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on Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:17 pm
Bloodline Name: Voidsight
Originating Clan: Voidwalker
Appearance: Stage 1 Voidwalker’s eyes turn pure white with no iris or pupil and pitch black surrounding the outer edge of the sclera that reaches in toward the center of the eye. Stage 2 the eyes become pure pitch black.
History: N/A

What it Does:
Stage 1: The first stage of the bloodline manifests itself early on in the Voidwalker clan. Using their chakra system for pretty much anything will activate the genetic bond they have to The Void gained by their ancestors so long ago. This stage appears as having no pupil or iris, but instead is a pure white sclera with pitch black creeping inward around the outer edge. The white of the eye appears to glow. The Voidwalker gains the following abilities while this stage is active:

  • Minor dimensional vision: They begin to see strange, blurred shapes of anyone using phasing techniques or are otherwise hidden from natural sight. No details can be made out whatsoever, only a shapeless mass the general size of whatever is there. This is not chakra vision, its simply their connection to space-time itself allowing them to see everything occupying a single space from multiple dimensions.
  • Space-Time jutsu affecting the wielder of the eyes(except for their own) are treated as having -10 to their power.
  • Access to Santai


By awakening the Voidsight, the clan member has finally gained access to the innate properties of their blood passed down by their ancestors that first acquired it so many generations ago. The actual effects of this can vary for each individual Voidwalker, be they an increase in their physical agility, higher chakra capacity, or even a noticeable increase to their endurance. As such, when claiming stage 1 of Voidsight, you must choose one of the following passive benefits which will forever be active, even when Voidsight is not. The chosen increase must be tracked on your stat page:

• +25 Chakra
• +25 Speed
• +25 Stamina

Stage 2: In this stage, the Voidwalker begins to acclimate themselves to their new abilities and their bond to The Void grows stronger. The black surrounding the edge of their sclera now completely envelopes the eye, making it appear pitch black. The abilities from the previous level are replaced with these:

  • True Sight: The blurred shapes are now given form and even exact detail appearing to the Voidwalker as a ‘ghost’. This is seen even through solid objects. This sight now shows everyone and everything hidden whether by space-time means or otherwise. They can now see where dimensions overlap, giving them the ability to discern which plane a phased individual is in/on and they have access to jutsu that allow them to hit said person or access said plane.
  • Space-Time jutsu affecting the wielder of the eyes(except for their own) are treated as having -25 to their power.


This stage is unlocked by spending 4,000 words utilizing their Voidsight and growing more attuned to The Void and requires the character to be at least a C Power Ranking.

Action Cost:
Lv. 1 10ap activation, 5ap per post. For transplants it’s 20/10
Lv. 2 5ap activation, 1ap per post. For transplants it’s 10/5
Requirements: Be born a Voidwalker or get the eyes transplanted into you


Last edited by Kai on Sun Jan 26, 2020 9:34 am; edited 6 times in total
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Voidsight Empty Re: Voidsight

on Thu Apr 18, 2019 5:47 pm
Cool Dojutsu.


For the most part I think this is good to go, I would just like to see a few small things changed

1. Change the wording of the dimensional view so that it is anything hidden by spacetime jutsu, and not anything in general.

2. I would personally like to see there be a requirement that you need to have a C power rank or higher to awaken stage 2, but I won't push that and let Valen decide.

3. Reasoning behind the power lowering of Space time techs?
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on Thu Apr 18, 2019 7:15 pm
1. Why? If really prefer it to stay as it is or else it makes this a lot less useful. This particular ability is only unlocked at stage 2 and the doujutsu is supposed to give you true sight, seeing where dimensions overlap and everything that occupies that space

2.why? I don’t think there’s any other doujutsu requiring a power rank. What’s your reasoning

3. Because their bodies are flooded with s/t chakra due to their genetic connection to The Void and all s/t in general which makes them more resilient to it. I’ll add this in if this is sufficient explanation for you
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on Fri Apr 19, 2019 6:02 pm
1. We have been limiting abilities that can see through and detect hidden objects like that for a while, (I hate to bring up something of the clan that my main runs, but the Akari had an ability similar to this that got taken out a while ago.) I'll tell you what, explain it to me a little bit more and I'll go ahead and move it along. (Also, to be clear, I am saying you can say things hidden away by space time jutsu or dimensions, I just mean that I have an issue with the way it is worded right now I can see people claiming that they can see Hiyu that are just hiding using their camouflage technique.)

2. IIRC, we were talking about increasing it so that all Dojutsu's would require a power rank, (Similar to that of the Akari's Golden Eye Dojutsu.) Since this seems pretty complicated in of itself, I feel like we should require it. If it is that big of an issue for you though, I am willing to compromise and say the 4,000 words need to be done without training other stats.

3. Seems a little bit stretched if you ask me, maybe specifically jutsus that relate to the void, but this isn't broken itself, so I'll go ahead and let Valen make that call.
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Voidsight Empty Re: Voidsight

on Fri Apr 19, 2019 6:48 pm
1. So it’s supposed to show the user the ‘true’ reality as well as overlapping dimensions etc. this means that it would show the user things as they truly are with the exception of transformation techniques and such. Personally I’d really like it if this allowed the user to see someone hiding behind a tree, phased in a way that Valen’s phase tech does as well as basically every other one, and if someone were using something to make themselves invisible. However, since I agree that is a bit much, what if I made the basic doujutsu only see through s/t means and can app BL jutsu to do the rest?

2. I edited it to require C power ranking

3. Yea I’d like Will’s opinion on it please
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Voidsight Empty Re: Voidsight

on Fri Apr 19, 2019 6:49 pm
Trial approved.
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