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Kizmaru Senju
Kizmaru Senju
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V7 Earth Spear Empty V7 Earth Spear

Sun Aug 23, 2020 5:36 pm
Name: Earth Spear
Element: Earth
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: Enhancer
Backstory: -

Appearance: 
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Handseals: -
Duration: 2/3 Posts
Cooldown: +2 Posts/5 Posts
Range: Self
Power: -
Speed: 50/Vigor
Health: 50/Vigor
Stat Boosts: +50 strength and speed/+70 strength and speed
What it does: The user flows earth-nature chakra through all or parts of their body starting from their torso at jutsu speed, causing their skin to become noticeably darker, all while increasing their defensive and offensive power to become as hard as diamond. This allows the user to easily withstand most attacks with little to no damage and resist stat checks involving the use of the user's skin that have less power than this technique's health. While activated, the user's skin acts as physical armor and gains durability related to this technique's health. It can block Lightning-based attacks (at a -25 disadvantage) but, if the lightning attack's power exceeds this technique's health, it will prematurely turn off the effects of this jutsu immediately.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to Learn: 2,500/5,000
Action Cost: 40, 25 Upkeep/100, 50 Upkeep
Mastery: No
Bonus Requirements: 
-Chakra Infusion
-3 C-Rank or above Taijutsu techniques
Canon, Custom, Bloodline, or Village Exclusive: Canon

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Last edited by Kizmaru Senju on Thu Mar 18, 2021 4:50 pm; edited 13 times in total
Guren Chinoike
Guren Chinoike
Jounin
Jounin
Ryo : 137950
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Sun Aug 23, 2020 11:18 pm
Wassup playa, can you update this jutsu to show that it is an enhancer tech? Also need you to modify the AP costs to reflect that as per these rules: https://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t45273-special-technique-guidelines

I don't think that this should be able to completely nullify lightning based attacks but I think that you could get away with adding in some amount of universal DR or even specifically against lightning based techs, for each respective rank. But in exchange I think it might be worth adding some type of maneuver/seal required for activation. What do you think? 

You couple probably modify the cool down to be Posts Used + 2, so it's a little more forgiving for A rank and still right at 5 posts for S rank.
Kizmaru Senju
Kizmaru Senju
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Master
Ryo : 2700
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Mon Aug 24, 2020 12:27 am
Edited. Also, "It can block Lightning based attacks but regardless of their power, a direct hit will prematurely turn off the effects of this jutsu afterwards." That means if this is used to defend against a lightning attack, the boost just wears off, not the lightning technique.
Guren Chinoike
Guren Chinoike
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Tue Aug 25, 2020 12:00 am
Okay, thanks for the edits man. Would you mind explaining the timing of that? "Afterwords" meaning instantly upon contact?

Also since this is now +60/60 at A rank it needs to follow the below:
40 Payment / 40 Upkeep for A-rank (60/60), 2 Post Duration (Additional Requirements needed)
Kizmaru Senju
Kizmaru Senju
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Ryo : 2700
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Tue Aug 25, 2020 5:38 am
Edited to clarify when the jutsu effect ends, couldn't think of an additional requirement so lowered the A-rank boost.
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Tue Aug 25, 2020 1:11 pm
thanks, trial approved
Mitacho Reishin
Mitacho Reishin
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 11900
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Tue Aug 25, 2020 3:04 pm
If this technique is granting you any form if DR it needs to be added in. Your wording suggests that it does but if it doesn't please specify that.

" Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. " im also assuming that this is just referring to the stat boosts correct? And for the interaction with lightning jutsu I'd like it if they surpass then health of the technique then it ends immediately.
Kizmaru Senju
Kizmaru Senju
Master
Master
Ryo : 2700
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Tue Aug 25, 2020 10:01 pm
Edited. Nah, it doesn't give DR, just durability similar to armor. I was told only Tai, Med and Wep can only give DR now. And the destructive power refers to the boost, yes.
Mitacho Reishin
Mitacho Reishin
Genin
Genin
Ryo : 11900
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Sun Aug 30, 2020 8:26 pm
You still have the " it will prematurely turn off the effects of this jutsu after one post" it should be that the effects end immediately after being hit, not a post after. Also I don't know if I feel completely comfortable about this being able to resist stat checks as an enhancer. I'd like for you to remove that or add in a stipulation for it
Kizmaru Senju
Kizmaru Senju
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Master
Ryo : 2700
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V7 Earth Spear Empty Re: V7 Earth Spear

Sun Aug 30, 2020 8:35 pm
Edited. The stipulation for resisting checks would be, having higher power than the technique.
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