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PostSubject: Kensei Bodi Outer Eye   Sat Feb 24, 2018 12:44 am

Not an active application, is/has converting to a bloodline application.

Name: Kensei Bodi Outer Eye
Element: None
Rank: E/D/C/B/A/S
Spec Type: Bloodline, Ninjutsu
Backstory: Orochimaru was obsessed with acquiring and knowing all jutsu, for this he took a hold of eternal life as well as he obsessed over and experimented upon the Sharingan for its ability to see chakra and jutsu on a fundamental level. Whether equally obsessed or not, Kabuto adopted Orochimaru's research, as well as many Orochimaru made many Shin Uchiha clones with varying degrees of genetic modifications and mutations, as the Kensei bloodline is derived in one way or another from the culmination of both Orochimaru's and Kabuto's research, there is innate genetics for the Doujutsu.

Furthermore because Orochimaru used juugo's unique body to developed a cursed seal that not only allowed thosed embedded to gain a small boost in power, as well as chakra thanks to gaining a small sense of sage power, he was able to also embedded fragments of his will into the seal. This seal was part of the experimentation used by both he and Kabuto to perfect their bodies with sage arts and so that fragmented will has lived on to become a sort of innate instinct of sorts  within the Kensei's every cell.  

Appearance:
Handseals:
Duration: Indefinite/Until canceled
Cooldown: N/A
Range: 9/15/25/35/55/79
Power: 9/15/25/35/55/79
Speed: 9/15/25/35/55/79
Health: 9/15/25/35/55/79
Stat Boosts: +9/15/25/35/55/70 speed and chakra stat
What it does:


The Outer Eye - due to Orochimaru's obsession with the sharingan there is a genetic imprint of the doujutsu within the Kensei blood. Activating this minor doujutsu provides chakra vision, processing the nature of the chakra, as well as allows one to see the chakra network of another all in a similar way to how the sharingan works.
While active, the user may gain + 5/10/15/20/30/40 to chakra stat when calculating genjutsu resistance and/or as a reaction time boost, and either chosen benefit costs 1 ap a post per (so if just using the genjutsu resist boost then its an additional 1 ap a round, if using the reaction boost its 1 ap per round, if using both its an additional 2 ap per round). When mastered at the rank of the jutsu, it only cost 1 additional ap per round for both boosts.
This minor doujutsu manifests as a small 'third eye' sensory organ within and the size of the foreheads tenketsu point and it resides under the skin. It is able to see through obstructions with a health ( or if it doesnt have a health stat then its power) equal to or less then this jutsu's power.

-Technique Copying:
the user can "copy" jutsu and be allowed use of it. You may preform any jutsu you see, while it is been performed and during the thread it is performed in but only during that thread unless you learn it, so long as you meet its requirements. Any basic jutsu (up to A rank) you obvserve during the thread can be learned in that thread as if you were taught the jutsu. Outside of the thread, or with advanced (S rank) jutsu you will have to re-develop and make any non cannon jutsu as your own (request registry/approval for a new custom thats similar to the jutsu in nature but obviously personalized). The restrictions in the previous sentence may be ignored if the user receives explicit permission from the player you observed using the jutsu.

Character Specific: Kensei bloodline
Wordcount to learn: 900 for E rank and an additional 1000 for each rank minus the word count previously paid.
Action Cost: Active cost: E-C rank it is 20 initial and 10 upkeep, B it is 15 initial and 5 upkeep, A and S it is 10 initial and 1 upkeep.
Mastery: y, only to increase jutsu power
Bonus Requirements: Kensei
Canon or Custom: bloodline


Shinoskay:
 

it happened, I have proof:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Kensei Bodi Outer Eye   Wed Apr 18, 2018 12:49 pm

So this looks and feels like you're trying to combine a Dojutsu with a sensory net and an active booster. Which isn't going to fly. 

The active stat booster is it's own jutsu. You can make it multi rank and for your clan only of course. You can also add in +25 substats onto it if you wanted. It would however have to follow the active booster rules of a maximum 6 post duration at S rank with the CD (although your max numbers for each rank are 10 over, E = 9 D = 19, etc. 

The passive sensory net would be a passive skill. 

The passive RT, the gen resistance, the copying (not sure how I feel about a clan other than sharingan having that but we'll see when it's apped as a bloodline), and the active RT are all able to put onto a Dojutsu. You could also tack on a +20 buff to a mainstat when the dojutsu is active (Standard for clans should the apper desire the buff and it makes any logical sense) but you'd have to make sure the passive RT buff and the active buff DO NOT stack. 

I think that's everything.
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PostSubject: Re: Kensei Bodi Outer Eye   Wed Apr 18, 2018 4:40 pm

Before I link, please know I am not linking another persons app to support mechanics... I reference it to show you the conversation I had with noaki as well as to show you the bloodline is already approved with the intent of this application been made into a jutsu. please look Here


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it happened, I have proof:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Kensei Bodi Outer Eye   Thu Apr 19, 2018 3:42 am

This is still a dojutsu and an active booster which do not work together AP wise, duration, or CD wise. Pick one aspect, the Dojutsu, or the active booster. Edit out the parts of the other, and then we can really get started.
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