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Valen Akari
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Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Wind, Li
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
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PostSubject: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 07, 2018 12:39 pm

Name: Elemental Chains
Element: See below
Rank:   S
Spec Type: Nin
Backstory:    After Kenshin performed the transplant in order to grant Valen more power, the young man failed to capitalize on the opportunity. Instead, preferring to focus on his swordsmanship. The newly instated Hogokage began to work to fix this mistake as soon as he recovered from his defeat at the hands of the released Yonbi. Focusing on augmenting his chains to untold levels. His summons assisted him in the creation of this technique as well, teaching Valen how they adjusted their size so that he could utilize such an ability with his chains as well.


Appearance: Stark white/green/orange/blue/yellow chains that have spearheads on the end of them. The chains links are heavily interwoven to reduce the amount of space between the links to 0. 
similar to this:
 

Handseals:   N/A
Duration:   6 posts
Cooldown: Posted used x2
Range: 25 meters
Power:   Chakra Stat
Speed: Chakra Stat 
Health:  
Stat Boosts: See below.
What it does: Valen is able to channel any one of his elemental natures into the freely manipulatable chains gaining different properties depending on the element chosen. These properties will be explained below. First though, these chains may come from any of Valen’s 361 Tenketsu points. They come out merely an inch wide for the first inch but then may have their size increased at will to up to one meter across. This includes the spearhead. One can start the size change at any point of the chain however once the point at which it changes size is chosen the rest of the chain (From point chosen to spearhead) has to change size. One cannot cherry pick a small part to change sizes basically (Unless they chose JUST the spearhead, as that’s the end of the chain).

 Each chains may have their size altered separately from one another. The chains naturally have a sharpness equal to the power stat on the ends of the spear only, only being struck by them would of course carry the power behind the strike. One may only have up to 6 chains active at a time. One can spawn chains later on during the duration however the abilities activation and cooldown is tied to the first chain spawned. So if one were to spawn 3 chains to start the technique and then the other three on the 5th post, all 6 would disperse on the sixth.

Elements:

Fire: Adds jutsu power burning damage to the chains. The burning effect only occurs at jutsu power on contact. Should the chains be within 1 meter of someone the heat radiating off the chains will cause damage equal to 70 power. 

Lightning: Adds paralysis should the chains make contact shocking the body with lightning. Health higher than 70 required to resist.

Light: Adds a blinding light to the chains. Should a target see a chain when it’s up to 10 meters away from them they will be blinded if their health is less than 70. After the blindness they will take an RT debuff of 70 for 3 posts until their vision clears. Should they resist the blindness check, but do so by less than 20 health higher the RT debuff will still apply. 

Steam: Adds a corrosion effect to the chains, causing the target to suffer vaporous burns equal to 70 power each post for 2 posts after the chains physically leave the target.

Wind: Allows the chains to be made invisible to the naked eye, although chakra vision and any kind of pinpoint sensory will still be able to see them clear as day. This aspect will no longer work should they get within 2 meters of another living thing. (For that living thing only)

All powers not stated are to be assumed at Jutsu Power.

The initial AP cost of the technique has to be paid on the first post. However the user may summon as many chains as they want from 1-6. Should they choose 1 chain they pay the same cost as they would pay to summon 6. Should the user choose to summon the extra 5 later they will not incur a creation cost, but the upkeep cost will be added and must be paid on the first post. 

Character Specific: Valen Akari
Wordcount to learn:   8000
Action Cost: 100 initial 40 per chain per post.
Mastery:   No
Bonus Requirements: GE 2, Light Release, Gobi Jin, Uzumaki DNA
Canon or Custom: Custom


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Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Wind, Li
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Sat Aug 11, 2018 5:28 pm

Bump frands :3
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Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Wind, Li
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Sun Aug 12, 2018 10:36 pm

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Risako Akara
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Clan Element : N/A
Bloodline : N/A
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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:08 am

I'm going to say this is denied on the grounds that it should require Uzumaki DNA. Chakra chains are their thing.


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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:10 am

Ris he has Uzumaki dna



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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:11 am

aha I'm braindead, I must have assumed he had Akari and Akari only.


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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:26 am

(Specify Uzu DNA on bonus reqs)



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Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:28 am

Valid lol, done
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Clan Element : N/A
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Ryo : 5150
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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:30 am

In that case, I feel as if the core of the tech is good to go. The elemental effects needs to be expanded upon however. First would be the amount of elements you can wield, and I'd argue the limit should be one. Mostly because I see being able to combo the light chain with other chains relatively broken.

I know that it adds chakra power burning to the chains, but does it activate on touch, does it get so hot it has a range beyond the chains? Please define this ability a bit more.

Given that it's chakra stat, I'd argue asking for health higher than power to resist is a tad much for the lightning chain. Personally I'm a fan of having two resists for paralysis when it makes sense. Can we add a second resist?

I think light is fine where it is, but I see it being a tad overkill if you can combo it with different elements.

As for steam, I understand that it does corrosive damage based on the power, but what exactly does that entail? Please expand this area a bit. You've given it an effect but no description.

These are the issues I see with it atm, tho more are likely to crop up after discussion. I'm rather busy with work for the next few weeks and it would probably go by faster if we discussed it over Skype, but if that's not okay with you I have no problem posting on the app.


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PostSubject: Re: Elemental Chains   Tue Aug 28, 2018 1:20 pm

Approved on watch.


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