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Mon Sep 28, 2020 1:46 pm
Name: Taijutsu Cloak
Element: N/A
Rank: A
Specialty: Taijutsu
Special Jutsu Type: Enhancer
Backstory: A technique developed by Shira of the Feathers, the taijutsu master who discovered the Divine Breathing Technique and the Seven Heavenly Breaths.


Appearance:  
Taijutsu Cloak:
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An aura of chakra coats the user. Its appearance varies on the natural chakra nature of the user.
Handseals: N/A
Duration: 2 Posts
Cooldown: number of Posts used +2
Range: user
Power: -
Speed: -
Health: 50
Stat Boosts: +50 Strength, +50 Speed

The user breathes with rhythm and energizes their muscles. Their blood flows with such force that their circulation causes their chakra to burst for their pores, forming a barrier. The health of the barrier scales off of strength but does not benefit from the DR of maneuvers. If an attack exceeds the barrier's health, the barrier breaks, but the enhancement does not end.

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 2500
Action Cost:  40 AP, 20 Upkeep
Mastery: N/A
Bonus Requirements: Taijutsu Specialty / Divine Breathing Technique / 50 Strength Stat
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon


Last edited by Raleth on Fri Mar 19, 2021 2:06 pm; edited 6 times in total
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Taijutsu Cloak Empty Re: Taijutsu Cloak

Wed Sep 30, 2020 6:25 pm
Alright first things first - 
you have two stages and 3 durations. So remove the last one and keep the durations timed at 3/4 actually.
The range needs to be brought down to 2/4 at least.
What do you mean by the health being 50? It can withstand attacks of 50 or lower without breaking? Does that mean jutsu dont affect you and it acts like armor? I need clarity here.

Lastly - You cannot debuff and enhance at the same time. You may have either be an option but upon activation you must choose one or the other. And for the rest of the thread that option is not repeatable. Meaning that if you choose to debuff someone you cannot then re-debuff them once it comes off cooldown.
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Taijutsu Cloak Empty Re: Taijutsu Cloak

Thu Oct 01, 2020 2:20 pm
Edits made
Defined the health of the jutsu as a barrier that debuffs the power of incoming attacks
Made it so that upon actuvatioj the user must choose to utlize the technique as either a debuff or a barrier 

Edited the duration as well as the range
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Taijutsu Cloak Empty Re: Taijutsu Cloak

Fri Oct 02, 2020 9:48 pm
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Taijutsu Cloak Empty Re: Taijutsu Cloak

Mon Nov 23, 2020 1:09 pm
Unapproved since I did not approve of edits.
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Taijutsu Cloak Empty Re: Taijutsu Cloak

Wed Dec 30, 2020 11:18 pm
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Fri Mar 19, 2021 1:50 pm
unapproving for edits per discussion with Raleth
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Fri Apr 02, 2021 7:34 pm
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