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Kizmaru Senju
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Fist Rock Technique

Mon Jun 22, 2020 5:41 pm
Name: Fist Rock Technique
Element: Earth
Rank: A
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory: N/A

Appearance: The user encases their arm(s) in rock, scaling up to their shoulder
Handseals: Ram, Dog, Rat, Snake, Tiger
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Range: Touch
Power: 50 
Speed: 50
Health: 50
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
After performing the required hand signs and touching the appropriate limb(s), rock begins to protrude from the target arm's skin, encasing their arm with solid rock up to their shoulders. While the shape is up to the user, it cannot exceed a foot from protrusion of the target's skin. The user is still capable of weaving hand signs but earthen contents in the fists can’t be used to create other earth release techniques. The caster of the jutsu is the one who pays the upkeep to maintain the jutsu as well as the one who can dispel it. The user can deal a powerful hardened strike against an opponent while being protected from having direct contact with their target. The jutsu scales normally from the caster's vigor stat however, the user may choose to apply half of their strength to the power of this jutsu when striking. If scaled this way, the user does not benefit from their vigor scaling. Additionally, the technique itself benefits from effects such as Damage Reduction from maneuvers if the user also specializes in Taijutsu.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 2,500
Action Cost: 40, 20 upkeep
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: -
Canon or Custom: Canon

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Last edited by Kizmaru Senju on Fri Jun 26, 2020 6:29 pm; edited 3 times in total
Noboru Kaito
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Re: Fist Rock Technique

Tue Jun 23, 2020 5:52 am
One meter in radius is two meters in diameter... Which is quite a lot to have hanging in your arm. I would limit that to half a meter in diameter altogether.

I don't mind the current "adds half strength to jutsu power when striking", but wouldn't it make more sense to add half the jutsu's power to the total strength of a strike, while debuffing speed by half the jutsu's ppwer as well, since you essentially encase your arm in rock? Let me know how you feel about this.
Kizmaru Senju
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Re: Fist Rock Technique

Tue Jun 23, 2020 12:39 pm
Edited the max size of the arm but I disagree with adding the power to the strength stat considering what spec it is. It's basically suppose to be similar to Chidori where the users strength doesn't matter too much but since it doesn't have a piercing property, I threw in the tidbit of using some strength as well. The debuffing of speed also doesn't sit too well with me when compared to similar jutsu that forms from limbs that doesn't seem to add the detrimental properties to the user.
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Re: Fist Rock Technique

Tue Jun 23, 2020 1:04 pm
That's a fair point too. Trial approved.
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Re: Fist Rock Technique

Fri Jun 26, 2020 5:56 pm
"however, the user also applies half of their strength to the power of this jutsu when striking. Additionally, the technique itself benefits from Taijutsu effects such as Damage Reduction from maneuvers."

Make this an option if the user specializes in taijutsu. 

I would like to see that if the user indeed applies half of their strength stat to the fist, then the technique will not be able to scale from the vigor stat.
Kizmaru Senju
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Re: Fist Rock Technique

Fri Jun 26, 2020 6:29 pm
Edited.
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Fist Rock Technique Empty Re: Fist Rock Technique

Sat Jun 27, 2020 2:14 pm
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