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Hikari Namikaze <3
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PostSubject: Hoshigakure battle armour   Sat Nov 18, 2017 8:23 pm

Name: Hoshigakure battle armour
Appearance:
Outfit 1:
 
outfit 2:
 
Outfit 3:
 
Outfit 4:
 
Outfit 5:
 
outfit 6:
 
(On top of which, each one comes with a hood, shoes and gloves. Making this clothing cover head to toe.)
Backstory:
Excuse me while I god mod a few characters, (That being said, pretty much all of this did happen off screen.)
Hikari's reaction to becoming a chunin:
 

Hikari's reaction to becoming a Jounin:
 

Hikari always thought that the standard Jackets for being a jounin was realllllly ugly. as such, the Jounin spent a lot of her free time creating a new hoshi uniform that would look decent, and make Hoshi stand out from other soldiers on the battlefield. While she was at it, and she played around with her Holy seal jutsu, to enhance the armour to go beyond the normal limits.



Health:100
Cooldown: 3 post after the effect has ended.
Drawback:
Duration: 5 post
Stat Boosts: n/a
What it does: By infusing holy seals into clothing (Namely, the holy seal of the earth) Hikari was able to increase the durability of the clothing she created for a short time. While wearing this armour, the user can spend 50 Ap and make the sign of confrontation, by doing so, the user can  change the health of this armour from 100, to whatever their chakra stat is (capped at 200). While this is happening though, the user can not use chakra suppression, and the cloth starts to Hum slightly (Making them easily detectable by sound.) The User does not need to keep the sign of confrontation while holding this, but must continue to pay the 50 AP per post while this is active.

Price: 7k Ryo
Character Specific: Hoshi Shinobi of Jounin Rank or higher, or take from one.
Bonus Requirements: (Outfit one is limited to just Hikari Namikaze)




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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Sun Nov 19, 2017 10:29 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Tue Nov 21, 2017 4:09 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Tue Nov 21, 2017 10:03 pm

Hi.

Wanting to become invisible for 5 posts? 3 post cooldown? No range on which the seal's power stops? You can essentially just suppress your chakra, go invisible, and lodge a kunai in some poor shinobi's throat without him standing a chance unless he has chakra vision? I think not.

In all honesty, I'd just change the ability altogether to something more fitting to an item rather than seals you can just make as a jutsu. However, if you decide not to, I'll check the revised ability.





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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Tue Nov 21, 2017 10:36 pm

I would like to keep it on here, but will just get rid of this if requested. So.... Pardon me, I am a little bit out of it right now, you say
@Xyxer wrote:

No range on which the seal's power stops?

Sorry, a little bit confused about that. Are you saying that you would like a range on the invisibility?

How the jutsu works is that is that it basicly bends light around the person, so it doesn't really effect the person looking at it, but the light around the user. As such, I feel like having it be that if you are within X number of meters of the user, you are immune rather than if you are X number of meters away, you are immune.

[qoute="Xyxer"]"You can essentially just suppress your chakra, go invisible, and lodge a kunai in some poor shinobi's throat without him standing a chance unless he has chakra vision? I think not."[/qoute]

Once again, willing to make an edit here, however,  I do feel like you are missing a major part of a shinobi's arsenal.

Most shinobi of Jounin rank or higher have a Skill known as Experienced fighter that would allow one to hear the user as she traveled as long as she was within 50 meters of said person.


As such, I would like to continue working on this, and attempt to make this ballance.

(Sorry if I sound like I am being mean in this. Long stressful day, and I think I might have a concussion)


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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Tue Nov 21, 2017 10:47 pm

A range on which it's effective, yup. There's been an issue as of late with people trying to be "hidden" even as they kill someone, as long as it was done by hand/weapon.

You pretty much admit that it's a jutsu rather than an ability, which is why I feel it'd be more suited in that form. It'll also cost more than 20 AP if you want this as a simple ability.

Having the invisibility stop working within X range is pretty much what I suggested. If someone's 2 meters away from the user within a 10 meter "immunity" zone, they'd still be immune.

If we were to make weapon/armour abilities that completely cripple anyone's chances if they're below Jounin, the power on the site would change pretty darn quick. As well as that, I'm pretty sure all you'd have to do to compliment this is make sandals that don't create a sound when crunching grass or something of that ilk.

If you want to make this a part of the armour you're allowed to, but it won't be as good as you desire, hence my suggestion.





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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Tue Nov 21, 2017 10:55 pm

Ok, I think I will take you up on your offer then, thank you!

(Please don't archive this yet though, because I might try to make something that is an armour as this as its base.)


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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Fri Nov 24, 2017 5:30 pm

Made edits and ready for this to be looked at again (Probably going to get denied, but I figured I would try)


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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Sun Jan 14, 2018 10:03 pm

Not too sure if you're still working on this.

The potential of a bonus +100 health to armour is way too much, feel free to tone it down and I'll check it out again, much sooner than it took this time. A 5 post duration for bonus health is also too much since that'll often be the entirety of a fight, if you exclude OOC posts.





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PostSubject: Re: Hoshigakure battle armour   Sun Jan 14, 2018 10:24 pm

....

I think I wrote this during my concussion, Cause I Recall the first few post, but not the after stuff....

I'm probably going to completely rework this, cause yeah, I agree with you. Give me a few days, and if I don't respond, feel free to archive this.


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