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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Mon Aug 10, 2020 7:33 am
Name: Suiton: River Cutter/ Kawanagi
Element: Water
Rank: C/B
Specialty: Ninjutsu/Weaponry
Special Jutsu Type:
Backstory: A deceptive form of swordsmanship and ninjutsu that enhances the sword. Most swordsmen use lightning or fire to enhance their blades, but the use of water proves to be a superior element. Water in its strongest form is capable of cutting through steel. Applying this to a sword makes no other weapon sharper as every drop is a weapon…

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Appearance: Water collects and gathers along the shinobi’s sword. It is a visible watery layer that enhances the blade. A trail of water is left behind with each stroke of the sword. Due to the high pressure of the water’s movement on the sword, it is extremely sharp and capable of slicing through steel with ease.
Handseals: 1-handed focus seal before drawing a sword.
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: duration +2
Range: 10/20 Meters
Power: 20/30
Speed: 20/30
Health: n/a
Stat Boosts: +20/30 Sharpness/Health
What it does:  Upon drawing the sword, the user draws in water from a nearby source to add to a weapon's blade. The condensed water clings and flows along the edge of the weapon to aid in sword combat. Water can be used via pre-existing water in an area within 5 meters, or by storing water into the swordsman’s sheath as a hidden weapon.

The water adds to the sword’s sharpness for its duration. Swings of the sword extend its reach by .5 meter max per slash via water slicing.

Once within this duration, the swordsman may perform a wide arching slash-- launching the water as a flying crescent blade towards a target. The power and speed, and range of the jutsu equal this effect, and reaches a max of 10/20m for the wide arcing slash. After this option is used, all the water used is spent and the technique immediately goes into cooldown for its maximum duration.

This jutsu may be applied when one has “Water Cutting Sword” active, as well.

Character Specific: n/a
Wordcount to learn: 1000/1500
Action Cost: 20/30 Activation. Upkeep = 10/15 per post.
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Must know Water Cutting Sword,  Chakra Infusion Skill
Canon, Custom, Bloodline or Village Exclusive: Site-Canon


Last edited by Zeo Kamigawa on Fri Aug 14, 2020 3:18 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Thu Aug 13, 2020 2:46 pm
Sup man.

Please add "posts" to the duration section, so it reads as "3 posts".
Please specify the range at which the sword can draw in water from. I believe it should be within 5 meters.
Can you clarify what the 10/20 range is descriptive of?

"Once within this duration, the swordsman may perform a wide arching slash-- launching the water as a flying crescent blade towards a target. The power, speed, and range of the jutsu equal this effect. After this option is used, jutsu immediately goes into cooldown."

At the end of the above section, just clarify that all of the water from the technique is completely expelled from the sword which is why it goes on cooldown.
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Thu Aug 13, 2020 7:58 pm
Fixed the specifics and yes, meant meters. And yes, the last part is end duration due to spending the water on the blade. Made sense unless i am underpowering the jutsu. Anyway alll changes here.
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Fri Aug 14, 2020 1:50 pm
This looks good. Just need you to indicate what you're describing by the range when you say 10/20 meters. I am not sure what it is applied to.
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Fri Aug 14, 2020 3:12 pm
Its the max range for the latter option, which is why i put that in there.
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Fri Aug 14, 2020 3:19 pm
trial approved
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Sun Aug 16, 2020 9:26 am
Bumping to let know awaiting main staff approval. If too soon, sorry
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Tue Aug 18, 2020 7:45 am
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Sat Aug 22, 2020 7:51 pm
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Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"  Empty Re: Suiton: River Cutter "Kawanagi"

Tue Dec 01, 2020 6:06 pm
Updated this technique as it was made when infusions were still kinda unspecified and the buff was a bit too much (+power and was scalable, rather than the flat numbers we allow nowadays.


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