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Nekrun Uzumaki
Genin of Konoha
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Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Leaf

Element(s) : Wind
Clan : Uzumaki
Bloodline : Uzumaki Longevity
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Nekrun uzumaki   Mon May 21, 2018 11:53 pm

Nekrun uzumaki

Basic Information


Age:14
Birthday:December 5th
Gender:Male
Height:6 foot 3 inches
Weight:150 pounds
Appearance: Nekrun is Tall and skinny he is always wearing a black mask with a black robe and sandals. He has a scar across his left cheek on his face his nose is rigid and big. he has green eyes and long blue hair. His hair is put back into a man bun. He has no facial hair. He has his family crest on the back of his robe in white it looks like a diamond made of bricks. The same crest is also on his shoulders of his robe. Under his robe he wears a all black shirt with the konoha crest on it instead of his family crest.

Personality: Nekrun likes to battle when he gets a chance to prove himself. Nekrun mostly wants to prove himself so that he will be noticed by others. He likes the world around him. He enjoys playing with his friends in his village. He also likes to study for all his exams usually passing with flying colors. Whenever he finds a hard foe to beat it makes him want to get even stonger to defeat that foe. He also is the top of his class in taijutsu.
History: Nekrun was a very nice child and he had a very nice family his dad is from the Uzumaki clan while his mom is from He doesn't know. He was a small child when he started to find friends and they introduced him to taijustu he automatically loved it. He started doing research he quickly learned there was more he was introduced to Medical Jutsu and space time justu those were his two favorite justu and dedicated his life to learning them. His father saw him studying one day and told him all about the bloodline of the Uzumaki. Along the way many kids decided they didn't like that he was trying to get ahead so they beat him up hoping he would stop. He didn't stop and in fact he had to work even harder to get strong enough to beat them. Given that konoha was defeated he is now very mad and is hoping someday he can defeat the ninja and redeem hope for his village. 

Likes:battle and long walks on the beach
Dislikes:Anything that doesn't involve a fight he also doesn't like Fruits and vegetables

Ninja Traits


Rank: Academy student
Village: Hidden in the leaves
Element(s):Wind
Specialties:
Clan: Uzumaki

Stats


Health:10
Chakra:5
Stamina:5
Speed:5
Strength:5

The Player


Other Characters:
Roleplay Sample: Nekrun is now 15 and has mastered his chakra chains. He was just put onto a mission to save some children that had been abducted by some rouge ninja. Nekrun was runing down the road on his way to find the children when a ninja was following him he noticed and quickly used his chakra chains to pull the ninja in and stop him from doing anything he quickly killed the ninja and left a mark on him. Than another 5 jumped out, "Earth style, earth dome jutsu!". Nekrun used space tone justu to teleport out of the area to the mark on the dead ninja. "Drat!" Said the earth style user. "You killed our best friend" said the one that was now standing the closest to Nekrun out of the bunch. He did a few hand-signs and put his hand up to his mouth, fire shot from his mouth and left a singe on Nekrun's foot luckily only grazing his toe. Nekrun dodged to the left and quickly ran in and punched the man in the gut he was happy with what he had learned in taijutsu. One out of the five down only 4 to go, while he was busy with the fire style ninja the others had hid away I guess they wanted one on one battles or they were preparing to ambush Nekrun. He hoped it was the former so he looked at the man in front of him it was the earth style user from earlier. "So you want another fight" said Nekrun "Yes I do" said the earth style user. It started to rain but only a sprinkle right now. Then Nekrun smirked "what are you smiling about" said the earth style user. "About how I'm going to win without trying" Said Nekrun in return. That made the earth style user smile, Nekrun quickly stated "You think that's funny how about this" Nekrun started to run at the earth style user. "Earth Style, Earth wall!" a giant wall appeared in front of them Nekrun but that didn't stop him he punched a hole straight through the wall and hit the earth style ninja cracking his skull open. The ninja was dead, but another one appeared out of the trees he was very big but he looked strong. The ninja said I am the water style ninja of our squad.The rain was now a storm what a unlucky day for Nekrun. Water clones started to show up on all sides he threw a shuriken at each as they showed up. He almost didn't notice the real one coming closer with each clone he destroyed. "I am a god in the rain you will never stop me!" said the water ninja enthusiastically. Nekrun pulled something off his back "I didn't want to have to use this" it looked similar to the kohaku no Jōhei but it wasn't the same. He smashed it into the mud *Lightning strikes in the background*. "If you become to difficult to handle I'll seal you all in here" said Nekrun. They all burst out in laughter giving away their positions "like we would ever let you do that" they said. Nekrun wove some hand-signs and they ran to stop him but it was too late "Sealing Jutsu!!" Nekrun yelled they all were sucked in to the tiny container he did another couple hand signs "Crushing Container Jutsu" Nekrun said finally and the battle was done.The rouge ninja that attacked were dead he released their corpses to the ground and went on his way trying to find the children they had to be close because they had the body guards fight Nekrun. It turned out they had tied the children up and left them about 1 mile away. Luckily Nekrun found them and he brought them back to the village safely.








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Last edited by Nekrun Uzumaki on Wed Jun 27, 2018 4:20 am; edited 17 times in total (Reason for editing : wanted to add more)
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Valen Akari
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Fame : 153
Home Village :
  • Star

Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Light
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed May 23, 2018 1:11 pm

Time to tango my friend.

Try to fix your colours bleeding all over the place. Only the first word in each area should be coloured. 

Appearance: Expand upon this heavily. This should be at least a full paragraph. How does his face look? His eyes? Describe his hair, hair colour, facial hair? Any piercings or adornments on his clothing? Give the people you'll be posting with a full on description so that they can truly visualize your character. He won't always be wearing a robe and mask. 

Personality: Again, a full paragraph at least. What makes him tick? What's his motivation? How does he feel about his village? Other people? Is he generally content with the world around him? Angry? Sad? Why does he like to prove himself? Where does that drive stem from? 

History: This should be the longest part of your app easily. Two solid paragraphs here. Who were his parents? How did he grow up? Was he bullied? Kiri just recently defeated Konoha on the field of battle with the only death in the battle being a single Konoha shinobi. How does he feel about that? 

Rank: Good 
Village: Good
Elements: Good
Specs: Blank, good. 
Clan: Good

Stats: Good

Roleplay Sample: This needs to be one of the predescribed scenarios written in the character creation rules. I'll post them in the spoiler below. 

Spoiler:
 

Remember, it has to be at least 500 words. Put the total word count at the end of the sample. 

Bump this when ready.
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Nekrun Uzumaki
Genin of Konoha
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Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Leaf

Element(s) : Wind
Clan : Uzumaki
Bloodline : Uzumaki Longevity
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed May 23, 2018 2:11 pm

edited


Basic Stats
Health:13
Chakra: 36
Stamina:12
Speed:44
Strength:12
Bonus AP:4 
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Valen Akari
Hogokage
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Fame : 153
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Light
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed May 23, 2018 3:54 pm

Everything looks good except I'd like you to try to expand upon your personality a biiiit more.
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Nekrun Uzumaki
Genin of Konoha
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Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Leaf

Element(s) : Wind
Clan : Uzumaki
Bloodline : Uzumaki Longevity
Ryo : 0
100%


PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed May 23, 2018 10:11 pm

I added two more sentences is that good?


Basic Stats
Health:13
Chakra: 36
Stamina:12
Speed:44
Strength:12
Bonus AP:4 
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Valen Akari
Hogokage
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Fame : 153
Home Village :
  • Star

Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Light
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
100%


PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed May 23, 2018 10:55 pm


Congratulations for submitting a character app and having it approved.
Please:
- Take a look at any rules that you haven't already looked at.
- Create a topic here for your character's stats and jutsu.
- Put your character's stats in your signature.
- Update your profile accordingly.
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Genin of Konoha
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Element(s) : Lightning
Clan : Uchiha, Hyuuga
Clan Element : Fire
Bloodline : Sharingan,Byakugan
Ryo : 500
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PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed Jun 27, 2018 1:52 am

Nice!!!!
I like your story man


basic stats
Health: 3
Chakra: 15
Stamina: 10
Speed: 12
Strength: 15
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Valen Akari
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Fame : 153
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Lightning, Fire, Light
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed Jun 27, 2018 2:36 am

Fuyo, again buddy, please don't post on other peoples apps that are not your own.
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Nekrun Uzumaki
Genin of Konoha
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Fame : 8
Home Village :
  • Leaf

Element(s) : Wind
Clan : Uzumaki
Bloodline : Uzumaki Longevity
Ryo : 0
100%


PostSubject: Re: Nekrun uzumaki   Wed Jun 27, 2018 3:58 am

could a dev put this into approved characters please


Basic Stats
Health:13
Chakra: 36
Stamina:12
Speed:44
Strength:12
Bonus AP:4 
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