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Kozue Senju
Jounin of Kumo
Jounin of Kumo
Kozue Senju

Fame : 8
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Element(s) : Water
Clan : Senju
Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Sage's Body
Ryo : 8000
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PostSubject: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2019 12:20 am

Name: Ajisai: Kumogakure's Fully Armed and Operational Battle Station
Element: -
Rank: S
Spec Type: Ninjutsu/Medical
Backstory: A technique devised by Kozue for the purpose of decimating wide areas of land with plague, rendering her capable of committing mass genocide by gas in a matter of seconds. In truth, however, the technique ended up being more useful for one on one combat, allowing her to maintain control over a wide spread of the battlefield.


Appearance: Lumious spheres of various colors, about 5 cm in diameter
Handseals:
Passive: -
Poison: Ram-Rat-Dog
Active: Bird-Snake-Tiger-Dragon-Ram

Duration:
Passive: -
Poison: 2 posts
Active: 8 posts

Cooldown:
Passive: -
Poison: Posts used + 2
Active: Posts used x2
Range:
Passive: -
Poison: Self
Active: 40 m

Power:
Passive: -
Active: Chakra Stat

Speed:
Passive: -
Poison: -
Active: Chakra Stat

Health: -
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:
Passive Basic Info: The user is immune to damage from this jutsu. The jutsu takes the form of luminous spherical warheads of hyper condensed highly controlled chakra of various colors, about 5 cm in diameter, but are at base a light blue. These are freely controlled by the user directly. The user starts the thread with 0, but can generate 10 passively per post. At the end of the topic, any remaining spheres dissipate (to ensure that none carry over into the next topic). The user can only ever store up to 60 at a time and have 15 in play at once. Once they are generated, this jutsu must be activated in order to begin sending them forth from the user's body (moving at jutsu speed), then they are granted an armament type, which cannot be changed once they have left the user's body, although the orbs can return to the user's body for storage and can have their type changed there. User can disperse warheads at will. The caster can sense the location of each of the spheres.

While the user has a sphere within her body, she can pay 100 chakra to disperse it to use the poison effect (see below), causing her skin to emit the poison at jutsu power (poison type depends on whether the jutsu is active or not, as does power). Contact with someone else can apply the poison to them. While holding a weapon, the user can disperse an internal orb to coat the weapon with the aforementioned passive poison for two posts.

Warhead Armament Types:
- Explosive (light blue): The solid spherical warhead is capable of exploding, creating an explosion at jutsu speed/power with a radius of up to five meters. These warheads are highly malleable, and can distort slightly to squeeze through earthen surfaces only, such as cracks in stone walls or through gaps between soil particles, for example. The user can choose to infuse each explosive warhead with an element she knows, giving the resulting explosions the appropriate strengths or weaknesses. Explosion
- Poison (purple): The warhead can disperse, releasing a cloud of poison mist of up to 3 m in radius at jutsu speed/power. Poison carries the power of this jutsu, and has the same function as the mist from the poison mist jutsu, except that it's a contact poison. Poison cloud has a three meter radius, and is corrosive, destroying solid matter and chakra that has a health lower than half of its power. Poison remains for 2 posts after detonation. If the user knows any other poisons, he can select one of those instead.


Alternatively, the user can consume 15 orbs within his own body in order to produce an explosion of chakra with a radius of the jutsu range centered on the user. The burst can be one of the two types, the color depending on the type selected (see above). If done this way, the jutsu goes on cooldown as if it had been active for one post (which technically is true), and costs the same as a result. If the burst is poison, the large cloud last for 3 posts before dissipating.


Character Specific: Kozue Senju
Wordcount to learn: 8000
Action Cost:
Poison: 100
Active: 100 to cast, 50 to maintain overall, 25 to detonate any number of warheads
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements:
Poison Mist
Mayfly
Canon or Custom: Custom


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Hikari Hyuuga
Jounin of Konoha
Jounin of Konoha
Hikari Hyuuga

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Clan : Hyuuga
Bloodline : Byakugan
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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2019 10:42 pm

Trial approved Kozue <3


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Kozue Senju
Jounin of Kumo
Jounin of Kumo
Kozue Senju

Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Cloud

Element(s) : Water
Clan : Senju
Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Sage's Body
Ryo : 8000
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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2019 11:08 pm

Bumping for full mod.


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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2019 11:45 pm

Hey there Kozai. I’ll be taking this over now and I do have some notes.

Raise the maximum you can store in your body to 60. Make it up to 15 in play at any given time and you can generate 10 per post. You start any given topic with 0. You can activate the poison effect passively still while an orb is in your body by using it, but instead of the mist form, the poison costs your body and continually surrounds you extending outward 1 meter in every direction. Activating the poison effect this way should cost at least 100ap if you want it to remain a passive ability.

You’ll have to activate the jutsu to turn the orbs into a specific warhead and also release them from your body as well as using the poison mist ability portion.

When the orbs are outside of your body how do they move? Is it through the air? Along the ground? Are they freely manipulated? Do they float at a set distance from the user and follow them unless otherwise ordered? How far can they go from the user before they lose control of them? What happens when they leave that range?



This is what I see for now. After edits/discussion I may see something else. Cheers


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Kozue Senju
Jounin of Kumo
Jounin of Kumo
Kozue Senju

Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Cloud

Element(s) : Water
Clan : Senju
Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Sage's Body
Ryo : 8000
100%


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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 16, 2019 12:04 am

Requesting a 2nd opinion.


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Kozue Senju
Jounin of Kumo
Jounin of Kumo
Kozue Senju

Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Cloud

Element(s) : Water
Clan : Senju
Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Sage's Body
Ryo : 8000
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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 17, 2019 8:05 pm

Bump


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Calin Yuki
Citizen
Citizen
Calin Yuki

Fame : 219
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Element(s) : Water, Wind, Earth
Clan : Yuki
Clan Element : Ice
Ryo : 50000
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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 18, 2019 11:29 am

The only passive ability you can have is the generation of the orbs itself, which Jace already told you to do. However I'm going to say that you can have either or, your cap is lower, the amount you can have out is lower, etc. So if you want to drop 15 AP per orb, that's your choice. Otherwise you can generate 10 per post for free.

Seconding Jace's thoughts on you needing to activate the tech to do...pretty much anything with it besides generate the orbs in your body.

Also, as Jace asked, please clarify if this is full manipulation or not.

Furthermore, I have my own thoughts

You can edit your costs to be 100 to activate and 50 upkeep with an additional 25 to blow them up unless someone runs into the warhead. That 25 cost allows you to blow up all of them at once, or only some of them, but any you refuse to detonate will cause you to pay the cost again to detonate them in a later post.

Bump when ready.





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Citizen
Calin Yuki

Fame : 219
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Water, Wind, Earth
Clan : Yuki
Clan Element : Ice
Ryo : 50000
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PostSubject: Re: Ajisai    Ajisai  I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 18, 2019 8:39 pm

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