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V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire Empty V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire

Sat Aug 01, 2020 6:42 pm
Name: Fire Release: Fox Fire
Element: Fire
Rank: B/A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: N/A
Backstory:


Appearance: 10/15 fireballs spawn in a 1 meter/1.5 meter radius invisible chakra disk up to 2 meters in front of the user. Each fireball is one-tenth of a meter in size. 
Example:
V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire Oko%27s_Fire_Release
Handseals:
B-Rank: Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger
A-Rank: Snake → Ram → Monkey → Bird → Boar →  Tiger
Duration: Up to 3 Posts | Until Maximum Distance is Reached
Cooldown: Posts Used +2
Range: 15/20m
Power: 30/50
Speed: 30/50
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: The user forms 10/15 (B/A) miniature fireballs in a 1-meter/1.5 meter radius (B/A) invisible chakra disk at jutsu speed, in which they can launch at will at the same speed, traveling in a straight line until the maximum distance is reached (or when the duration of the jutsu expires) then they will fizzle out instantly. The chakra disk carrying the fireballs as well as the unlaunched fireballs can stay active for up to 3 Posts, letting the user choose when to fire them or when to not. The fireballs in question burn at jutsu power and are able to clash with physical projectiles such as Kunai or Shuriken, using their power stat to clash with the physical projectile's sharpness/impact force. Should the physical projectile lose the clash between a fireball, they will be burnt and destroyed at jutsu power. However, should the fireball lose the clash between a physical projectile, they will fizzle out instantly and the projectile will continue its original course. 

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 1500/2500
Action Cost:
B-Rank: 30 AP | 15 AP Upkeep
A-Rank: 40 AP | 20 AP Upkeep
Mastery: Y
Bonus Requirements: N/A
Canon, Custom, Bloodline or Village Exclusive: Canon| Original App


Last edited by Tadashi Namikaze on Wed Aug 12, 2020 5:37 pm; edited 1 time in total
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V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire Empty Re: V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire

Wed Aug 05, 2020 9:18 am
I would suggest revising either the diameter of the disk, or the size of the individual fireballs. If the diameter is 1m and each fireball is half a meter in diameter, then this would just look like a giant glob of fire. At best, a continuous ring of fire. In my opinion you would either need to increase the diameter of the disk while maintaining the size of the fireballs, or maintain the diameter of the disk while decreasing the size of the fireballs. As is, these fireballs are the same size as the radius of the disk which just doesn't align with the image you're going for here. Especially with 10 or 15 of them thangz.
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V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire Empty Re: V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire

Wed Aug 12, 2020 5:39 pm
Edited, sorry for the wait.

I decreased the size of the fireballs, being one-tenth of a meter in size -or .10 centimeters to be exact - for them to fit in the disc. I also increased the size of the disc at A-rank -being 1.5 meters in radius- so that 15 fireballs that are one-tenth of a meter in size can fit in it.
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V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire Empty Re: V7 Fire Release: Fox Fire

Thu Aug 13, 2020 4:40 pm
Looks good to me now bro. Thanks for the edits and don't worry about the wait.
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