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Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7 Empty Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7

Thu Jun 11, 2020 12:14 am
Name: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks
Element: Water
Rank: B
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Special Jutsu Type: --
Backstory: --

Appearance:
Spoiler:
Handseals: Snake > Bird > Monkey > Ox > Dragon > Clap > Touch Water
Duration: Up to 3 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Range: 30m
Power: 45
Speed: 45
Health: 45
Stat Boosts: --
What it does: Chakra streams from the tips of the user's fingers into the water and forms some of it at jutsu speed into the shape of five sharks. They are harmless and can be freely moved through until fully formed, and anything caught within the sharks while they form will be pushed out when they solidify. These sharks are composed of water, with the ability to apply blunt force with their bodies equal to jutsu power, and they possess rows of teeth with sharpness equal to jutsu power. They are four meters in length, and a meter wide at the widest point. 

If the sharks are touching the body of water they were spawned from, they regenerate from any damage at jutsu speed unless completely destroyed. The sharks can not fly, or move on land - they move with pretty much the same capabilities as normal sharks, with the ability to bite above or leap out of the water.

If at least three of the sharks swim around a point in a circle, a vortex forms in the center with a diameter of ten meters around that point. Anything caught in the vortex is dragged to the center and trapped there unless they have Strength higher than jutsu power. The pulling effect of the vortex forms a cylinder, with a height of ten meters (five meters above and below the level the sharks circle at). If the vortex is formed at the surface, the pulling effect does not extend above the water, but does affect the surface - anybody standing upon the water is dragged in. The sharks are able to move freely through the vortex, but at least three have to continue circling in order to maintain the effect.

The movements of the sharks can be freely controlled by the user as long as they maintain at least one hand's contact with the water. If the user loses hand contact with the water, the technique ends. The body of water used to spawn the sharks cannot be a simple puddle - at least a fair-sized pond is necessary, or a body of water created by a water release technique designed to flood the area.

Character Specific: --
Wordcount to learn: 1,500
Action Cost: 30, 15 upkeep
Mastery: Y
Bonus Requirements: --
Canon, Custom or Village Exclusive: --


Last edited by Mino on Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:26 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7 Empty Re: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 6:39 pm
I think this makes sense and is pretty solid, except that it might require 6 hand seals total being a B rank tech.
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Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7 Empty Re: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 7:40 pm
Trial approved.
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Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7 Empty Re: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:22 pm
This was made very well, the only thing i see missing is the additional measurements for the sharks. I see you mention length but not a width (as a just in case)
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Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7 Empty Re: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:27 pm
Made 'em a meter in width. I'm not a marine biologist but that seems close enough!
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Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7 Empty Re: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks V7

Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:42 pm
Thank you. Approved
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