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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Water Prison Shark Dance

Tue Jan 12, 2021 7:43 pm
Name: Water Prison Shark Dance
Element: Water
Rank: S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: Debuff
Backstory: The legendary Kisame Hoshigaki developed this jutsu to utilize his natural abilities as a Hoshigaki fully. He often used this jutsu in conjunction with his sword, Samehada; however, this wasn’t necessary for the jutsu.

Appearance: A giant bubble of water formed from the remnants of the great explosive colliding wave.
Handseals: Monkey, Snake, Ram, Horse, Hare, Bird, Dog, Boar
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: Posts Used +2
Range: 50-meter radius
Power: Vigor Stat
Speed: Vigor Stat
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: This jutsu can be cast one of two ways. One way is the user expells a large amount of water from their mouth, which expands at jutsu speed to a dome with a radius of 50. Alternatively, once any aoe water jutsu that is centered around the user has been cast, this jutsu may be activated at any point, making the preexisting height and distance of the water jutsu the distance expanded on for this jutsu. Keep in mind that once shark dance is activated, the first jutsu will go on cooldown, meaning the water no longer has damaging effects. For example, if water prison shark dance is activated when the water aoe has expanded 20 meters in all directions, the dome will start with a height and radius of 20 meters. From there, the water expands at jutsu speed of shark dance until it creates a dome with a radius of 50 meters, with the caster acting as the center. 

This jutsu acts as an aura and follows the caster at the speed they are currently moving at. They will always remain at the center of the dome on the horizontal plane, however they can still move upwards and downwards through the water without the jutsu moving. Anyone within this technique is forced to swim instead of any other means of travel. A single character inside this jutsu (selected by the caster) will receive a 70 point debuff to any two stats of the casters choosing. The opponents stats may not be debuffed below one. If any character remains within the water prison for two posts they will fall unconscious due to lack of oxygen, and after an additional two posts they will die. However this can be avoided if the character has a means of breathing underwater. Any enemy jutsu used within the dome will have to clash with the power of shark dance. If the enemy jutsu wins it will pass through, destroying the water it touches, however if it loses the clash, the enemy jutsu will be destroyed immediately. Parts of the water that get destroyed by enemy jutsu will leave pockets of empty space within the water dome. These spaces don't contain oxygen, so they can not be used to reset the amount of posts until knockout and death. The caster's jutsu as well as any close range taijutsu and weaponry attacks (anything that is soley the body and weapon, not involving chakra) will not clash and simply pass through the water. Furthermore, the dome posses the ability to repair itself at jutsu speed. Naturally this only works as long as a portion of the dome is still standing. If the entire thing is obliterated this technique will be put on cooldown.  Additionally, while shark dance is active, the water from the dome can be used by only the caster to spawn water style jutsu.

The only way to escape the dome is to swim out of it or survive until the jutsu is dispelled. Once the jutsu is dispelled, the water making up the dome will fall to the earth and be used for water-style jutsu. However, if the jutsu is inside something that can contain the water, the water is held in place, and the enemy can still drown. Any “drowning counters” will be carried over and continued until they get oxygen. However, at this point the debuff is no longer applied and the water no longer follows the user.

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 5000
Action Cost: 100 activation, 50 upkeep
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements:  Know Water Prison, Hoshigaki Pureblood, at least 5 other water element jutsu of ranks A or S
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Bloodline: Hoshigaki exclusive


Last edited by Gonk on Mon Nov 15, 2021 10:01 pm; edited 16 times in total
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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Re: Water Prison Shark Dance

Sat Jan 16, 2021 5:28 am
HI.

Firstly, need at least 1 more handseal for an S Rank.

We will need a Speed stat, one that corrolates to the speed at which the Water Prison Expands to full range.

Just so I understand, as long as a character interacting with the technique can reach the edge, they are able to leave the technique, is that correct? If so, please include that just for the sake of completeness.
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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Re: Water Prison Shark Dance

Mon Jan 18, 2021 8:56 pm
I added the hand seals but it already specified the only was to leave was to hit the edge with more power than the jutsu. 
The only way to escape the dome is to hit the dome with more power than then jutsu’s power.
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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Re: Water Prison Shark Dance

Mon Jan 18, 2021 10:48 pm
@Gonk wrote:I added the hand seals but it already specified the only was to leave was to hit the edge with more power than the jutsu. 
The only way to escape the dome is to hit the dome with more power than then jutsu’s power.

How does that make sense then? It's made of water not steel? Why can't someone just swim out to the edge and walk of out it? I understand it only being destroyed by a hit to the edge, but it doesn't make sense with this being a pure body of water that you wouldn't be able to leave out of one end.

To clarify, I'm not against it, just need it clarified as in, what makes the outer part more durable than regular water, yada-yada.
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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Re: Water Prison Shark Dance

Mon Jan 25, 2021 10:09 pm
ok made some changes
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Tue Jan 26, 2021 5:50 pm
"it cuts through the water but doesn't destroy it unless it is bigger than the entire dome."

So what happens if the domes cut in half does it repair by connecting the water from either half?
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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Re: Water Prison Shark Dance

Tue Jan 26, 2021 7:33 pm
@Gonk wrote:the water repares itself at jutsu speed immediately after it's been damaged.
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Sun Jan 31, 2021 4:02 am
Looks good, trial approved.
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Water Prison Shark Dance  Empty Re: Water Prison Shark Dance

Sat Feb 06, 2021 12:48 pm
Hoshigaki clan or DNA

This can be a clan exclusive jutsu, but it doesn't make sense for it to be tied to the DNA or a transplant of the clan. You can instead put taught by a member of the clan in its place
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Sat Feb 06, 2021 3:48 pm
yea that's true it has been changed
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