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Fri Jun 12, 2020 1:59 pm
Name: Wave of Inspiration
Element: Water/Lightning
Rank: A
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: N/A
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Handseals: Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat → Dragon → Dog → Hare → Rat
Duration: Until Maximum Distance is reached
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Range: 20m
Power: 69
Speed: 69
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does:
This technique is a fusion jutsu between Water and Lightning Release in which the user employs both elements by spewing out an abundance of water in the shape of a cone stream infused with currents of Lightning chakra from their mouth at jutsu speed at a target or group of targets. It starts out as an inch in diameter when escaping from the mouth before growing to 10m in diameter at jutsu speed before reaching maximum distance. The wave is so powerful that it can block projectiles (be it physical or chakra) with less sharpness/power than jutsu power as well as create a concussive blunt force that can even break bones if directly exposed to the wave. Additionally, since the wave is infused with Lightning Release, it has the ability to paralyze. Those who are caught in the wave with a strength less than jutsu power by 20 or more will be brutally paralyzed for 2 Posts, unable to move. Should someone have a strength less than jutsu power, but not by 20 or more will receive paralyzation for a less amount of time, being paralyzed for 1 Post. Strength equal to or higher than jutsu power can resist the paralyzation effect.

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 2950
Action Cost: 48 AP
Mastery: Y
Bonus Requirements: N/A
Canon, Custom or Village Exclusive: Canon


Last edited by Tadashi Namikaze on Thu Jun 18, 2020 11:17 am; edited 2 times in total
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Wave of Inspiration [Revamp] Empty Re: Wave of Inspiration [Revamp]

Tue Jun 16, 2020 7:37 pm
Since this is A rank I think you'll need some more handseals dawg
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Wave of Inspiration [Revamp] Empty Re: Wave of Inspiration [Revamp]

Wed Jun 17, 2020 11:17 am
Edited, added two more handseals.
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Wave of Inspiration [Revamp] Empty Re: Wave of Inspiration [Revamp]

Wed Jun 17, 2020 7:19 pm
Thanks bro.

I would only add the note that to me, it makes sense for the tech to have concussive force causing broken bones and also the electrical current which can cause paralysis. Broken bones do not mean the target would be unable to move. Some people may have techs or DR to mitigate those effects. Paralysis is a good back up. I only add this comment because I believe it was discussed briefly in Discord. Nevertheless based on the effects of this jutsu, I would think that this should be on the upper end of A rank. For that reason if you could max out the A rank requirements for this jutsu, that would be great (8 - 10 hand seals,  maybe 48 AP cost, >3000 WC). In return, this can probably be bumped up to increased power/speed/range.
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Thu Jun 18, 2020 11:18 am
Cool, I upped the AP Cost, WC, Power, Speed, increased the range by 5 more meters, and I added 2 more handseals which adds up to 9.
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Fri Jun 19, 2020 8:54 am
Looks great to me bro. Trial approved.
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Fri Jun 19, 2020 8:56 am
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