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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Sun Jul 12, 2020 11:17 am
Name: Fire Release: Great Dragon Flame
Element: Fire
Rank: B/A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: N/A
Backstory:

Appearance: The user exhales a thin stream of fire that rapidly detaches into a dragon-headed construct.
Example:
Great Dragon Flame [V7] Ninja-hand-signs-naruto-fireball-4
Handseals:
B-Rank: Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger
A-Rank: Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Ram → Tiger
Duration: Until Maximum Distance has been Reached | Up to 3 Posts 
Cooldown: Posts Used +2
Range: 25/40m
Power: 40/60
Speed: 40/60
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: Compressing a large amount of chakra from their upper body, the user exhales a thin stream of fire that is 6 inches wide which quickly detaches after traveling an inch into a dragon-headed construct of fire chakra, all at jutsu speed. Over the course of 3 Posts, the user can fire up to 3/5 (B/A) of those dragon-headed constructs in total, whether it'd be all at once or spread apart in the 3 Posts. All dragon-headed constructs are 5m/10m (B/A) in diameter that travel in a straight line towards a target(s) of the user's choosing at jutsu speed. Having a striking resemblance to the Phoenix Fire Technique, fireballs once expelled via this technique have the ability to "curve" at will up to a 90-degree angle. Each 'Dragon' can only be manipulated in this manner only once; after that, the dragon will travel in a straight line as usual. The constructs fizzle out instantly once reaching maximum range or when the duration of the whole technique expires.

The flames created by this jutsu are scorching due to the dragon-headed constructs' compressed nature, burning things, and people at jutsu power should they come in contact with them. The flames can cause 2nd-3rd degree severe burns at best but can even turn things and people to ash at worst. Jutsu that comes in contact with Great Dragon Flame with power less than jutsu power will be destroyed and go on CD due to the flames' sheer intensity. This effect does not change how the jutsu would interact against an elemental technique that it is weak against.

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 1750/2750
Action Cost:
B-Rank: 35 Activation, 15 Upkeep
A-Rank: 45 Activation, 20 Upkeep
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Great Fireball (B-rank), Phoenix Fire
Canon, Custom, Bloodline or Village Exclusive: Canon | Original App


Last edited by Tadashi Namikaze on Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:23 am; edited 3 times in total
Noboru Kaito
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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Re: Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Sun Jul 12, 2020 1:22 pm
Given the way this is written, if I were to launch two of these bad boys at S-Rank, I would still have the opportunity to launch three more, except if one of the first two went beyond the range of the technique, in which case, instead of me being able to launch the other three the technique would be immediately be put on cooldown? Meaning I would need to launch my last one before the first one reaches maximum range? And if I launch the last one before the first one reaches maximum range, will it still fizzle out the moment the first one reaches maximum range?
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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Re: Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Tue Jul 14, 2020 11:38 am
Edited, gave the jutsu a clause that states, "Over the course of 3 Posts, the user can fire up to 3/4/5 (B/A/S) of those dragon-headed constructs in total, whether it'd be all at once or spread apart in the 3 Posts", another clause that states, "The constructs fizzle out instantly once reaching maximum range or when the duration of the whole technique expires." I also gave the technique an upkeep cost.
Noboru Kaito
Noboru Kaito
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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Re: Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Tue Jul 14, 2020 3:48 pm
Trial approved.
Ayato Hyuuga
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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Re: Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Mon Jul 27, 2020 11:49 am
"Jutsu that come in contact with Great Dragon Flame with power less than jutsu power will be destroyed and go on CD due to the sheer intensity of the flames."


Specify this doesn't change how this jutsu would work against an elemental technique which is weak against
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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Re: Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:24 am
Done
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Great Dragon Flame [V7] Empty Re: Great Dragon Flame [V7]

Fri Jul 31, 2020 12:22 pm
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