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Komon Hyuuga <3
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Fame : 118
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Lightning, Earth, Fire
Clan : Twins of Kumogakure
Clan Element : Twinstincts
Bloodline : Inferiority Complex
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PostSubject: Living Lightning   Sun Mar 11, 2018 7:18 am

Name: Living Lightning
Element: Lightning
Rank: S
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory:
Lightning has always been the center of Komon Hyuuga's build. The element always came easier to him than the others, and over the years he began to develop his skills further. This is the ultimate cumulation of these skills, the crowned jewel in his arsenal of lightning based techniques. He developed it after years of research on chakra infusion, and elemental natures, by temporarily converting his entire chakra system into the lightning nature.

Appearance:

Sparks of Lightning constantly pulsating on the users skin, and glowing blue eyes.
Handseals: Seal of Confrontation
Duration: 6 Posts
Cooldown: Once per topic
Range: Komon and his clothing to a meter off of him
Power: 100
Speed: 100
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: +70 speed and chakra +25 power to lightning jutsu
What it does:

This technique is activated by replacing the users normal chakra system entirely with enhanced lightning nature chakra, their signature is still completely recognizable in this state (So this wont mask you from people who know your signature). But, the users physical body does take on some noticable changes. The eyes for one, glow an intense blue, and sparks pulsate erratically around the users body.

The jutsu activates at the users RT, but the sparks pulsate around the user at a speed and power of 100. While the sparks surround the user any physical contact with the user by an opponent will cause electrocution at the power and speed of the sparks, as the lightning spreads from the point they touched on Komons body to all throughout the opponents body or conductable object for a total range of 1 meter before dying out. (Electrocution requires physical contact, the lightning does not just leap off of his body)

While in this state the user is unable to use anything other than lightning techniques and non elemental jutsu, as they’ve electrified their entire chakra system, and their speed and chakra are magnified due to the effects of having electricity running through the chakra system. Because the entire chakra system is made of lightning at the time the user can channel more concentrated power into their techniques adding 25 power to all lightning techs.

Note: the user is obviously immune to their own lightning

Character Specific: Komon Hyuuga and those he teaches
Wordcount to learn: 6000
Action Cost: 65 per post, upkeep is half rounded up 
Mastery: No
Bonus Requirements: 1 Lightning S rank, 1 Lightning A Rank, 2 Lightning B Ranks and 2 Lightning C ranks
Canon or Custom: Custom




"Danger is real, but fear is a choice"


Last edited by Komon Hyuuga <3 on Fri Mar 30, 2018 5:30 am; edited 14 times in total
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Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Mangekyou Sharingan, Wood Release
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Sun Mar 11, 2018 11:45 am

Did you intend to give this handseals or are the lack of "N/A" on it and a mastery confusing me?

Seems fine mostly, but I foresee some problems with the part where it shoots lightning at anyone within 1m. Is it like projectile or a single stream? Do they follow the target or will they go in a straight line and the disperse beyond 1m? If the sparks come like projectiles, do they have dimensions and is there a limit of how many can be out at once or how many are produced each post? If a stream, is there a limit of people that can be affected/a limit of streams that can form at once?
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Clan : Twins of Kumogakure
Clan Element : Twinstincts
Bloodline : Inferiority Complex
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Sun Mar 11, 2018 5:46 pm

Edited




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Fame : 118
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Element(s) : Lightning, Earth, Fire
Clan : Twins of Kumogakure
Clan Element : Twinstincts
Bloodline : Inferiority Complex
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Tue Mar 13, 2018 2:28 pm

Bumpidy




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Fame : 118
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Element(s) : Lightning, Earth, Fire
Clan : Twins of Kumogakure
Clan Element : Twinstincts
Bloodline : Inferiority Complex
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Thu Mar 15, 2018 3:51 pm

Kabump




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Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Mangekyou Sharingan, Wood Release
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Fri Mar 16, 2018 7:08 pm

Should specify that there can only be one arc at a time.

I assume it can originate from any point on the body, not only chest. What happens to one such stream if the intended target leaves range? Can the stream be instantly dropped and launched from another point of your body, can it reattach to another point of your body?
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Fame : 118
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Element(s) : Lightning, Earth, Fire
Clan : Twins of Kumogakure
Clan Element : Twinstincts
Bloodline : Inferiority Complex
Ryo : 0
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Fri Mar 30, 2018 3:47 am

Made some edits cuz I wasn’t feeling the lightning beams anymore




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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Fri Mar 30, 2018 4:34 am

(For those of you that don't know, Komon asked for someone else to look at this while Naoki is gone.)


So, half asleep, but taking a look at this anyways.


1. Could you change the backstory from "Lightning has always been the center of Komon Hyuuga's build" to something like "Lighting Has always been Komon's Favorite element." "Build" seems kinda meta in my opinion.

2. Duration 6 post as per normal for S rank jutsu.

3. So.... I feel like a jerk for doing this, but since there is an attack involved in this I feel like there should be a handseal in order to activate it. Due to the range, I'll say you only need one. (If you want to hit me up on skype, I am willing to reconsider on this though.)

4. Going to say Word Count 6000 since it is slightly more than an S rank booster (But not by much, so not 8000) Once again, if this is a big thing for you, feel free to hit me up on skype and annoy me about it as well.

5. Komon said "While the sparks surround the user any physical contact with the user by an opponent will cause electrocution at the power and speed of the spark"
.....So, if I understand correctly there are sparks that come off of the user and can be directed at people within 1 meter, right? At a speed/power of 100? If so, what is the speed power of 70 at the start of the app for?


6. You can keep it once per topic if you want, or you can change the cool down to "2 Times the amount of post this jutsu was used." Your call


Really cool jutsu, by the way.


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Clan : Twins of Kumogakure
Clan Element : Twinstincts
Bloodline : Inferiority Complex
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Fri Mar 30, 2018 5:20 am

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE




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Clan Element : Wood
Bloodline : Mangekyou Sharingan, Wood Release
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PostSubject: Re: Living Lightning   Fri Mar 30, 2018 5:56 am

I'll just move it and pretend that I solved it. Approved
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