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Shinoskay
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Bloodline : ???
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PostSubject: Shinoskay   Sat Feb 10, 2018 2:40 am

Character Name Here
Shinoskay Shirogane
   
Basic Information


    Age:13
    Birthday:05/29
    Gender: Male
    Height: 4'6"
    Weight: 100lbs

    Appearance:
Shinoskay wears a white tabi with whatever his current villages head band lazily tied onto his forehead, Knotted so that the ribbon lets about a foot of loose slack on either side of his head, sometimes it is in a relatively appropriate position and sometimes its fallen to cover one or the other eye. His hair is black with sparse intermittent silvery strands, his eyes are kind of brown but the pupil almost seems like a slit rather then a circle, and his figure is angular and lean even more so then a typical teen or preteen.

On the back of his tabi is
This:
 


    Personality:
Shinoskay can go back and forth between been the quiet guy to been the obnoxious center of everyones Ire, best described as an extroverted introvert. He is analytical, to a fault, relatively self driven, generous, always tries to accommodate requests even if he makes jokes or complaints about them, tries to keep his work, enjoys simple things almost more so then the significant things (rice is amazing, the triple chocolate fudge volcano cake with caramel and coconut shavings over the house special sweet sauce is ok... nice touch with the strawberries, ill take the rice).

he is driven by some instinct to experiment, to trial and error just to see what each variant trial will bring, and naturally with this he is curious to a fault.

    History:
Shinoskay is just another Orphan, just another child hot potato'ed from one village to the next as war and calamity sweeps each in kind off the map. First in Sound, the smaller villages were the first to fall, whoever his parents were they took him to Takigakure, both they and the village fall and he is taken in by one of the fleeing to Iwagakure... He is there just long enough to learn the principles of chakra before they too become under siege and quickly destroyed...

Another fleeing family take him and a few other Village orphans on to Sunagakure and here his training continues. He started with Doton Jutsu and so like a first language he was given the chance to continue learning that form of chakra control so as to not waste time getting him into the local villages preferred Release control.  While in Sunagakure, he had to work to not only earn enough food to live but also to pay for his shinobi training and just to be allowed to stay in the village and so he helped the local ninja shop by cleaning and keeping sharp the tools, puppets, and any furnaces used for production.

He finally gets some proper time at the academy but they are so full of orphans with all manners of mixed release knowledge that his class is too overwhelmed for  any real instruction and direction. Like so many other orphans he ends up having a slower education and by the time he is permitted to learn any real jutsu the village begins annex preparations and most of his classmates form up to leave to Konoha.

And so, Now into Konoha.

    Likes: Everyones mom, tasty food, jokes, experiment, anything someone worked hard on
    Dislikes: Everyones mom, intrusions, when someone forces there ideals on someone else, bullies, when one person destroys someone elses hard work without permission, injustice, unfairness

   

Ninja Traits



    Rank: Academy Student
    Village: Konohagakure no Sato
    Element(s): Doton
    Specialties:
    Clan:
Kensei:
 


   

Stats



    Health:5
    Chakra:10
    Stamina:5 (bl +10) (15)
    Speed:5 (bl +10) (15)
    Strength:5

   

The Player



   Other Characters: None

    Roleplay Sample:
While sitting at a diner, jack contemplated to himself 'I cannot serve Kanoha, how could I? They do not understand the nin-do, shinobi are meant to be tools whether against each other or for some other purpose but Kanoha wants to rally up and stop another village that understands what it takes to raise a shinobi? I cannot serve Kanoha.' He had thought this often but this time was different... this time he felt ready to really act on it.

In the night, Shinobi are most active and so he packed his things and made way into the crowds during the day when the markets were most active. 'Funny, one of their ridiculous attempts to stimulate their economy will become the same reason they will fail to see what is happening to them. I cant be the only one leaving, there will probably be others who will also use the market to sneak out of this mess.'

When the time came, it was pretty easy, first jack made a point to relieve myself so I wouldn't have to stop any time soon and reveal anything that could give away my identity. the deserter moved into the market with a small sack while wearing some of his normal clothes. 'There was a sale on fish, thats fine I can fill my belly before making my way out and buying a few things will make me look more innocuous.' he thought about how one of the few things he was going to miss was the food, 'the food is actually kind of decent here... well I can enjoy it again when I help Kirigakure raid and destroy the city, maybe afterword we can capture and force the surviving cooks to make this delicious food for better village.'

"One of those, please" 'bagh, pleasantries' "Thank you, looks delicious", 'I bet people dont put on fake smiles in Kirigakure... I can totally tell this guy is nervous, why do I feel like he is looking past me though'.
 
'Hey, that guy has a sack similar to mine, wouldnt that be funny if he was another deserter filling their belly before making for Kirigakure as well. We can keep each other company while on the road, rant to each other about how foolish this village is and maybe even exchange a few jutsu Ideas. Ha, wouldn't that be nice.' he felt there was something slightly off but couldnt put his thumb on it, he was too busy eating and thinking about getting out of the village.

Wasnt there another sale today on some special konoha protective seals? he heared Konoha is famous for these seals, he felt it would be a good idea to show them to Kirigakure so to steal what little advantage Konoha may have and give it to the better village for the invasion. 'Oh, that guy is going the same way as me, there must be a sale then. I hope they have something cool looking, I dont want to bring some silly froo froo flower looking seal to a real Shinobi Village like Kirigakure.'

he noticed it was starting to clear out and the merchents were making their way out... he didnt see any unique seals but they were cheap so jack grabbed a few, he smiled when he saw the other guy grab a few too just before jack lost sight of him 'so he must be another deserter, I better get going before I have to wait in this place another day.'

'Ah, the gate, and just my luck I happen to be leaving next to a large caravan so they wont look twice at me.' "where is this caravan going?" its that guy from earlier, 'great, I will try to approach him tomorrow to strike up some conversation, I dont want to be overheard by any patrols so we should clear the watch line sometime before midday tomorrow and I can free talk to him then.' he was so caught up in his thoughts that he didnt hear them say where they were going... 'owell, I can break off later if I need to. So many people here with small bags like mine.'

We cleared the gate, jack barely got a glance, easy peasy, 'Kirigakure is going to love using this to get in.' when he looked over at the other guy he saw the man now has a headband on. Jack felt confused and concerned by this, what if the patrols saw the head band. 'I wonder if he put a missing nin scratch in it yet, too soon buddy, maybe I actually shouldn't talk to him.'

Its was getting dark, he started feeling the need to relieve his bowels even though he made a point to use the restroom before he left. 'that fish went right through me.' Jack wondered if it was safe to sneak off, when he made a look around he couldnt help but notice the other guy was no were to be seen. he makes a nod to someone looking his way before making way to some bushes for privacy, 'the fish must have been bad, just my luck.'

The place was in a small clearing but it was surrounded by bushes, because of the cargo and the fire it was also nearly impossible to see into the bush line. he felt thankful he didnt have to go very far as he felt his need to release was very urgent. he just start to open up his clothing while getting into position when he heard a slight rustling in the bushes near him....

*the unspoken memories of a dead traitorous deserters last day*[/color][/b]


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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Sun Feb 11, 2018 8:57 pm

Can you do my eyes a favor and fix the color code?

Aside from that, let's get to it. Underneath 'Clan', you list which one you would like to join, I'd imagine the custom one you just made

Going to need at least 3-4 sentences about your personality, can't just leave it blank I'm afraid.

For likes/dislikes we try to have a 5/5 ratio, so please add 2+ more likes and 4+ dislikes. These can be most anything, although Everyone's Mom seems a bit weird.

Also, your RP sample should be one of the choices from the following:
"-A group of civilian children have been kidnapped. Either role play rescuing them and taking care of the abductor or abducting said children and holding them for ransom.

-A guarded caravan is forced to stop due to a broken wheel in a territory famous for rogue ninja activity. Role play either guarding the contents of the caravan against bandits or role play the bandit leading the attack on the caravan.

-Sometimes ninja defect a village. Role play either defecting a village to embark on the path of a Missing Ninja or role play the loyal village ninja that stops him/her.

Do not use actual village names in your sample as this might interfere with already existing site canon."

Finally, if your char is that intent on going to Kirigakure, my suggestion is to start there and add the details of your defection in your history. Otherwise, you're just askin a MN looking for easy kills to pick you off.

Give it a bump when you're ready for me to take another look

Oh right, and for gender you should remove the ?



Give me honorable enemies rather than ambitious ones, and I'll sleep more easily by night.
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Fame : -172
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Doton
Bloodline : ???
Ryo : 200
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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:24 pm

to my understanding, the rp sample is an ooc demonstration from me, does anything I put in that really matter outside of the required writing criteria?

for clan, I can either start with yakushi or i can start 'clanless' because as an academy student it really doesnt matter. I was waiting to see which was hit first, the char or the clan, so I suppose I will change that to clanless unless my bloodline and clan are approved by the time I get around to editing that part.

shit, hella thought I put something in personality... woops...
hey, cant he just be a soulless ninja machine without a personality? thats a thing, right? *searching* shit, even robo naruto had some personality....

lol, no seriously I will get that fixed in the edit.

I was hoping to pan out likes and dislikes in play, I guess I can throw some generic shit in there for now though.

the question mark was an androgeny joke.

why would I want to go to kirigakure? thats just the rp writing sample of some random write up of some random random.


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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:31 pm

If you read underneath the character creation guidelines, it lists the aforementioned RP samples.

Didn't know your clan was still a WIP, then stick clanless and discover your clan later on. Still waitin' on personality and everything, try not to bump it again til you get everything sorted out



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Home Village :
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Element(s) : Doton
Bloodline : ???
Ryo : 200
100%


PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:34 pm

well, its only a WIP if a mod says it needs more edits...

however, a mod has yet to say approved after the last edits.

umm, yes, I am aware... I used one of the criteria samples for my demonstration.


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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:37 pm

Well that sample is really used more for if the starting char is going MN, but I'm still gonna need color code/personality/likes/dislikes to be fixed please



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Fame : -172
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Doton
Bloodline : ???
Ryo : 200
100%


PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Mon Feb 12, 2018 1:54 pm

yep, I am sick right now but I will get to them.

the color code is from the site default(i think) so what would be an ideal color code?


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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Mon Feb 12, 2018 6:40 pm

The color code was bleeding, meaning it was getting everywhere that it shouldn't. The majority of it is fine now, so just focus on your personality/likes/dislikes and bump when you're ready



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Element(s) : Doton
Bloodline : ???
Ryo : 200
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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Mon Feb 12, 2018 7:48 pm

good to hear, ya, I am working on that in another tab Smile


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Bloodline : ???
Ryo : 200
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PostSubject: Re: Shinoskay   Mon Feb 12, 2018 8:01 pm

ok, done.


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