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Sun Dec 13, 2020 1:25 pm
Name:  Hidden Shadow Snake Hands
Element: -
Rank: C
Specialty: S/T
Special Jutsu Type:
Backstory:

Appearance:
Snakes are 5 inches in diameter

Spoiler:
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Handseals:  Rat-Tiger-Dragon
Duration:  up to 3 posts
Cooldown:  posts used +1
Range:  15 meters
Power: 25
Speed: 25
Health: 25
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
Upon performing the hand seals of this jutsu, users can make space-time portals on their arms in which up to 5 snakes can travel through, either appearing out of the user’s sleeves or on any other part of their arm if it is bare. Despite their size, snakes will be able to travel through the user’s clothes effortlessly, the jutsu altering the space within their clothing to make the snakes fit without there being any noticeable change.

Snakes can also be summoned from the mouth, but only 1 at any given time.

Snakes have a strength stat and their fangs have a base sharpness equal to jutsu power, speed equal to jutsu speed, and health equal to jutsu health. The jutsu does benefit from chakra scaling.

Snakes cannot detach themselves from the user, meaning the end of their tails will remain on the other side of the portal. They can have a length of their body equal to 15 meters outside of the portal. Snakes can either be retracted into the user’s arm or disappear in a cloud of smoke when the jutsu is ended.

Individual snakes can be desummoned throughout the user of this jutsu, and the user can continue to summon snakes from their arms or mouth throughout the duration of the jutsu as long as they don't exceed the number of 5 total during the duration (can't summon 5, have one die, and summon a 6th next post to take the spot of the dead 5th in one use of the jutsu).

Snakes are living, meaning they can be killed by poisons and such.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1,125
Action Cost: 25,10
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Snake Contract
Canon, Custom, Bloodline or Village Exclusive:  
canon,  original


Last edited by Travin Rentei on Tue Dec 15, 2020 10:06 am; edited 1 time in total
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Hidden Shadow Snake Hands V7 Empty Re: Hidden Shadow Snake Hands V7

Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:42 am
Hello Travin, I'll be the Trial looking over your app.

1) I'd like to see an extra hand seal.
2) the power/speed/health tiers for C-Rank are as following: 20-29, so I'd like you to change the speed portion accordingly.
3) please increase the wordcount to learn to 1125 considering how much more the power of this technique is from the beginning marker of a C-Rank technique.
4) I'd like to see an upkeep, 10 should be fine.

Thank you.
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Tue Dec 15, 2020 10:07 am
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Tue Dec 15, 2020 1:20 pm
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