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Maximillian Yamaguchi
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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Sat Apr 07, 2018 7:08 am

A spar would be fun. Max hadn't gotten much of a chance to really push himself like sparring could. He learned a lot through study, but now it was time to put that book knowledge to practical use. Max would nod, though Komori may not have seen such. Max would smile, saying aloud "Yes, that sounds like it could be some real training. Facing off against a Jounin should help prepare me to become one."

Max would follow Komori to the training grounds, the areas layout clear. On either side there was forest, while directly in front of the two was a railing overlooking the cliff side. While a fall would be dangerous, they were standing far enough away (20 meters from Komori, who was in the lead) that they shouldn't have to worry too much. Max would stand roughly 5 meters away from Komori as they stopped and the Jounin asked his question. 

"I came to train with the best. Don't disappoint." Max would say with a smile as he formed Rat -> Dog hand seals to pull his puppet pals from storage. 

Max would climb into Dread Knight, close the back and don the visor and headphones. The puppet was rather large, and its skin a sickly white contrasting sharply with its black, lifeless eyes. It was covered in a dark robe hiding most of its body besides its face, lower arms and lower legs. 

The puppet would spring to life, Max connecting the needed chakra strings to it and bringing life to it, his puppet Stein, and his skeletal puppet. He would have four other odd, corpse-like puppets that remained lifeless on the ground. 

"I am ready when you are," Max would say using Ventriloquism.

AP costs: 1057-20 (Storage Displacement-retrieval) -30 (Stein's Stench of Death-mandatory upon activating him)-5(Ventriloquism)= 1002 AP left.


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Thu Apr 12, 2018 5:50 pm

Prepare for jounin, huh? Komori gave no physical indication that would give away his thoughts. His body was ready for combat, he trained himself to not give away what he was thinking. Looks like Max is growing up. As Max withdrew his puppets and prepared for the spar, Komori speed blitzed him into oblivion.

The jounin was slightly caught off guard upon seeing an 18 foot giant emerge, momentarily losing track of Max before noticing he was climbing in the back. Uhhh. Komori noticed the group of puppets that appeared as though they belonged in a sepulchre. A little disturbing? Yes. Was Komori used to it after living in the current state of Kumo? Pretty much.

It seemed as though Max was waiting for him to make the first move, according to his disembodied voice. Komori remained standing with his arms crossed, studying the puppets as a pool of water appeared at his feet. Fifteen meter-wide orbs of water rose from the ground around him, floating around his person. He would send 5 at each active target; 5 at the skeleton, 5 at Stein, and 5 at Dread Knight, each at a speed of 40 and with a power of 40. Komori was starting with a lower ranked technique in order to gauge the strength of these puppets, since he knew little to nothing about them except that they were  e d g y.

AP: 1145 - 20 Water Balloon = 1125


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Fri Apr 13, 2018 7:37 am

Max would take it all in, everything the Jounin was doing. It would look as though Komori was doing nothing at all, but water would form at his feet and begin to turn to bubbles and float slowly into the air. There was no knowing just how powerful these little bubbles of water were, so Max would do his best not to be struck by them. Max would also note that this technique didn’t seem to require any hand seals. It was impressive, as it shows that Max wasn’t dealing with any old slouch. No, this was the champion of Kumo, and one to not be taken lightly.
 
Max could move in to strike at the Hozuki, though this was as much an experiment for the boy as it was a spar. He simply needed to see what all Komori was capable of, as he wasn’t able to get too much from the fight in the arena that he watched. The fifteen bubbles, now ready, were then shot out towards the puppets, their movement well within what Max could comprehend and defend against. The bubbles were about a meter wide, and each moved and fired at the puppets simultaneously. If they were to all actually hit the puppets they were aimed for, they (each set of five) would have varying lines of trajectory that all converged on the position the puppets were currently standing in.
 
The skeleton would shift two meters to the right (Speed 70), placing him now five meters away from Dread Knight on roughly its right hand side. Stein would shift two meters to the left (speed 70), placing him five meters away on what would roughly be considered the left hand side. The puppets would continue to move towards the aquatic shinobi (speed 100) closing the five meter gap and moving on to the offensive. The skeleton (if he reaches Komori without needing to change course due to some sort of attempt to counter) now only 0.5 meters away would rake at the chest of the Jounin using its boney fingertips, likely drawing blood if it connects (Speed: 100, Sharpness: 46). It would make this slash with its right hand, moving in the motion of Komori’s right pectoral muscle to his left hand lower ribs. Stein would now also be in position on the opposite side (since they moved the same distance at the same speed) and ready itself to attack Komori depending on how he reacts to the Skeleton.
 
Dread Knight (and Max inside) would have also shifted out of the way of the bubbles. Shifting (Speed: 100) five meters to the right, placing it on the same side as the skeleton puppet, but in the position it was in after dodging the orbs. It could press forward as well, but the Knight would sit back and watch, waiting to make its move.
 
This is all happening roughly at the same time (the shifts in position that is). Should the state of the battlefield change, these actions could change as well. 

AP: 1002 - 5 (Stench of Death upkeep) = 997


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Thu Apr 26, 2018 5:45 am

Komori smirked as the puppets sidestepped his modest attack and lashed out at him. If he had felt like it, he could have possibly altered their course but seeing as that how they were too slow in order to be effective. Komori allowed for himself to be hit… but the attacks would pass right through his watery form. No lightning, no problem.

Speaking of lightning, Komori reached out using his left hand, corresponding the the attacking skeleton, to grab onto it. He looked into its lifeless eyes while simultaneously raising his right hand into the air. “That’s rather rude, Max.” Thunder rumbled overhead as a lightning bolt struck from the heavens at a speed of 50 and connected to Komori’s hand, which then channeled itself into the puppet, electrocuting it with a power of 50. All the while, Komori was keeping a close eye on Stein in his peripheral vision.

Assuming that his attack went through and the skeleton was mostly dealt with, Komori would jump backwards at a speed of 125, 10m away from where he had been standing, assuming he was not pursued. With his right hand placed in his pocket, he would look at the puppets once more. He never really cared for them in general, but Max certainly put an… interesting twist on the concept of them.

His free left hand quickly signed the half handed Tiger seal, water chakra churning with his stomach which was then released in the form of a sharpened stream from his mouth towards Stein’s massive torso at a speed of 80 with a power of 80, all the while releasing a small puddle of water at his feet once more.

1125 - 5 Hydrification - 20 Lightning Rod - 40 Suiton Suidanha = 1060


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Ryo : 22100
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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Sun Apr 29, 2018 8:08 am

As expected the simple melee attack of the puppet would slide right through the Hozuki with ease, dealing what looked like no damage to the Jounins chest. Good. The genetic composition of this specimen was… so strange. Was he simply made of water that looked like it was in the form of a human, or was he able to rapidly convert his cells into water at a near instantaneous rate? These were the questions that rang in the head of young Max as he assessed the situation. Nevertheless, he had read about the clan and their abilities and he wanted to see how well their defenses held up.
 
Komori would then say something (based on seeing his mouth move) but Max didn’t likely hear it because of being inside of Dread Knight and wearing headphones. Raising his hand up, he generated some sort of technique as chakra began forming. Then a lightning bolt would seem to begin crash down towards Komori, likely trying to use himself as a conduit (you know, because people typically don’t electrocute themselves). Max figured that his puppet was going to take the brunt of whatever lightning attack had been coming at it, but Max didn’t really care too much. He wasn’t happy about it, but pawns sometimes need to be sacrificed in order to claim victory. The skeleton would try and grab Komori’s arm where he had a hold of the puppet (Speed 120 Strength 80). Max had figured the boney hand would likely grab hold of a fist full of water, but it had to try something and this would provide valuable information for the boy.
 
He would allow the puppet to be electrocuted with the attack by not moving or shifting out of the way. Though would the lighting impact the Hozuki’s ability to liquefy? Max would soon find out when the bolt finally manages to actually strike the Hozuki and then the skeleton. The bolt would likely have to pass through where the puppet was going to grab at (causing the first non-Komori thing it struck to be the hand in the arm water), and if the Hozuki removed his arm from the puppet the lighting jutsu would likely ground out because it had nowhere to go.
 
At the same time that Komori’s calling lightning was happening Max would activate his puppetry technique, Puppetry Performance: Skillful Achievement with a Human Body. The threads would quickly (Speed 75 Power 75) traverse the 5 meter distance directly to him as the bolt sluggishly crashed to the Jounin, the threads attempting to latch on to him. Because of Max’s control over his chakra and simply his ability to suppress it the threads were invisible, and should not cause much alarm to the Hozuki who likely had no way of detecting them coming at him. Considering the distances involved in calling a lightning bolt from the sky, Max should have little difficulty clearing the distance while Komori attempts to shock the puppet that seemingly has no way of harming him.

AP: 997-5 (Stench of Death mandatory upkeep)- 40 (Skillful Achievement) = 952


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Thu May 03, 2018 3:29 am

Komori blinked harshly a few times. This putrid smell was starting to affect him a bit. When the skeleton attempted to grab onto him, Komori would allow for that specific part of his body to turn to water, moving faster than the lightning struck to slam his elbow into the skeleton (125 speed, 30 strength), the lightning finding an outlet there, just as a precaution. There was no reason why his own lightning would not be able to dance across his liquid form, but he wanted to make sure. Komori was still able to hydrificate, however, as he was immune to his own lightning which was a beautiful perk.

Since the lightning bolt would already be called down, it would strike Komori and channel into the skeleton, effectively defeating it. It was at that point the strings would attach apparently, Komori quickly turning and noticing them, letting out a choice word or two. Max knew how much Komori did not care for puppets, and now he was forcing the Hozuki to become one. He strained against it, keeping Stein in his peripheral. It would require more strength than Komori had at the moment, but there was a way he could break it. Probably. He just needed to see what Max would do first.

1060 - 5 Hydrification = 1055


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Sat May 05, 2018 12:30 am

The lighting crashes down to Komori and into the puppet, zapping it thoroughly and causing black char marks to streak across the skeleton. The puppet, now fried, would fall over defeated. Of course, this sacrifice allowed Max to attach his strings to the Hozuki and that was what he was going for. 
 
The large Dread Knight puppet would step forward as Stein would fall back 5 meters and kneel, the puppet seeming to show respect to its puppet master. The huge undead Dread Knight would now be 2 meters away from the Aquatic Jounin.
 
 
Komori would find himself having difficulty moving (since he already somehow noticed the strings made clear by his ‘choice words’ regarding being a puppet) as Max applies his control to the body of the Hozuki. Testing the limits of his control, he would make the Jounin extend his arm to the side, and then balance on one leg before making him go back to standing there.
 
The Hozuki would hear Max’s voice over the telepathy seal, “You look pale and sick, likely because of Steins toxins. I can look over you and make sure that it isn’t life threatening, but not in a battle. Do you yield so that I can check up on you?” Typically Max would feel confident that while their body was under his control he was safe from harm, but this was a Jounin level opponent and not one to be underestimated. He WAS the undefeated champion after all.
 
Max would allow his friend to answer, though he would remain alert. Any signs that Komori was attacking or trying to escape would be met with Max’s continued assault. 


952 - 5 (Steins forced upkeep) - 20 AP (Upkeep on Skillful Achievement) = 927 AP


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Sun May 06, 2018 3:17 am

Komori’s arm was rudely extended while he found that he himself was not in control of his body. The one legged stance he shortly found himself in afterwards only helped to confirm that. The disgruntled Hozuki fought the urge to growl at his misfortune, the frustration of not being in control of his own incredible body sinking in. He strained against the threads, before coming up with a solution that might allow him to break free, but was promptly interrupted by his body fighting the urge to vomit. If the strings did not prohibit his movement, he would fall on one knee and cover his nose and mouth, eyes closed trying to regain his composure as the putrid smell threatened to overtake him.

Komori answered the telepathic message back with his own, We can call it a draw.” The jounin might have incredible stamina, but his endurance was severely lacking. Komori had no interest in drawing this out any further, as he could barely manage to breathe past the stench of edgy death. He would stand up on his own, pushing himself off of the ground and his knee as he would stand straight again. Again, if the chakra threads prohibited it.


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Sun May 06, 2018 11:05 am

Max would listen and wait, wondering if he had actually just managed to surprise the Jounin champion in their bout. Judging from the look on Komori’s eyes, he was not a happy person while his body was Max’s puppet. “He doesn’t look very happy at all. I wonder, are all of my puppets this unhappy on the inside, their whole existence being controlled by another?


Napa, did you dislike your time as a puppet?” Max would ask telepathically to his dearest friend, hoping to shed some light on such a serious question.  
 
“I have always been more than a simple puppet, boy. Is it you that lead my actions, or the reverse to be true?” Napa would ask before audibly cackling in the head of Max.

“You see everyone is controlled by someone or something else, in one way or another. Think for example those shinobi that loyally serve under Maku and Mortarion, like Senshi had. Are they not puppets to the kage’s will, blindly obeying the orders from above? If they were simply used by their superior, their actions are not their fault. They could do horrible things, and shrug off the guilt simply because they were following the orders of another.”


Napa had no real body, but Max was almost able to feel the heat of his breath on his ear and his voice came across as but a whisper, “Everybody deep down seeks someone to take control and lead them, easing their burdens of choice and decision. It is easier being the puppet than the puppeteer…”
 
The words of Napa were haunting, sending a chill down the spine of the young Chuunin. Max would snap back into reality as he heard the voice of Komori saying that it was a draw. Max wasn’t entirely sure how, but he was far more concerned with making sure that Komori was okay than figuring out where such a idea was coming from.
 
Max would remove his strings from his puppets (including Komori), Stein slumping over lifeless and Dread Knight sinking to its knees. The hatch on the back would open up and Max would remove the visor and headphones before hopping out and quickly moving to check on his pale friend.
 
Max would check the Hozuki’s pulse and breathing, using a cloth to wipe away any sweat that may be building up on the face of Komori because of the toxins. “I don’t think that it is life threatening, but you may want to relax for a bit. I’ve started to read up on this technique that should speed up your body’s natural healing, which hopefully should help remedy your condition.” Max wasn’t entirely sure, since he wasn’t actually a licensed medical expert by any stretch of the imagination. He simply read a lot regarding the subject and practiced using the techniques.
 
Max would form a Modified Ox followed by a Tiger hand seal. This was his first time he had to create the technique for any real use, and so he would channel the medical chakra from his hand into the Jounin. Hopefully it would help.


OoC: Since the fighting is over, no need to continue keeping track of AP (though if needed I will add it)

TWC: 3414


Doctor Max is not a licensed physician. His use of the word doctor is purely for aesthetic and stylistic effect -- see also: Pepper, Dre, Octopus. Max will not be held accountable for anything that might befall patients under his care.


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PostSubject: Re: Jounin Level Training (P, Komori)   Sun May 06, 2018 5:11 pm

Komori was fully willing to let the pseudo doctor Max use him as a patient. Even though the boy had an odd taste in puppets and what he chose to do in his free time, but his heart was in the right place. “I appreciate it.” The Hozuki had once debated about becoming a medical specialist, but with multiple others in Kumogakure already delving into the matter, he deemed that it would not be worth the specialization. Instead, Komori had begun to throw himself into the study of space and time, his obsession with teleportation driving him to pursue his goals. If he could move faster, near instantaneously, he could do more. He could protect the village and its inhabitants.

The stench was still lingering, so once Max had finished his medical diagnosis on Komori, the jounin would stand up and thank the boy. “We need to do this again sometime soon, alright, buddy?” Komori would give a casual smile to the boy, waiting to see if he had anything that needed saying, before turning around and holding his hand up as he went.

--Exit--
WC: 2250
Claiming: 200 words towards Mugenha to finish with max stats (6000/6000), and then 2050 words towards its mastery (2050/8000), 20 AP


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