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Aryll Hyuuga
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:10 am

I'd prefer a solid speed stat like 70 or 100 or chakra stat or w/e
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:28 am

I put 100 since thats the same speed the weapon reforms into the users hand.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Fri Jan 12, 2018 6:48 am

The dimensions of the blade are still unclear, it seems like you're saying it cuts in a 100 meter range (Also you say radius and add a 50 so this attack is in the shape of an oval, not a wedge?) Give hard dimensions as to what the blade expands to, and then you don't need to list the range of the attack. If it's just one swing, I suggest you remove the bit about the tech ending once it reaches 100m, since that would mean the tech ends as soon as it finishes expanding.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Sat Jan 13, 2018 8:45 pm

The bade is 100 meters in width and 50 in height (so from the wedge 25 meters down and 25 up). Once the crescent blade of that size is created at a speed of 100 then it can travel 100 meters in the direction which the user threw the blade. Essentially the user is throwing the crescent blade 100 meters ahead of them, or wherever its thrown.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Mon Jan 15, 2018 6:12 am

"Width and height depend on whether the blade is swung horizontally or vertical"

May I suggest that you just make yourself able to specify the dimensions of the blade upon creation, up to 100 long by 50 wide by 25 thick or something like that. It'll make things much clearer. Also state that the blade retains the stats (Sharpness/health) of the original blade used for the tech, but can't use weapon abilities during this tech
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:35 am

Thats a good idea. 
Also the last portion of the explanation already had that the crescent blade had the sharpness and health of the sword casting it, but i further elaborated some more.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:09 pm

Alright, last thing. 

"Once either of these happen, the user's sword will materialize back into their hand(s)"

This tech doesn't have S/T, and this is worded as a teleport. You can have the sword return to your hands as it reforms, but if you don't have S/T, you're not getting a teleporting sword
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Thu Jan 18, 2018 1:18 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Final Slash   Thu Jan 18, 2018 6:38 pm

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