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Kotetsu
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PostSubject: Disperse   Tue Jun 19, 2018 11:35 pm

Name: Disperse
Element: n/a
Rank: A
Spec Type: Space-Time
Backstory: Kotetsu wasn't a spy, more of an assassin than anything. That being said, information gathering was important when you needed to kill someone. It's almost always easier to gather information when the target doesn't know you are there, so Kotetsu decided to come up with a technique that would allow him to modify the method he used to get to Arctis Tor. Instead of teleporting him to his icy home, this technique would shift Kotetsu out of the current plane of existence.


Appearance: The user disappears, leaving an after-image that slowly fades
Handseals: Monkey, Dragon, Snake, Dog, Seal of Confrontation
Duration: up to 4 posts (can be ended early)
Cooldown: Posts Used + 1 (CD starts when the user returns leaves the alternate phase)
Range: 10 Meters
Power: 60
Speed: 60
Health: n/a
Stat Boosts: n/a
What it does: The user phases out of the Material Plane, leaving an after-image that fades away at a speed equal to the speed of the jutsu. The after-image is essentially a "hologram" of the user standing there holding a seal of confrontation. it does nothing but stand there while it slowly vanishes. touching or otherwise interacting with the after-image will not have any affect on the phasing, nor will it adversely affect the person/object touching it. While in this alternate phase, the user and anyone with them will be able to see and hear anything that happens around them in the altered phase as well as the Material Plane. While in the alternate phase, the user can only interact with objects or people that are in the same phase. This does mean they can freely move through walls should they desire. While out of phase they cannot be seen, heard, or interacted with by anyone in the original phase.

The user can bring others into the alternate phase with him via direct physical contact. Those he brings with him can be brought either willingly or unwillingly. Anyone unwilling to be phased can resist with a chakra stat equal to 10+ the power of the justu.

As the user can bring people/objects with them when they phase, there is no minimum distance from anything in order for the user to phase. When the user or anyone they bring with them returns to the Material Plane, it must be done at least 1 meter away from someone else (including held objects). If a person/object returns to the Material Plane inside of a solid object, the body part/item in question is lost/destroyed.

Character Specific: Kotetsu, those he teaches
Wordcount to learn: 4500
Action Cost: 45 + 20 per additional person being phased, 25 upkeep. 
Mastery: Y
Bonus Requirements: Arctis Tor or any other Dimension technique
Canon or Custom: Custom


Last edited by Kotetsu on Wed Jun 20, 2018 1:22 am; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 12:25 am

I will be dealing with this Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 12:40 am

Hey, How is it going?


So, before I continue with this, I just want to confirm that the phasing happens at the jutsu speed, correct? Or is it RT? If it is RT, you are probably going to have to take the other stuff out, since that is pretty powerful by itself for an A rank jutsu. If it is jutsu speed, then I am willing to look at the other stuff.

Also, I would like to see a few more requirements for this. Being in two places at once, but at the same time at neither location is pretty freaking hard to do, something that only a master of space time could accomplish. Could you add a few more requirements to the jutsu? (Like X number of Space time techs, at least one of which must be S rank? Your Dimenson and other techs you have already can count toward this.)


As for the resist to fading, I am going to say they need a chakra stat equal to or greater than the power of this jutsu rather than power +20, I am willing to discuss this with you though if you disagree.

You say the Range on here is 10 meters, but what exactly does that mean? Is it that you can phase someone out as long as they are within 10 meters of you? Not going to lie, I don't like the thought of you being able to phase someone out of existence that easily as essentially a hit scan, even more so as an A rank jutsu. Usualy, phasing someone else needs to be done via physical contact.


Also, you say,


"When the user or anyone they bring with them returns to the Material Plane, it must be done at least 1 meter away from someone else."


I know I am nitpicking here, but please stretch that out to the items they are carrying as well, I just am having thoughts of someone phasing in one meter away from someone, with a 1 meter long weapon about an inch from another person, ready to stab them (Even more so if said weapon is going at 200+ Speed.)


Just a few quick things I saw from a quick look over, if you wish to argue anything or want more clarification on said thing, please let me know.


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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 12:56 am

1. Jutsu speed is 60, the phasing itself happens at jutsu speed, not RT. If it was, I believe it would be statted as an S-rank.

2. I can put in that my Dimension is a bonus requirement.

3. Would you be willing to compromise at Chakra stat + 10? I know +20 has been used on A-ranks before, but I'm willing to negotiate.

4. I put the range in there for the range at which you can see/hear things at that aren't in the phased state. It has to be physical contact in order to actually phase someone else. I can clarify that.

5. I can edit the exit information to state that objects need to be 1m from people as well.


Stats
Health: 40
                       Chakra: 120 (+20 from KKG)
Stamina: 40
                              Speed: 125 (+25 from item)
Strength: 45

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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 1:10 am

1. Ok, sure, that works for me, just make sure that is said.
2. Cool, works for me, or you can say any Dimension, Judging by the way you worded the character specific thing, I am going to presume you would like the ability to teach said jutsu? If not, feel free to keep it that way.
3. I will go ahead and allow it to go through with the +10, but the full mod might say otherwise, (Or might just say keep the +20)
4. Ok, good and solid, please do.
5. That would be awesome, thanks
6. Now, about this after image. So, I need a few more details, most notably how exactly does it work after you disappear. Do you have control of it? Do you have to tell it where it needs to go as it is summoned? Will it just stand still as if nothing is going on?


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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 1:16 am

2. Sure, I can update it to must having a dimension tech

6. Literally is a "hologram" of me standing there holding a seal of confrontation. it does nothing but stand there while it slowly vanishes. I can add that to the desc.


Stats
Health: 40
                       Chakra: 120 (+20 from KKG)
Stamina: 40
                              Speed: 125 (+25 from item)
Strength: 45

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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 1:20 am

Oh, last thing, The AP can be 45 if you wish.


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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 1:21 am

Sure, edited to 45 ap base. Smile


Stats
Health: 40
                       Chakra: 120 (+20 from KKG)
Stamina: 40
                              Speed: 125 (+25 from item)
Strength: 45

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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 2:44 am

Trial approved


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PostSubject: Re: Disperse   Wed Jun 20, 2018 2:53 am

Bump for full approval


Stats
Health: 40
                       Chakra: 120 (+20 from KKG)
Stamina: 40
                              Speed: 125 (+25 from item)
Strength: 45

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