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Raikiri v7 Empty Raikiri v7

Fri Jun 12, 2020 11:38 am
Name: Raikiri 
Element: Lightning
Rank: S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: N/A
Backstory:

Appearance: Chakra is converted into a mass of electricity, similar to Chidori but far more concentrated and blue in color that surrounds the user’s hand 12 inches/1 foot in all directions.
Image:
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Handseals: Ox > Monkey > Dragon > Snake > Hare > Boar > Dragon > Tiger
Duration: Up to 4 Posts | Up to 2 Posts
Cooldown: Posts Used +2
Range: Contact + 12 inches | 20 Meters
Power: Vigor Stat
Speed: Vigor Stat
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does:
This jutsu is a stronger variant of Chidori, in which the user channels an extraordinary amount of Lightning Chakra, far greater than Chidori around either of the user’s hands at jutsu speed. The Lightning created has a power equal to jutsu power and is capable of piercing through targets quite easily. Additionally, not only can this Lightning pierce, but it can also paralyze at the same time. Should anything come in contact with the jutsu and have strength less than jutsu power by 20 or more, they will be paralyzed for 2 posts. Should anything come in contact with it and have strength less than jutsu power by only 1-19 points of strength, they will be paralyzed for only 1 post. Strength equal to or higher than jutsu power can resist this effect. Jutsu that come in contact with Raikiri and has power or health (when applicable) lower than jutsu power will be destroyed.

Lastly, the user can split Rakiri in half, one in each hand at jutsu speed with an additional AP cost of 25, still retaining the same power. Should the user have a Shadow Clone or any variant besides the basic Clone Technique active, the clone and user can utilize the splitting effect at the same AP cost to both have technique active on a specific hand per person. This creates a line of solid lightning at jutsu speed that links the two Raikiri’s together with a max range of 20 meters with a width of a foot. To clarify, the link originates from both of the Raikiri and does not instantly spawn. Additionally, if two players know this technique, they can perform the linking together by both paying AP for the splitting cost while having the technique active. Raikiri is then treated as a collaboration technique, following all of the collaboration rules and stat increases until the end of the duration. In both instances, the link lasts for up to 2 Posts and has Raikiri’s effects at jutsu power.

Character Specific: N/A
Wordcount to learn: 5000
Action Cost: 100 AP, 50 AP upkeep. 25 AP to split Raikiri.
Mastery: Y
Bonus Requirements: Chidori
Canon, Custom or Village Exclusive: Canon


Last edited by Tadashi Namikaze on Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:59 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Raikiri v7 Empty Re: Raikiri v7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 6:34 pm
This seems okay, and splitting the Raikiri in half is pretty cool. Though I think you would need more hand seals.
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Raikiri v7 Empty Re: Raikiri v7

Wed Jun 17, 2020 10:15 am
Okay! I added two more handseals, added mastery, increased contact/effect range of Raikiri to 3 inches in all directions instead of 1, and I increased the duration to make it more similar to V7 Chidori.
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Raikiri v7 Empty Re: Raikiri v7

Wed Jun 17, 2020 6:06 pm
Since this is S rank, I would like to see you expand the contact range to 6in - 12in. 12in would align better imo based on the foot width of the Raikiri when split with a clone. On that subject, could be cool to add that the Raikiri could be split with another player as a collaboration technique? Just an idea. 

Maybe just reword this for clarity: "Should anything come in contact with it and have strength less than jutsu power, but less than 20 points of strength, they will be paralyzed for only 1 post."

To read as: "Should anything come in contact with it and have strength between 1 - 19 points of strength, they will be paralyzed for only 1 post."
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Raikiri v7 Empty Re: Raikiri v7

Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:48 pm
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Raikiri v7 Empty Re: Raikiri v7

Wed Jun 17, 2020 10:03 pm
Thanks for all the edits bro. Trial approved
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