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PostSubject: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Sun Jan 14, 2018 1:31 am

Name: Centipede mask (the mask of the forgotten pain)
Appearance:
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The Mask is 30cm long 15cm wide. The mask is made of chakra and the pure purple hatred turning into flesh and cells forming over his left eye 

Backstory:Small sessions where akihisa remembers or forces himself to remember his grandmother ad how she was not actually loving like how he convince himself but she beat him.
 AKihisa got this mask when he was back in suna when his mind cracked and when he murdered his two peers back then he could not have done that without the use of his mask. The event started with his peers bullying him like usually and they brought up something about his grandmother which cracked him his mask flared and it appeared making the students fear him he then used his chakra to create a tentacle and pierce the boys with red hot tentacles. (ATM he does not have the tentacles). The tentacles are self atomated (meaning they have their own mind their one goal is to protect there user.) The mask was locked away in his mind along with the beatings he received from his grandmother's his mask emerged when he met a suna loyaltist. 

The reason it is made of flesh and its over his left eye is he was in a steel beam incident which pierced his left eye causing his body to store chakra into his eye. when the mask appeared it appeared over his left eye regenerated it and changed it.

Health: 100
Special Abilities: The mask allows the user to layer his chakra around his eyes and go into a state where they are more or less not sane. This allows all genjutsu lower than 50 power to affect him.  So basically the mask uses akihisa anger to create a stronger him where he uses his hate to amplify his chakra unsealing the chakra he had before he made a mental barrier.

Price: 6k ryo?
Character Specific:Akihisa Grim
Bonus Requirements: N/A


Name: Akihisa Grim
                                                     Title:  Poverty Kage
[18:40:30] Komon Hyuuga <3 : All hail the povertykage Lordgrim
[18:40:35] Princess Love <3 : povertykage wow

[12:35:05] Mo-ri Jin : You can't intimidate me
[12:35:11] Mo-ri Jin : Only that woman can
[12:35:55] LordGrim : who sam?
[12:36:04] Mo-ri Jin : Mhm


[18:44:23] Ulrich Morstrev : On another note, Qur all but admitted he enjoys playing with Balls. I think he's still coming on to you





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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Mon Jan 15, 2018 12:24 am

bump


Name: Akihisa Grim
                                                     Title:  Poverty Kage
[18:40:30] Komon Hyuuga <3 : All hail the povertykage Lordgrim
[18:40:35] Princess Love <3 : povertykage wow

[12:35:05] Mo-ri Jin : You can't intimidate me
[12:35:11] Mo-ri Jin : Only that woman can
[12:35:55] LordGrim : who sam?
[12:36:04] Mo-ri Jin : Mhm


[18:44:23] Ulrich Morstrev : On another note, Qur all but admitted he enjoys playing with Balls. I think he's still coming on to you



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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Mon Jan 15, 2018 12:49 pm

Where's the coding on this?





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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Mon Jan 15, 2018 1:01 pm

sorry xy was just hurrying there it is (Fixed)


Name: Akihisa Grim
                                                     Title:  Poverty Kage
[18:40:30] Komon Hyuuga <3 : All hail the povertykage Lordgrim
[18:40:35] Princess Love <3 : povertykage wow

[12:35:05] Mo-ri Jin : You can't intimidate me
[12:35:11] Mo-ri Jin : Only that woman can
[12:35:55] LordGrim : who sam?
[12:36:04] Mo-ri Jin : Mhm


[18:44:23] Ulrich Morstrev : On another note, Qur all but admitted he enjoys playing with Balls. I think he's still coming on to you



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Clan Element : Being Too Sweet
Bloodline : Conqueror
Ryo : 212700
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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Mon Jan 15, 2018 6:21 pm

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"The Mask is 30cm long 15" What's the 15?

Of course, the mask can't be made from chakra because then this would be a jutsu. Chakra could have aided in the formation of the item but it can't be pure chakra.

Remove the WIP from the title

Could do with you rewording the ability to make a bit more sense, throw in some of those juicy buzzwords we love. 

Also, as a word of advice, I would recommend having anything that boosts your stats be a small, discrete item rather than a mask that is going to be directly targeted.





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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Mon Jan 15, 2018 7:19 pm

Hey xy what ability and also what should i have the mask do then (just asking not trying to be rude)


Name: Akihisa Grim
                                                     Title:  Poverty Kage
[18:40:30] Komon Hyuuga <3 : All hail the povertykage Lordgrim
[18:40:35] Princess Love <3 : povertykage wow

[12:35:05] Mo-ri Jin : You can't intimidate me
[12:35:11] Mo-ri Jin : Only that woman can
[12:35:55] LordGrim : who sam?
[12:36:04] Mo-ri Jin : Mhm


[18:44:23] Ulrich Morstrev : On another note, Qur all but admitted he enjoys playing with Balls. I think he's still coming on to you



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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Yesterday at 12:53 am

bumpy


Name: Akihisa Grim
                                                     Title:  Poverty Kage
[18:40:30] Komon Hyuuga <3 : All hail the povertykage Lordgrim
[18:40:35] Princess Love <3 : povertykage wow

[12:35:05] Mo-ri Jin : You can't intimidate me
[12:35:11] Mo-ri Jin : Only that woman can
[12:35:55] LordGrim : who sam?
[12:36:04] Mo-ri Jin : Mhm


[18:44:23] Ulrich Morstrev : On another note, Qur all but admitted he enjoys playing with Balls. I think he's still coming on to you



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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Yesterday at 1:06 am

fixed xy


Name: Akihisa Grim
                                                     Title:  Poverty Kage
[18:40:30] Komon Hyuuga <3 : All hail the povertykage Lordgrim
[18:40:35] Princess Love <3 : povertykage wow

[12:35:05] Mo-ri Jin : You can't intimidate me
[12:35:11] Mo-ri Jin : Only that woman can
[12:35:55] LordGrim : who sam?
[12:36:04] Mo-ri Jin : Mhm


[18:44:23] Ulrich Morstrev : On another note, Qur all but admitted he enjoys playing with Balls. I think he's still coming on to you



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Bloodline : Conqueror
Ryo : 212700
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PostSubject: Re: (the mask of the forgotten pain)    Today at 1:03 pm

Sorry for the wait, mate.

Quote :
The mask is made of chakra and the pure purple hatred turning into flesh and cells forming over his left eye


Sort the chakra part out there, maybe expand more on the 'flesh' and its properties such as being squishy to the touch or something along those lines.

As for abilities just peruse other items or watch a few shows until an idea hits you with its brilliance that can't be ignored. I'm assuming with the one you have at the moment then you intended to say any genjutsu lower than 50 don't affect him, but that won't fly either since it's automatically blocking a fair proportion of the spec.

If you're having difficulty finding a better ability feel free to put this item on hold and work on something else or send me a PM and I'll work on it with you without clogging the topic.





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