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Hato Sano
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PostSubject: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 27, 2018 12:06 am

Name: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister
Element: Wind
Rank: B
Spec Type: Nin or Weapon
Backstory:




Appearance: 

Picture:
 





Twister is 20 meters tall with a 5 meter radius around the user. 
Handseals: Bird- boar (If you use Nin) 
Duration: 3 posts max
Cooldown: +1 to posted used
Range:   5 meters around the user. Can travel 50 meters 
Power: 30
Speed: 30 (explained below)
Health: 30
Stat Boosts:
What it does: “By spinning their shakujō above their head, the user is able to produce a very large twister around himself before launching it out. It is powerful enough to easily repel demonic wind blasts.”
The twister can be dissipated if hit by something stronger than its power. The twister can move with the person at his/her speed, but if the user moves at a speed +20 to the health of the twister it dissipates.  The winds are defensive and offensive. If the oppenet is caught in them and their strength stat is lower than the twister's power stat, it will launch them out 10 meters from the direction of the winds motions explained by the user. If strength stat is higher than the power of the twister, it will have no effect. 


Character Specific:
Wordcount to learn:  1,500
Action Cost: 30 ap + 15 per post
Mastery: Yes (not needing pole weapon once mastered; Nin spec needed)
Bonus Requirements: Must have poleweapon (staff, Sythe, spear, etc.) if using it with weapon spec 
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 27, 2018 12:35 am

Can you add the images in please, since this is canon?

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[img(400px,250px)]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/8/80/Shakujo_Twister2.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/640?cb=20131002024809[/img][img(400px,250px)]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/9/9b/Shakujo_Twister.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/640?cb=20131002024806[/img]

Also can you fix the wording a bit? Appearance is cut off, cooldown and AP are half-errored?

Also, since the staff seems to be an integral part of this technique, wouldn't it also be a weaponry tech? (The wiki lists it as Nin&Bukijutsu as well)

Let's make the Spec Nin or Weaponry, and make the poleweapon requirement removed if user has Ninjutsu Spec.

(second opinion welcome.)
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2018 3:50 am

edited

I made it nin and wep which, i believe mean anyone with either spec can learn it (please correct me if I'm wrong)


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2018 8:46 am

Let's put a range  on this, a max distance it can move from the place it originates from. Something like 50 sound fair?

Also, let's make the spec "Nin or Weaponry" just to avoid any confusion (and add to the bonus req.s that the poleweapon is only needed if the weaponry version is being used.)
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2018 9:26 pm

edited


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 31, 2018 9:30 pm

I hope I haven't missed anything. Seems good ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 06, 2018 4:21 pm

Howdy.

Mind doing my OCD a favor and highlighting the entire thing to change the size to 13?

Throw the image in a spoiler por favor.

Veryveryvery iffy on the speed being half the user's. What justifies this?

Is the mastery for Nin only?

That's all at a glance, I gotta head to class so I'll be back


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 13, 2018 9:28 pm

Still need a justification for half user's speed, otherwise I'd like it to be brought down.


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Shakujō Twister   Wind Release: Shakujō Twister I_icon_minitimeFri Sep 14, 2018 3:37 am

I see where your confusion is. I hope I explained better


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