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Noboru Kaito
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Thu Jul 09, 2020 5:17 pm
Name: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade
Element: Wind
Rank: S-Rank
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: -
Backstory: In order to maintain their competitiveness with Weaponry masters, Wind Release users created this technique, and by doing so, they turned standard ninja gear into remarkably deadly artifices.

Appearance:
On a kunai:
Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] 350?cb=20150124172308
On a shuriken:
Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] 350?cb=20151006185413
Handseals: Horse > Ram > Rat > Hare > Boar > Bird > Horse > Ram > Rat > Hare > Boar > Bird
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: Posts used +2
Range: Held Weapon for casting, 20m if thrown
Power: Vigor Stat
Speed: Vigor Stat
Health: Vigor Stat
Stat Boosts: -
What it does: After performing the required handseals and taking a deep breath, the user manipulates the chakra in their lungs and exhales a small cloud of chakra infused wind onto a bladed weapon they are currently holding, coating the weapon in wind chakra, replacing the original weapon with one of chakra, meaning the weapon's stats are replaced with this jutsu's stats. Usually, this will be a very thin layer, barely noticeable aside from its plume-like shape and green coloration, but they are able to transform kunai and knives into a makeshift sword, or extend a regular sword into a greatsword. Note: only the length is increased, but not the width.

If applied to a shuriken specifically, the transformation is remarkable: blowing chakra onto a shuriken will extend it's cutting range by spinning and compressing the chakra onto itself, becoming thinner and thinner until it's a hair-wide 1m diameter disk, and once thrown the blades will stay for up to 20m away from the user; after these 20m, the wind blades extinguish.

The power of this technique is treated as sharpness, the speed is the speed at which the technique takes place, and the health is treated as health, of course.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 5000
Action Cost: 100AP, 50AP upkeep
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: -
Canon, Custom or Village Exclusive: Canon, Original


Last edited by Noboru Kaito on Mon Jul 13, 2020 8:04 am; edited 3 times in total
Masashi Uzumaki
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Thu Jul 09, 2020 9:19 pm
Hey dude. This kinda looks like an amplifier, as you're using it to boost the stats on an item. We'll need to cap that at 70 for an S-Rank, and we need the Special Technique to be listed as an amplifier. Also need to update the rank on the tech to S-Rank (currently showing as B-Rank). You could also lower the hand seals by a couple (10 should be sufficient)

Thanks
Noboru Kaito
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Fri Jul 10, 2020 11:21 am
Fixed Rank.

This is not an amplifier though, as I never stated that the power of this tech is used to amplify the stats of an item. It this were used on a kunai or sword, it'd just extend their range and apply this technique on top of the weapon used, but it wouldn't stack; a kunai covered by this technique would still have 50 Sharpness and 50 Health, and not 50 Sharpness and Health + Vigor Stat as Sharpness and Health. Same applies to a sword turned into a greatsword; this would only coat the sword and treat it as having a Vigor Stat Sharpness and Health, but otherwise it's still a technique. Also, the Speed refers only to the speed at which this technique forms; swinging and throwing speeds are reliant only on the character using this tech.

I put it as 12 Handseals because it's a Vigor Stat technique.
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Sun Jul 12, 2020 12:29 pm
I think the concern for me stems from the fact that the wording hints that you would be increasing the weapon's stats. Would you be amenable to modifying the technique's wording to state that it replaces the weapon's stats with the stats of this technique (Technique Health/Sharpness becomes the weapon's health/sharpness)?
Noboru Kaito
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Sun Jul 12, 2020 3:45 pm
Replaced wording to imply it will replace the stats for jutsu stats.
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Sun Jul 12, 2020 3:56 pm
Thank you. Trial Approved.
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Sun Jul 12, 2020 7:10 pm
How far can a weapon be from the user's location to be coated with the vacuum blade?

Also, it is unclear if they have to hold the weapon first.
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Mon Jul 13, 2020 8:05 am
I specified the range is held weapon, and included a mention of held weapon on the description as well.
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Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7] Empty Re: Wind Release: Vaccum Blade [V7]

Mon Jul 27, 2020 1:50 pm
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