cut to make the number attached to the target less than five, this jutsu's power is cut in half(rounded down). During the technique's duration, the strings may be reattached if cut or broken, re-establishing control over a person, getting rid of the debuff caused by less than five strings, or attaching and controlling an entirely different person. Doing so will cost 8 AP per thread recreated, which does not extend the technique's duration. The user can choose to switch the target of this technique(thereby severing and recreating all of the threads attached to the previous target) at the cost of 20 ap, which does not increase the technique's duration.

Furthermore, when using this jutsu, the user may only manipulate their threads at the speed of this jutsu [This only applies to attaching strings, not manipulating the body once the string is attached]. For all intents and purposes, a person controlled by this jutsu is considered a puppet for movement speed (i.e., they are controlled at the speed a normal puppet would be). Simultaneously, their strength stat remains at its natural level, not being influenced by the chakra strings. This technique can only control a single individual at a time, and during this technique, the chakra threads of the user are considered to have a health state equal to that of this jutsu. Although this jutsu has a power stat, it by itself can deal no damage to anyone and does not clash with techniques; it either gets destroyed(if its health is less than the power of the technique), or it harmlessly passes through or moves around opposing techniques(if it's health is more than the power of the technique).


Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 2,500
Action Cost: 40, 20 upkeep
Mastery: N
Bonus Requirements: Chakra Threads
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon

ORIGINAL HERE <----


Last edited by Yamaguchi Kouma on Fri Feb 05, 2021 7:52 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Thu Feb 04, 2021 11:49 am
"During the duration of the technique, the strings may be reattached if cut or broken, re-establishing control over a person, getting rid of the debuff caused by less than five strings, or attach to and control an entirely different person." - For this part, I'd like there to be a cost for the reattached thread. 8 AP cost additional to connect another thread. If you are to sever to take control of someone else that would be have of the AP of 40 making it 20. The duration is not reset. 



Other than that I see nothing wrong 
Yamaguchi Kouma
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Fri Feb 05, 2021 7:52 pm
Edited, I hope I worded it all correctly
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Fri Feb 05, 2021 8:39 pm
Thank you for entertaining my request. Trial approved.
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