Naruto RPG
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.
Copyright
Naruto, Naruto Shippuden
© Masashi Kishimoto

Naruto RPG © LostLegend

©opyrighted
All things created on this site are the works of their respective owners, Masashi Kishimoto, LostLegend, Cloud, Masuru, Jinchuriki3, and all related topic and forum creators. Information may not be taken from forum descriptions, category descriptions, topics or posts without the creator's permission in any way, shape or form. Anyone who copies the site's content without said creators permission will be tracked down and punished.

Protected by Copyscape Duplicate Content Finder
Guest
New PM's : 0
Post Count
337
Private messages
Staff List
Administrators:
Mizuki Ohta [Head Admin]

Moderators:
Kenshin [Head Mod]

Trial Staff:
Kita Hajime [Trial Admin]
Ryuzaki [Trial Mod]
Daiko [Trial Mod]
Nova Tsuba [Trial Mod]
Moosiah [Trial Admin]
Suika Yuki [Trial Admin]
Guren Chinoike [Trial Mod]

Approval Moderators:
Ita

NPC'ers:
All Staff


Log in

HOVER TO REVEAL KAGE


Bijuu

HOVER TO REVEAL OWNER


Important Threads
Top posting users this week
74 Posts - 29%
34 Posts - 13%
31 Posts - 12%
23 Posts - 9%
22 Posts - 9%
21 Posts - 8%
13 Posts - 5%
12 Posts - 5%
12 Posts - 5%
10 Posts - 4%
Word Counter

Go down
Travin Rentei
Travin Rentei
Jounin
Jounin
Ryo : 87764
100%

Binding Snake Glare V7 Empty Binding Snake Glare V7

Mon Dec 14, 2020 3:33 pm
Name:  Binding Snake Glare Spell
Element: -
Rank: C Rank
Specialty: S/T
Special Jutsu Type:
Backstory:


Appearance:  
snakes are 5 meters long, and 6 inches wide
Binding Snake Glare V7 Bindin10

Handseals: Rat-Dog-Dragon
Duration: 4
Cooldown: 4
Range: 5m
Power: 25
Speed:  25
Health: 25
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
The user summons two large snakes, that seem to appear out of the user’s sleeves. by manipulating space-time, the user actually makes small one-way portals that the snakes can travel through (portals are invisible), and due to the manipulation of space-time they can come out of any sleeve as long as the sleeve isn't somehow completely skin tight. The snakes will just appear to squeeze through the sleeve.

If the user doesn't have sleeves, the snakes appear to grow from their wrist.

snakes move at jutsu speed, have a health of 20, and have a strength and sharpness of 25. The snakes benefit from chakra scaling (this is taken as the snakes either becoming stronger or summoning stronger snakes).

When jutsu ends, snakes (if still alive) disappear in a puff of smoke like a normal summon. If either snake dies, they cannot replace the snake with another until their next topic (so if one dies, they can only summon one for the remainder of the topic).

Snakes have a paralyzing venom, if bitten, and not treated by any medical technique capable of removing the venom in the first post after being bitten. Anyone with strength less than half the power of this jutsu will be completely paralyzed for 2 posts. Anyone with a strength less than the power of this jutsu is paralyzed for 1 post with people with strength equal to or more than the power of this jutsu is immune. 

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1,125
Action Cost: 22, 11
Mastery: -
Bonus Requirements: Snake Contract, 1 other snake jutsu
Canon, Custom, Bloodline or Village Exclusive:  
original, Canon


Last edited by Travin Rentei on Tue Dec 15, 2020 10:10 am; edited 2 times in total
Ichigo Sato
Ichigo Sato
Jounin
Jounin
Ryo : 67650
100%

Binding Snake Glare V7 Empty Re: Binding Snake Glare V7

Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:44 am
Hello Travin, I'll be the Trial looking over your app.

Similar points to your other app, TL;DR:
- extra hand seal, edit speed portion according to the 20-29 Tier for C-Rank, increase wordcount to 1125 and AP cost to 22. 

For your last paragraph I think it wouldn't hurt adding a clause that says "If not treated by any medical technique capable of removing the venom in the first post after being bitten...". Mainly so that the ones who aren't immune have at least some sort of last resort to resist being paralyzed.

Thank you.
Travin Rentei
Travin Rentei
Jounin
Jounin
Ryo : 87764
100%

Binding Snake Glare V7 Empty Re: Binding Snake Glare V7

Tue Dec 15, 2020 10:09 am
made the edites and thanks for looking man
Ichigo Sato
Ichigo Sato
Jounin
Jounin
Ryo : 67650
100%

Binding Snake Glare V7 Empty Re: Binding Snake Glare V7

Tue Dec 15, 2020 1:22 pm
Trial Approved
Ayato Hyuuga
Ayato Hyuuga
Hogokage
Hogokage
Ryo : 63283
100%

Binding Snake Glare V7 Empty Re: Binding Snake Glare V7

Wed Dec 16, 2020 8:59 am
Approved
Sponsored content

Binding Snake Glare V7 Empty Re: Binding Snake Glare V7

Back to top
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum