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PostSubject: Nukite,The Sword Hand   Sun Jan 14, 2018 3:00 am

Name: Nukite,The Sword Hand
Element: -
Rank: B/A/S
Spec Type: Tai
Backstory: A continuation for striking technique for targeting vitals. Made for those who use their body as literal weapons opposed to its Taijutsu based brother.


Appearance: The user takes the stance of Nukite and uses their hands as swords.
Handseals: -
Duration:
Cooldown: 1+ x amount of uses Used)
Range: Striking Distance (Arms Length)
Power: -
Speed: -
Health: -
Stat Boosts: +40/60/70 Str and Spd
What it does:

Cutting into an enemy... The user narrows the striking surface when attacking a foe, aiming at vital points like the throat or for more major areas containing veins. The user is essentially using the side of their hand (singular only meaning one hand can be used) as they would a sword, causing their hand to become a weapon. In place of strength , the cutting motion is instead treated as sharpness . Boosts only last for the movements only. If the user continues to use the sword hand one after another, it adds onto the cool down of the technique but only a max of three can be used. So if the user uses it three times in a row, the cool down would be 4 posts. If the user performs this technique once and a post goes by, the technique auto goes on a 2 post cool down. Continued use of this technique (learning) causes it to go up by tiers until it reaches S rank.


Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 3,000 , with each rank the word count is lessened by 500
Action Cost: 30/40/50
Mastery: N
Bonus Requirements: Must know Nukite, The Spear Hand (A) rank
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PostSubject: Re: Nukite,The Sword Hand   Sun Jan 14, 2018 10:14 am

How I'm interpreting this with the cooldown system as is is that you can essentially never have a cooldown if you just keep using it one after another, since you don't actually state that a particular tier goes on cooldown after you use it. That'll need to be sorted out. Also, with how many of these you seem to want, simply saying '3 Nukite in a row' could do you over if 'The Spear Hand' starts to count for the CD of this jutsu. Something to mull over.

Can the user the same level of nukite on both of their hands at the same time? A lil' S-Rank sword handy action, or is that a negative?

Also, despite technically using this, you're turning your hand into a weapon; your actual body rather than using a tool itself, so for that reason itself I'd prefer this ha the taijutsu specialty, maybe combined with weaponry if you so desire but it doesn't need it. May as well just have the wordcount to learn be a flat 3k/4k/5k.





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PostSubject: Re: Nukite,The Sword Hand   Sun Jan 14, 2018 12:55 pm

simply saying '3 Nukite in a row' could do you over if 'The Spear Hand' starts to count for the CD of this jutsu.

Can't happen. Two different techs that don't proc the same CD.

Can the user the same level of nukite on both of their hands at the same time? A lil' S-Rank sword handy action, or is that a negative?

Assumed that saying "hand" meant only one, but to clarify no its only one hand.

May as well just have the wordcount to learn be a flat 3k/4k/5k.

Its set similar to the other one minus 500 wc because having 3k/3k/4k makes no sense
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PostSubject: Re: Nukite,The Sword Hand   Yesterday at 8:10 pm

Can't happen. Two different techs that don't proc the same CD. 

Two different techs, yet they're both nukite. It's easier to nip it in the bud before it becomes an issue later on.

Also clarify that if a 'Nukite Sword Hand' isn't used for a full post after the jutsu is activated then it goes onto cooldown so you can't just space the three out to be at ludicrous intervals.

If you go w/ the flat 3/4/5 then there's only a 1k difference between each tier to learn. ie you do 3k, you have the  lowest rank, then you do another 1k and you get the next rank. Ygm?





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PostSubject: Re: Nukite,The Sword Hand   Yesterday at 9:44 pm

It having a difference of 500 shows proficiency in the skill exactly how the other is set up which was the intention.

The first point would be like saying if you have two rasengan techniques but they only different is one word between them but they count as the same tech and thus have the same cool down. That doesn't really make sense does it?

The technique already goes over the intervals for using it, so you can't use if once amd wait. If you use if once it goes on a two post postcool down after that use. You have to use it in rapid succession or it auto goes on cool down.



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