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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Thu Apr 18, 2019 2:01 pm
Name: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust
Element: Fire
Rank: A-rank
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory: N/A

Appearance: Large cloud of smoldering Ash

Appearance :
Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust MAY8WHH

Handseals: Ox→ Rat  → Dog → Horse → Monkey → Boar → Tiger
Duration: up to 6posts
Cooldown: Posts used +2
Range: 15m in all directions user as the epicenter
Power: 60
Speed: 60
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: The user of this technique expels chakra infused ash from their mouths, blanketing the surrounding area and burning anyone that comes into contact with it at jutsu power. Those with less health than the power of this technique will find that the burns produced by this technique can be quite lethal if vital areas or large portions of their bodies are burnt. Those with more health than the power of this technique, but not by 20 or higher, will find the burns to be quite debilitating, inflicting a -50 to speed stat until their burns are treated by a medical technique with power higher than this technique (or until the topic that the burns were received in ends). If speed is reduced to 0 then the portion of the body that is burnt is paralyzed.

The user is of course immune to the damage produced by this technique. 

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Action Cost: 45 to activate. 20 for upkeep
Mastery: Yes
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Thu Apr 18, 2019 7:32 pm
I'm just going on the assumption that everything in the CC is mine right now, feel free to yell at me if I am wrong.


1. Lets lower the distance of this tech to 20 meters instead of 50. I know S rank techs that have a lower AOE.

2. What happens if someone takes the debuff, but they don't have 50 strength or speed?

3. So, correct me if I am wrong (Which you know canon better than I, so I probably am.) But I was under the impression that ash style was limited to the Sarutobi clan? The fact that this also dosn't require handsigns makes me think that as well.
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Fri Apr 19, 2019 1:26 am
1. I lowered the range to 30m because there are actually approved A-ranks with higher ranges, but I do agree that 50m was a bit too much. 

2. Added in a little portion to explain what will happen should the debuff bring either speed or strength down to 0

3. There were actually no true 'Ash Style' techniques in Canon. The one that you are likely think of was used by Asuma and didn't actually use Ash, it used Gunpowder. But yeah, in Canon this tech was actually used by Madara

Edit: Added in a link to the Canon tech
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Fri Apr 19, 2019 7:56 pm
1. If you can link me a jutsu like that I will allow it to stay 30M

2. Cool.

3. Honestly I would feel better if we gave it some hand seals. (As we have both said in the past after all, we don't stick strictly to canon.) However, I will go ahead and let this go through and let a full mod make the call.
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Sat Apr 20, 2019 10:42 am
Trial approved
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Mon Apr 22, 2019 10:45 am
Fully approved unless Alice wants to overule me on the handseals thing.
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Mon Apr 22, 2019 12:01 pm
You’re good
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Sat Dec 07, 2019 1:01 am
"The ash may be dispersed by a large scale Wind Release technique that surpasses this technique in power, but other than that there is little one can do to dispel this technique once it has been cast."

This jutsu is a cloud, and in a way that line makes it have a health stat equal to the power. Maybe something along the lines of "expelled out with a force equal to jutsu speed" to facilitate the knockback and resistant to other jutsu that could manipulate it, however essentially making this tech incapable of being moved or dispelled unless a wind technique isn't going to fly imo. Logically, a cloud of ash can be overcome by say a sea of water or a technique that has enough force to disperse it's gaseous state.
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Fri Jan 17, 2020 2:20 pm
Is this still being worked on
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Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust Empty Re: Fire Release: Hiding in the Ash and Dust

on Sun Feb 02, 2020 10:20 pm
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