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Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon Empty Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon

Wed Dec 02, 2020 9:04 pm
Name: Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon
Element: Water
Rank: A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: Debuff/Collaboration

Backstory: Rumor has it that many years ago, before the eruption, a pair of brothers used this technique to hold back the legendary four tailed beast long enough to seal him into the body of a young boy, at the cost of their own lives. Whether this rumor is true or not is undetermined. Regardless, this collaboration ninjutsu has recently dug up from old scrolls located in Kirigakure.


Appearance: Combining the appearance of both the Great Vortex Technique and the Water Dragon Bullet Technique, the technique resembles a dragon composed entirely of water and glowing with the average color of its user's chakra, spinning in a massive, violent vortex towards an opponent. The finer details on the appearance of the dragon vary from user to user, but it will always possess a length of 50 Meters, and a mouth that can open up to 8 Meters Wide

Handseals: Water Dragon Bullet (Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar)/Great Water Vortex (Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Ram)

Duration: up 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Range: 70 Meters Length, 35 Meters Diameter
Power: Water Dragon Power + Great Vortex Power / 2 + 40
Speed: Water Dragon Speed + Great Vortex Speed / 2 + 40
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A

What it does: Two users must perform two jutsu in tandem, with one user using the Water Dragon Bullet, and the other user performing the Great Vortex Technique. The jutsu will either be expelled from the mouth of one user (the one using Great Vortex Technique) or be formed from a source of nearby water (lake, river, rain, etc). With the first option the users simply have to be within 10m of each other, and with the second option, it can be created anywhere in a 10-meter radius of the users (Both users must be within range of the same water source), but can’t be created less than 5 meters from another character. Despite the mode of formation, the dragon begins as a .5 meter diameter stream of water which travels outward from its point of origin and can expand up to 30 meters in diameter and 70 meters in length. While the jutsu is active, the user has limited control over the movement of the dragon once it is in motion. The spiral dragon can move up to 90 degrees at jutsu speed in any one direction once per use of this technique. It has the power to uproot trees, and in its wake, it usually carves out the ground.

The movements of the dragon can be "manipulated" only within a 35-meter radius from the users (Water Dragon Bullet user) location. When the dragon or any part of it moves beyond the maximum range, the chakra holding the water together dissipates, with the water splashing harmlessly to the ground. Upon reaching maximum duration the dragon disappears entirely from the field. The same is true if it is remotely deactivated before that. Should the dragon make contact with an opponent, they will be caught within the raging rapids within. The resulting torrent will deal damage equal to jutsu power and will force anyone caught within back the full length of the technique (provided that they were not torn to shreds by the initial damage). If the target is trapped within the vortex and they possess a strength lower than the power of this technique they will be violently pushed back by the churning rapids. On the other hand, if the target is trapped within the vortex but has a strength greater than the power of this jutsu, they are capable of resisting the knockback effects of the vortex and can escape or "swim" out from the jutsu. It should be noted that even if the knockback is resisted they will still take HP damage equal to jutsu power.

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 1250 (A user can use this technique with anyone who also has this technique. You cannot use this technique if you and your partner do not possess both required jutsu, or if you use the same jutsu when using this technique, EX. Both users use the Great Vortex Technique. This is non-negotiable, and one user must use one of the two jutsu, while their partner uses the other).
Action Cost: Each user pays the AP cost of the technique that they are using to form this collaboration technique
Mastery: N/A
Bonus Requirements: Both users must have the water element, and know at least either Water Dragon Bullet or Great Vortex Technique.
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Last edited by Kenshin on Fri Jun 18, 2021 2:43 am; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : Balance)
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Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon Empty Re: Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon

Tue Dec 15, 2020 11:43 pm
Looks good after edits, Trial approved!
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Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon Empty Re: Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon

Thu Dec 17, 2020 11:47 am
Edited the template as the spacing was a bit confusing.


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Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon Empty Re: Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon

Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:19 am
Approved of edits (Kita fixed the cost as this is a collab technique)
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Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon Empty Re: Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon

Fri Jun 18, 2021 2:44 am
Updated - Removed debuff, clarified some confusing wording and added some much needed clarifications for user distances and how the technique works 
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Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon Empty Re: Water Release: Spiraling Water Dragon

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