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Ayato Hyuuga
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Water Dragon Bullet v7 Empty Water Dragon Bullet v7

Sun Jun 21, 2020 5:29 am
Name: Water Dragon Bullet
Element: Water
Rank: A-rank
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type:
Backstory:

Appearance: The user manipulates water into a dragon's shape, which they then direct at a target. The body is 20 meters long from the tail to the point where the head connects to the neck and is three meters in width. The dragon's head is four meters long and half a meter thicker than the rest of its body, with its mouth opening up to 3 meters.

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Handseals:  Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar 
Duration: up 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Range: 50 meters
Power: 60
Speed: 60
Health: 60
Stat Boosts:
What it does: The user creates a giant Water Dragon by either expelling water chakra out of their mouth or creating it from a nearby source of water (lake, river, rain, etc.). The second option can be created anywhere in a 10-meter radius of the user but can’t be created less than 5 meters from another character. While the jutsu is active, the user has limited control over the dragon's movement once it is in motion. The dragon can move up to 90 degrees at jutsu speed in any one direction per post.

The dragon can be "manipulated" only within a 50-meter radius from the user's location. When the dragon or any part of it moves beyond the maximum range, the chakra holding the water together dissipates, with the water splashing harmlessly to the ground. Upon reaching maximum duration, the dragon disappears entirely from the field. The same is true if it is remotely deactivated before that.

Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 2750
Action Cost: 45/20 upkeep
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: -
Canon, Custom, or Village Exclusive: Canon


Last edited by Ayato Hyuuga on Thu Jun 25, 2020 2:44 am; edited 2 times in total
Noboru Kaito
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Water Dragon Bullet v7 Empty Re: Water Dragon Bullet v7

Sun Jun 21, 2020 5:44 am
Hey,

Please specify 50m range, centered around the user.

Please include that dragon is created at jutsu speed; you can also include that it upon creation it can start moving in the direction the user wishes it to do so.

Please include that for the base version of this technique, one must use an abundant source of water, it can be a puddle or a bottle of water.

When the water falls to the ground, does it still carry the power of jutsu? Since it's a relatice amount of water (3m thick 20m long body of water). Same for when one dispels it prematurely or runs the timer; would this mass of water do anything or is it just a surprise cold shower?

I like the mastery; I would however like if you could specify what kinds of mastrery this jutsu can have (such as Handseals, Power/AP, Waterless Casting)? Or is this a case of "master for handseals, get waterless casting for free"?
Ayato Hyuuga
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Water Dragon Bullet v7 Empty Re: Water Dragon Bullet v7

Tue Jun 23, 2020 5:14 am
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Noboru Kaito
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Water Dragon Bullet v7 Empty Re: Water Dragon Bullet v7

Tue Jun 23, 2020 7:27 pm
Small detail, I believe jutsus can't be created within 5 meters of another target now. Please rectify this and I'll stamp it, all else was good.
Noboru Kaito
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Water Dragon Bullet v7 Empty Re: Water Dragon Bullet v7

Fri Jun 26, 2020 7:51 pm
Trial approved.
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Water Dragon Bullet v7 Empty Re: Water Dragon Bullet v7

Sat Jul 04, 2020 10:10 am
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