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Rasengan V7 Empty Rasengan V7

Thu Jun 11, 2020 9:12 pm
Name: Rasengan
Element: --
Rank: A/S
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: --
Backstory: --

Appearance: A perfect sphere of chakra containing a fierce storm of whirling energy within, with a diameter of 16cm. Its color varies from user to user based on their chakra's properties - yellow or blue are most commonly associated with the technique. The technique gives off a high-pitched whining noise. When the technique is S rank, the technique's size can be adjusted, as described below. 

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Handseals: --
Duration: Up to 2 posts
Cooldown: 1 post
Range: --
Power: 60/Vigor
Speed: 60/Vigor (formation)
Health: 60/Vigor
Stat Boosts: --
What it does: The user swirls a violent storm of chakra into their palm, using their mastery of shape manipulation to craft a stable shell of chakra around it—the technique forms at jutsu speed.

Once stable, the Rasengan hovers 7cm from the user's palm, staying in position no matter how the user's hand is oriented. Once the technique comes into contact with a solid surface, object, or body, it tears into it like a grinder at jutsu power. At any point, the user can decide to either allow the Rasengan to become unstable and 'burst' it in a blast of chakra two meters in diameter (the edge of the sphere originating from the Rasengan and being harmless to the user), or the Rasengan can be released to carry a non-fixed target with lower strength than the power of the technique for 15 meters (or until being stopped by another object) before it explodes identically. Otherwise, the technique fizzles out at the end of its duration.

The S-Rank version of this technique can grow to much larger sizes than the base variant. After forming the basic 16cm Rasengan, the user has the option of having it expand to a diameter of between 1m (Big Ball Rasengan) to 5m (Ultra Big Ball Rasengan) at jutsu speed. The technique then has a burst with twice the expanded Rasengan's diameter (so, for example, a 3m Rasengan would have a 6m burst).

This technique can be formed with a clone or another user of the technique, with two users melding their chakra to create a single instance of the Rasengan. Once the Rasengan is stable, both users can either be ferried or passed off to one of them to deliver. A Rasengan created this way will follow the Collaboration Technique guidelines, with the resulting technique's power being the average of the two user's individual uses of the technique plus fifty. This Rasengan can be made larger, as described above, if at least one of the components Rasengan is S-ranked.

Character Specific: --
Wordcount to learn: 2,750/5,000
Action Cost: 50/70
Mastery: N
Bonus Requirements: Believe it!
Canon, Custom, or Village Exclusive: Canon


Last edited by Mino on Mon Jun 22, 2020 7:53 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 7:47 pm
This looks good. Maybe just for additional clarity add a clause that indicates that although the power scaling dictates the maximum range of size scaling, the size scaling doesn't dictate the maximum range of power scaling (i.e., a small rasengan can still have power higher than 99 if the user has the capability of boosting it that high). 

Since this doesn't have hand seals, I don't think this can be masterable...Might need a big homie to fact check me on that one.
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 7:52 pm
Edited! Left Mastery alone for right now until we get advice. I figured if people really want to be Naruto, they could pick it up for extra technique power. Also slightly edited the wording so throwing a kunai at it won't force it to be released, and specified what happens if it reaches the end of its duration without getting 'popped'.
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 8:03 pm
Sounds fine to me, let's have a full mod/admin review the mastery portion. Trial approved!
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:25 pm
So any jutsu that has no hand seals cannot be mastered unfortunately. Also for the different sizes i see those as derivatives of this technique. Are those being classified as one technique or will the others be allowed to be made on their own?
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:31 pm
Removed mastery. I suppose they could be made as their own techniques (and I can remove the technique names in that case to more transparently allow that), but I figured it'd be redundant in the case of the techniques that are just 'base rasengan but bigger' and people would want to spend those slots on something unique.
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Mon Jun 22, 2020 7:35 pm
Okay i have had some time to mull over this and here is what i'm thinking. Make it a multi-rank tech, i'm thinking either B-S or just A/S and that will be what we'll use to show the growth. So S rank would be the Ultra Big Ball Rasengan.
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Mon Jun 22, 2020 7:51 pm
how're we looking now? hoping i got the calcs right for power/ap and wc cost
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Mon Jun 22, 2020 8:37 pm
You can make the (80) either vigor or leave at a flat 80 so that it can scale. Me personally I'd say let it be equal to vigor stat but how do you feel? (I promise this is the last thing)
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Rasengan V7 Empty Re: Rasengan V7

Mon Jun 22, 2020 8:40 pm
I was thinking that I'd keep it scaling, that way stuff like Rasenshuriken or other higher-tier variations of the technique could be Vigor stat and have the power edge.
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