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Hōzuki Toshira
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Home Village :
  • Mist

Element(s) : Water
Clan : Hōzuki
Clan Element : Water
Bloodline : Hydrification
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Hōzuki Toshira   Thu Aug 09, 2018 2:26 pm

Hōzuki Toshira


Basic Information


Age: 12
Birthday: 11/24
Gender: Male
Height: 150.1 cm
Weight: 41.2 kg
Appearance: Toshira has short black hair with blue eyes and a band around his head. bandages are wrapped around his lower face. He wears a blue jacket and has the kirikagure headband in his neck. He also wears light armor and gloves.
Personality:Toshira is a very calm person who likes to analyze his surroundings.He is very proud of his village and clan and can't bear talking bad and his clan or village.Apart from that he is kind-hearted a very patient shinobi.
History: Toshira was born in november from Uraka and Kanbe
Hōzuki.At the age of 8 years he had mastered clone jutsu , substitution technique and was an excellent user of the hydrification technique. Sadly he lost his parents due to them getting ambushed on a mission from some bandits. When he was nine  that had a very bad impact on him, but he stood on his legs and continued to live with a smile.



Likes: Water / Spicy Food / Any Kind of Sword / Doujutsu / Sharks
Dislikes: Sour Food / Bitter Food / Ranged Weapons / Slugs / Darkness


Ninja Traits


Rank: Academy Student
Village: Kirikagure
Element(s): Water Release
Specialties:
Clan: Hōzuki
Stats


Health:5
Chakra:5
Stamina:6
Speed: 8
Strength: 6


The Player


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Roleplay Sample: Toshira was ordered by a higher ranked shinobi to save the young children and deal with the abductor.Toshira like the fast shinobi he is rushed and reached the location almost immediately. The abductor name was Zigeme (which was known to toshira through information that he got from his superiors).Zigeme had two large katanas in his hands and a headband of the village hidden in the sound on his forehead. Zigeme throws shurikens and kunais to toshira but they transform into paper bombed kunais. Toshira was cut off guard and the kunais explode. Toshira dissapeared and water dropped on the floor.The kids where because toshira used a kunai and freed them and they where getting escorted to the village by another shinobi. Then toshira sais that that was his clone and the battle may now begin. zigeme starts rushing at toshira with his sword while toshira casts Water Release: Great Water Arm Technique which (by putting the hydrification techinque into practical use, the muscles of the arm are temporarily enlarged and strengthened). Toshira with his speed lays a punch on zigeme but zigeme blocks it with his swords causing them to break. Then Toshira puts he hands on the sea and casts Water Style: Five Hungry Sharks Jutsu (which the user has to put their hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of five ferocious sharks which wait for they're prey). Zigeme laughs at toshira and asks what is the point of that. Toshira then tells him that he has only 2 options 1 is to fall in the water and fight the sharks and the other one to follow him to the mizukage. Zigeme giggles and starts rushing at toshira only to hear toshira say water release : lotus light rupture (Toshira creates drops of water from an outside source, which are then shaped into razor-sharp lotus pedals. As the petals expand in size and spin around, emitting explosive energy in every direction, they are launched at the opponent. The petals can be controlled and are able to kill a man with a single petal). Zigeme with a lotus stabbed in his belly falls down from the pain and toshira throws him into the water only to get killed by the sharks. Zigeme then wakes up to find himself in front of mizukage and some other shinobi including toshira. he asks why is he still alive and toshira sais.










--You were under genjutsu the moment you felt my presence.


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Home Village :
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Element(s) : Water, Lightning, Fire
Clan : Make
Clan Element : Kumo
Bloodline : Great
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Hōzuki Toshira   Thu Aug 09, 2018 6:13 pm

I can go ahead and help you out here.

Add a number for age and Get rid of the year in your birthday please.

Let's add about 2-3 sentences in your personality.

Let's make your history a paragraph or two, flesh it out a bit. Get rid of the year once more. How did he lose his parents? What's his dream? (If we're being picky, you can't have mastered clone/substitution until after you start rping, but eh)

Some of your words are black and blend in to the background so fix that if you can.


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Home Village :
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Element(s) : Water
Clan : Hōzuki
Clan Element : Water
Bloodline : Hydrification
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Hōzuki Toshira   Thu Aug 09, 2018 7:58 pm

thanks for your help but i already had them written but it didn't show them so i changed the color letter to white.
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Home Village :
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Element(s) : Water, Lightning, Fire
Clan : Make
Clan Element : Kumo
Bloodline : Great
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Hōzuki Toshira   Thu Aug 09, 2018 9:13 pm

Take out the 2008 from your history

Add more likes/dislikes, preferably 5 of each


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Element(s) : Water
Clan : Hōzuki
Clan Element : Water
Bloodline : Hydrification
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Hōzuki Toshira   Sun Aug 12, 2018 6:25 pm

Done
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Element(s) : Water, Lightning, Fire
Clan : Make
Clan Element : Kumo
Bloodline : Great
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Hōzuki Toshira   Sun Aug 12, 2018 6:35 pm



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